FF Kuch Iss Tarah (MP) Sapna picture pg 99.

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#681

Lol yeah I want him gone.... anyways no need the terrorize the old man I'll put up the epilogue soon. Me going to bed now bubye.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#682

Bye Bye,,,,,

Me find ways to terrorise Budda.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#683

great ending Munee...loved it!
Finally everyone happy
and Ali and Saima also gonna have a baby...so kewl😃..they deserve all the happiness🤗

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GratefulDead

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Posted: 16 years ago

#684

Muneee...Thanks for such a wonderful and engaging FF...Loved the part where Milind is pampering Pregnant Chi..how i wanted to see it in the show...atleast i get to read it in this FF...Sapna ali part is awesomely written...Im looking forward to an epilogue..

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tweety_me14

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Posted: 16 years ago

#685

Hey the 1st doggie pic is really cute! :-)

Im very fond of dogs- as long as they don't lick or bite! Lol...

Btw Munee, I commented on the last part :-) Its on page 90..Guess you missed it..!

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: tweety_me14
Hey the 1st doggie pic is really cute! :-)

Im very fond of dogs- as long as they don't lick or bite! Lol...

Btw Munee, I commented on the last part :-) Its on page 90..Guess you missed it..!

No darling was planning on commenting on all when I got home today didn't miss it at all.😊

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#687

Epilogue.

The hospital was the same that Milind had visited exactly twenty two months earlier, the corridors were the same though they had painted the walls blue the previous year. The doctor was the same the situation the same only this time the patient was different. This time it was Ali who paced the corridor in a state of frenzy while Saima went through the excrutiatingly painful task of bringing his children in the world. Her muffled sobs and whimpers were audible outside the room where she displayed remarkable courage of braving wave after wave of torment. Only for Saima the torment was double the amount since she was expecting twins. "Ali aisey hii chalta raha to ghiss jaayega" Milind had remarked as Ali tirelessly walked the entire length of the corridor once again. "Yaar itni der kyun lag rahi hai?" Ali had demanded to know as if Milind knew exactly why the little beings failed to grace the world at jet speed. "Haan mujhko hii to bata ker gaye hain dono kitni der main aayengey" he had remarked irritated at Ali's constant pacing and had made him sit beside him on the wooden bench. A heart wrenching scream from Saima had announced the arrival of his son who cried out loud much to Ali's relief. His daughter was quick to follow not wasting much time in her mother's womb she too shrieked out her guts making her presence known. Ali had said a silent prayer and was about to leave to call the mualvi when Milind volunteered to since the mosque was at walking distance he returned soon with the elderly figure.The nurse had handed them the little bundles of joy their tiring exercise had left them worn out and they dozed off conveniently in their father and uncle's arms. Ali looked on stupefied at the gifts God had given him "Congratulations it's a baby boy and and a girl" the nurse had informed him smiling. Ali held his daughter tenderly she was a miniature form of Saima milky skin, shapely lips, perfect nose with thick hair. As he caressed her cheek she had groggily opened her eyes to meet his reticent ones. It was a brief moment they shared as she stared at him he noticed she had his eyes. Kissing her softly he handed her to Milind who had finished examining his son handing him to the proud father he certainly had taken after him wavy hair, wheatish complexion those high cheek bones. Saima had been treated and shifted to her room where the small party congregated to watch the mualvi chant the azaan (muslim call for prayers) in each child's ears. Milind had given him some money as a token for his services and they both had left though before leaving Milind handed Saima a gold bracelet. She had looked at him questioningly when he told her "Behen key haan pehla bacha ho to tohfa detey hain na waisey bhi tu meri behen pehley hai bhabhi baad main." He had smiled and Ali had helped her wear it she had thanked Milind who had waved it off smiling at them.Saima despite her aching body was eager to hold her children in her arms. Ali had handed both of them to her as she sat embracing them a tear had dropped from her eye on her son's cheek and she had kissed it away softly. "Ab kuch baaqi rehta hai?" Ali had whispered sitting beside her "Haan" she had whispered back resting against him gazing at him fondly. "Kiya?" he had asked smiling "Aapka umer bhar ka saath" she had replied and he had kissed her lips with love.

Five years later

"Zahra catch" Preeti had thrown the plastic ball to her as they played on the greens in Ali's lawn. It was a Sunday and as custom the Shah family spent their day at Ali's house. Preeti, Aryan, Zahra and Zaryab entertained themselves on the lawns while their fathers sat monitoring them. Premlata, Saima and Prachi were busy in the kitchen cooking a sumptuous feast for the afternoon meal. "Tuu ney Khanna ko phone kiya tha woh nayi Rolls Royce key liye" Milind had asked Ali who sat sipping on fresh lemonade. "Haan keh raha tha agley mahiney aa jaayeigi" he had told Milind who had nodded his head. Over the years both of them had progressed in their respective businesses. Milind's hotels were widely acclaimed and he had come to own a chain of them across the globe. While Ali's car parts factory had bloomed into a full blown industry and he now reaped the rewards of his hard work. So much so that all the cars at Milind's hotels were sent to his garages for repair moreso Ali was the one who advised Milind on the brand of cars Milind needed to make available at his hotels for pick and drop services. On the home front both led blissful lives with their loving wives and children. Over the course of time many changes had taken place Ali's mother and Bua had passed away the blow had been too much for Ali and Prachi respectively but they had a supportive family who took care of them in their grief. Milind on Premlata's insistence had tried to trace Alaap she was a mother first and foremost and for her Alaap was still her son. Much to Milind's dismay even before he could get on with the investigation he had come to know about Alaap's untimely death in a fatal encounter with the police. Suyesha's father was a wellknown Don famous for his corruption and terrorist activities on one such occasion when the police had raided one of his hideouts Alaap had been arrested along with a few close friends of the underworld leader.In an attempt to flee he had been shot dead and thus his wasted existence came to a sad end. Premlata had been heartbroken but Milind's care and attention had helped her get over the grief of losing her young son. Bobby had completed his business studies and had taken over the reins of Shah Industries. Even though he was new at the business front Milind's skillful guidance had helped him turn into a budding entrepreneur one that would've made Inder proud had he lived. Soumya had married Ranbir one of Ali's close friends and owner of countless Honda showrooms in Singapore it had been love at first sight for them. Ranbir's parents had flown in from Singapore and after meeting the family had been thoroughly satisfied of his choice giving their assent to the match. Six months after they were married with much aplomb and now resided in Singapore. Premlata had narrated to Prachi the relationship Inder had shared with Milind prior to his death explaining in detail the way both had helped each, Inder in his life and Milind after Inder's demise. Prachi's heart had been filled with newfound respect for her husband. "Aapney mujhey pehley kyun nahin bataya aapkey or Papa key rishtey key baarey main?" she had inquired teary eyed. "Bata ker kiya paata Prachi?" he had tried to reason with her. "Main aaj tak dukhi hoti rahi keh Papa ney aapko kabhi jaana nahin Milind per aaj khushi iss baat kii hai keh unhain bhi aap ker yaqeen tha jaisey aaj mujhey hai" she had told him and he had kissed her velvet lips. "Kuch baatein waqt per chor deni chahiyen Prachi aaj jaan gayi ho to khush ho uss waqt nahin jaana uss main bhi uper waaley kii marzi thi" he had assuaged her and she had hugged him in gratitude her husband was someone she had found her world in.

"Zaryab wahaan mat jao dekho phisal jaogey" eleven year old Preeti had warned Ali's five year old son who had turned out to be the naughtiest of the lot. As expected of him he had not paid any heed to her and slipped into a patch of wet grass. Before any of the men could move even a finger the children had scampered to where Zaryab lay motionless. "Zaryab kiya hua tumko?" this was Preeti patting his cheeks worriedly. She had grown into a fine young girl smart and beautiful despite her unconventional looks she caused quite a few heads to turn which made Milind fret sometimes. She was the apple of his eye his first born he had known love in its purest form through her they shared a deep bond. Even today if Milind was unhappy or disturbed she would be the first one to gauge his anguish and would then bring him ice cream chocolate always. As they would eat it together she would lighten up his mood by talking to him sharing her activities and thoughts and by the end of it he always felt relaxed. Watching her paint skilfully he would sometimes shake his head in disbelief it seemed like yesterday that she had been born and already she talked about her latest crushes with her mother what was the world coming to. "Zaryab bhaiyya utho kaprey kharab ho gaye to mumma chocolate nahin deygi" this was five year old Zahra being his twin she knew him better than the other two. With time she had grown more beautiful her milky skin had turned pink her eyes more brighter and hair more lustrous. She was her father's girl and enjoyed spending time with him curled up on his lap she would often fall asleep as he watched soccer on tv and they shared popcorn from the same bowl. "Zaryab utho jaldi dekho main huun na yahaan tumharey saath" eight year old Aryan had held his hand out to the little boy who lay sprawled on the ground. Aryan was Milind's pride in him he saw himself, they were friends rather than father son a relationship Milind had always wanted to share with Baba but never could. He had though fulfilled his dream through his son they talked about anything and everything Aryan shared his secrets with him and often if he was entagled in some problem he'd seek Milind's help on it. They played soccer together and of late they'd been exercising together too. His shock of curls fell on his forehead and he raked a hand through them now and then, he was street smart and possessed the same anger, pride, fierce determination and will that his father owned. Zaryab had placed his hand in Aryan's and the elder one had picked him up gently straightening his collar he brushed off bits of grass off his shorts. "Kitni baar kaha hai aisey mat bhaaga ker samajhta kyun nahin... ab bhaga to lagaunga eik samjha" Aryan had swept his hair away from his forehead in irritation. Five year old Zaryab had hugged Aryan joyously as he had grown Saima had known Zaryab was another Ali in the making. He had got the same compassionate and forgiving nature as his father the only thing she had passed on to him was her eyes. His were the same colour as hers sandy green apart from that he was a carbon copy of his father.Watching from a distance Milind and Ali had smiled the next generation of the Mishras and Khans had inherited the love sincerity and unconditional support their elders had passed on to them.

The children had resumed their play and soon Naintara was beckoning them to wash up before they had lunch, after Bua's demise Naintara had stayed behind and was now engaged to Bobby, they were to be married the next month. Under Prachi and Saima's watchful eyes Naintara had transformed into a beautiful swan from the ugly duckling that she was. No one could have anticipated Bobby's love for her and it came quite as a surprise to Premlata she had thought Bobby would end up marrying someone from his social circle but was greatly relieved to hear he liked Naintara. "Thori si jhalli hai maa... per buhut achi hai" he had coaxed his mother making her smile ofcourse she knew Tara and was more than happy to have her a daughter in law. Ramu Kaka had helped the women spread the big mat on the lawn and soon it was covered with a sumptuous feast. "Mumma pata hai Zaryab bhaiyya ney kiya... kiya!!!" Zahra had instigated her mother. "Zahra kii bachi ab agar shikayat lagayi mumma ko to dekh lena saari colour pencils phenk duunga tumhari" Zaryab had threatened her his eyes blazing with fury. Before the fight could prolong Milind had seated himself between the two "Barey papa samjhayein issey mujhey na daraya kerey" Zaryab had complained to Milind who had supressed a smile. "Kyun Zahra bhai hai na kyun tang kerti ho?" he had questioned the little angel who had grinned back at him "Barey papa aapko nahin pata yeh bhi meri shikayatein lagata hai mumma sey" she had informed him in hushed tones. Watching Milind busy with them Ali had smiled his children were forever found in Mishra house not that he minded or it mattered to him. "Chachu dekho kiya khichdi paka rahey hain dono" Preeti had drawn his attention and he had ruffled her curls "Yehi to aata hai dono ko" he had answered back and both of them had burst out laughing. Aryan was busy with Saima "Chachi ab kiya Zahra or Zaryab sey chota koi nahin aayega?" he had asked her dolefully one of his classmates had recently had a baby sister and when he had gone over to play cricket at his place he had managed to see the little child. As he held her in his arms he had hoped he too could have one of those in his house Saima had looked up to see Ali watching her at the precise moment that their eyes had met he had winked at her making her blush. "Hmm waisey yeh kaam tumhari mumma hii ker sakti hai" she had conveniently diverted his attention to Prachi who was ladling out gravy for Milind. So engrossed was she in the task that she failed to listen to her comment and carried on with it Milind though had heard the statement and had looked lovingly at his wife. Their relationship had grown from strength to strength Prachi had made him understand life was beautiful and worth living each moment of it. Tucking in his food he had made up his mind to talk to Prachi about their son's wish that night.

"Dekho Aryan daant zarur brush kerna tum hamesha bhool jaatey ho, or Preeti zyada der tak mat jaagna mujhey malum hai High school musical aaney waala hai but no late nights ok" Prachi had reminded the children before they picked up their night suits and tooth brushes as it was a weekend they were to spend it next door with Zahra and Zaryab. The little kids looked forward to the weekend the entire week then they were allowed to watch tv till 10 and play before they hit the bed as the children turned to leave Milind had called out to them "Kuch bhuul rahey ho" he had questioned them. Preeti had smacked her palm on her head and had walked to a portrait of Kaajal hung in the hallway Aryan had followed her both had then changed the garland of flowers around her picture and had lit the lamp saying a small prayer. "Aaj kitni shikayatein keen meri maa sey?" Preeti had asked Aryan as they trundled across the driveway in their bedroom slippers. "Tum to aisey puch rahi ho jaisey meri to kee hii nahin hongi tum ney ... maa sirf tumhari nahin meri bhi sunti hain... samjhi" he had danced his eyes in naughtiness and Preeti had felt challenged. "Race you till the door last one's a rotten egg!" she had screamed and they both had made a dash to the door in the yard a shortcut to reach the other house. Prachi had watched her children pay their daily respects to Kaajal she had always taught both her children that Kaajal too was their mother elder to their mumma in position as she was initially wedded to their father. Milind had wanted Preeti to know about Kaajal, fulfill his first wife's wish of her daughter call her, her mother. She lay waiting for her husband in her bed when she heard him walk in and join her. Slipping his arm around her waist Milind had pulled her to him while she caressed his cheek with the back of her fingers. Hugging her to him Milind had nuzzled her neck lovingly "Hmm janab kiya baat hai buhut pyaar aa raha hai aaj" she had questioned cheerily. "Matlab roz nahin kerta pyaar?" he had feigned shock. "Bas bas zyaada naatak nahin bataiye kiya baat hai" Prachi had giggled tracing his full lips with her index finger. "Humarey betey ko kuch chahiye hum sey" he had informed her while she looked at him quizzically. "Kiya chahiye ussey pichley haftey hii to cricket kit dilaya hai ab itni jaldi mat dilaiyega ussey kuch aadatein kharab ho jayeingi uski" she had told him. "Ussey jo chahiye woh deney main time lageyga" Milind had smiled enjoying Prachi's confusion as she combed his curls lovingly. "Aisa kiya chahiye ussey?" she had asked confounded. Advancing his hand on her belly he had placed it there staring at her hazel eyes he felt her skin turn hot under his touch her eyes shining. Prachi had understood him then it wasn't that they hadn't been thinking about it it was just that they hadn't been trying very hard at it. Clasping his neck in her arms she had lifted her head to kiss his lips gently making him deepen it long for more. As if on cue his hands had worked at her night gown denuding her completely while she helped him bare himself. Placing fervent kisses on her carved figure he had made her ache for more guiding her to ultimate bliss as her body rose and fell in sync with his. As she panted heavily after their scintillating union Milind had kissed her cheek tenderly "Prachi" he had whispered and her eyes had met his "I love you" he had smiled and she had felt her eyes glisten with moisture. "Eik baat bataun" she had smiled at him and he had felt her lips on his before she had whispered back.... "I love you too."

"Good night chachi" Preeti had called to Saima as she flipped the lights close in her bedroom "Good night jaan" she had smiled before turning to her bedroom, her two monsters safely tucked in bed she had checked on Preeti and Aryan who too were ready for bed she silently tread the stairs to her bedroom wondering if Ali was awake. Saima had come to value Ali and her family more than her own life she could never thank God enough for giving him to her one of the best gifts ever to be bestowed on anyone. She reached her bedroom to find him asleep slipping in beside him she had gently kissed his forehead. "Good night" she had whispered when she had felt his arm on her smiling he had tilted his face to kiss her chin. "Bas sirf good night?" he had questioned and she had smiled "Acha chaliye aap hii bataiye or kiya chahiye" she had teased him kissing the corner of his mouth tentatively. "Buhut kuch " he had smiled pulling her closer making her smile deepen. "Tumharey bhateejey ney kuch maanga hai tumsey" he had reminded her his eyes glowing in merriment "Haan per woh to mushkil hai na" she had explained. "Kyun!" Ali had questioned in alarm making her giggle. "Merey akeley kii bas kii to baat nahin" she had answered shyly and he had laughed aloud. "Phir to madad kerni chahiye mujhey" he had murmured placing his lips on hers passionately overtaking her senses and body. She had allowed love to reign free that night letting it drown her in perfect ecstacy as Ali had made her yearn for him. As their bodies had conjoined so had their hearts throbbing in wild frenzy emitting a volcanic eruption of amour and concupiscence melting in the furnace of their love. Much later when they had relaxed considerably he had let her kiss him in gratitude "Pata hai Ali aap sab sey achey hain" she had informed him gazing in his deep eyes. "Kyun" he had smiled enjoying his appraisal. "Main jo aap sey pyaar kert i huun iss liye" she had smiled invoking one from him "Pyaar to main bhi kerta huun tum sey, kerta tha, kerta huun, kerta rahunga" he had told her. "Hamesha" she had wanted to know "Hamesha" he had promised. Happily ever after difficult but not impossible.

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#688

Originally posted by: tweety_me14
Hey Munee...!!
Thanks for the lovely update...

Firstly, thank you so much for giving us such a wonderful fan-fic...KIT has been a perfect blend of many emotions- love, passion, hatred, anger, jealousy, sacrifice, forgiveness have all been beautifully portrayed in various updates throughout your story. I have follwed this fanfic, laughed with the characters, cried with them, revelled in their joys and wished for their happiness. I really wish KIT hadn't ended, but then as they say, all good things come to an end, and so did this. It was a pleasure reading your story, and trust me, I have learnt a lot about story writing by reading your FFs! You have an amazing flair for writing, and I hope you'll continue doing so!

I want to congratulate you on successfully completing KIT! This was a masterpiece! And trust me, Im going to cherish your story for a long time to come...! Thanks for giving us such a beautiful tale of love with our favourite characters! *hugs*

Thanks a ton Upa for your lovely comments.I must thank you for being ever supportive and generous with your comments they really helped a lot. The emotions you mentioned were staple in bringing this ff to life. I've tried my best to enliven it up to the reader's standards. Thank you once again hugs and kisses for you too.

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead
Muneee...Thanks for such a wonderful and engaging FF...Loved the part where Milind is pampering Pregnant Chi..how i wanted to see it in the show...atleast i get to read it in this FF...Sapna ali part is awesomely written...Im looking forward to an epilogue..

Thank you dear I'm really glad you liked it so very much. Hope you like the epilogue too.

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: shivgauri
great ending Munee...loved it!
Finally everyone happy
and Ali and Saima also gonna have a baby...so kewl😃..they deserve all the happiness🤗

Thanks a ton Kuku everyone is happy because they deserve it... yes Ali Saima will have kids too. 😊