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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely update munee darling👏

loved it ............. the last two parts are simply amazing😳

sorry for late comment (u know the reason)😛

so michi will be living together😉

i hope they will not fight like as in show😆

plz continue soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shachi-Michi

lovely update munee darling👏

loved it ............. the last two parts are simply amazing😳

sorry for late comment (u know the reason)😛

so michi will be living together😉

i hope they will not fight like as in show😆

plz continue soon😃

Thank you Saara yes Michi will live together hmm there won't be fights though my Milsi is pretty dominating. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Munee🤗...kaisey kahun…this one too with a K?😆
well munee…went through the first 6 chapters…I must say, u'd really narrated the entire thing beautifully.

Prachi – this girl has been goin through a punishment which she doesn't really have any fault😒…I cant say I hate inder as he still cares for her though he's stil nt out of PL's death…bt I dn like him either…prachi's life has always been controlled over by her father with almost no love from her father and no wish that is hers, she's really living in a hell. Her life was already in a hell that to add more had learnt that guy her father set her up; Varun was gay(munee…I really ddn expect this🤣…I almost fell off my chair)…bt thank god there was a person with brain here…ramu kaka is a sweety pie🤗…thank god he sent away prachi from the hell..to the heaven ofcourse…to milind😳

Milind – this guy is a taxi driver haey he'l make a hawt one😍..ahem…sorry.....God knows how he manage to keep up with customers with the attitude of his😆…he has really gone thru alt…wit sukriti dyin and his father getting paralysed, one cant really be brave enuf to face everythin with courage like him😃…so hats off to him….he's a true fighter…I loved the way he looked at up the sky and told ali that "haan aasmaan se aayenge" on seein the emirates flight…that moment, my mind went t shachi☺️…dunno y…bt that was really dreamy😍…aasmaan se eik pari hi to aarahee hai😳

Michi's first encounter was full of actions😆..(with milind aur koi action na ho…aisa to ho hi nahi sakta haina?😉😆) but the aftermath was cute too😆…he's demandin for his 70 rupees was hilarious…prachi is shooo innocent…no wonder he retrieve his hands back wen she said "kahaan se laaun"😆

Oh wow, prachi's gonna be stayin with him nw…he can have a free nurse for baba..prachi will take good care of both of them now…and also, the love that she'd been craving for, m sure she's gonna b gettin it from there itself😳

continue soon munee.🤗🤗..cant wait for the next part😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Munee🤗...kaisey kahun'this one too with a K?😆 Yes I'm following Maiyya's obsession.😆
well munee'went through the first 6 chapters'I must say, u'd really narrated the entire thing beautifully.
Thank you sweetheart.😊

Prachi ' this girl has been goin through a punishment which she doesn't really have any fault😒'I cant say I hate inder as he still cares for her though he's stil nt out of PL's death'bt I dn like him either'prachi's life has always been controlled over by her father with almost no love from her father and no wish that is hers, she's really living in a hell. Her life was already in a hell that to add more had learnt that guy her father set her up; Varun was gay(munee'I really ddn expect this🤣'I almost fell off my chair)'bt thank god there was a person with brain here'ramu kaka is a sweety pie🤗'thank god he sent away prachi from the hell..to the heaven ofcourse'to milind😳

Hmm Inder is a complex character I'll try explaining him in detail after I get some stuff done with Michi first. Prachi has had a rather sheltered and shelled life, she'll learn to live in the true sense with Milind away from her father. Ramu kaka had to help her how could he not he considers her his own.

Milind ' this guy is a taxi driver haey he'l make a hawt one😍..ahem'sorry.....God knows how he manage to keep up with customers with the attitude of his😆'he has really gone thru alt'wit sukriti dyin and his father getting paralysed, one cant really be brave enuf to face everythin with courage like him😃'so hats off to him'.he's a true fighter'I loved the way he looked at up the sky and told ali that "haan aasmaan se aayenge" on seein the emirates flight'that moment, my mind went t shachi☺️'dunno y'bt that was really dreamy😍'aasmaan se eik pari hi to aarahee hai😳

Hahaha yeah he'll make a hot taxi driver the occupation struck to me when i saw Milind in the khaki suit at Sumo's school perfect driver outfit.... 😆 Customers well they damn care of his attitude as he gives a damn to them. I had to make some connection of him with prachi thus the airplane. 😊

Michi's first encounter was full of actions😆..(with milind aur koi action na ho'aisa to ho hi nahi sakta haina?😉😆) but the aftermath was cute too😆'he's demandin for his 70 rupees was hilarious'prachi is shooo innocent'no wonder he retrieve his hands back wen she said "kahaan se laaun"😆

See as I explained Prachi has never been exposed to the outside world Milind is her first view of it. Ofcourse he needs the money but he knew her plight too thus he let the case rest.😊

Oh wow, prachi's gonna be stayin with him nw'he can have a free nurse for baba..prachi will take good care of both of them now'and also, the love that she'd been craving for, m sure she's gonna b gettin it from there itself😳
Lets see how good Prachi is at nursing Baba or getting along with Milsi.😊

continue soon munee.🤗..cant wait for the next part😃
I sure will. 😊🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Chp 7

"Ab kiya kereygi?" What will you do now? he had questioned her motionless form. When she had lifted her innocent eyes in his direction studying him properly for the first time. He seemed a rather handsome man his cheeks and chin were covered with a stubble though she could make out full perfectly shaped lips amongst the facial hair. His deep black eyes were narrow lined with curled eyelashes right now they seemed to be focused on her. His fleshy hand kept raking through his thick mop of curls that adorned his forehead once he was through with them. His blunt nose and thick eyebrows enhaced his rugged features causing Prachi to consider him far better looking than the well groomed socialites she had encountered in the numerous parties she had attended till date. His manner was gruff but the way his eyes kept averting to her and his brows knit as he formed some plan made Prachi realize he posessed a generous heart. In their first meeting he had saved her life which only showcased his selfless nature Prachi felt safe with him though he was still a stranger to her. "Suniye" Listen Prachi had addressed his robust form "aap mujhey dobara airport chor dijiye shayad mera samaan mil jaye wahaan" Can you drop me at the airport again I might be able to trace my luggage she though had requested, it had driven Milind mad. "Bheja satak gaya hai waapis ley jaun itni duur kal jo hua kam tha" Are you nuts wasn't what happened yesterday enough I'm not going there again he had lashed out at her. "Per agar nahin ley gaye to samaan kaisey mileyga mera passport, mobile, paisey sab ussi main hai" But if I don't go how will i get my stuff back my passport, mobile, money everything is in there she had implored causing him to reconsider the option. Obviously he couldn't keep her in the garage forever maybe she was right they could find something though it was a faint hope. "Chal phir" Fine he had assented and she had stood up dusting her clothes she stood facing him. It was then that Milind had noticed the hand print her left cheek bore and the cut near her lip where the blood had dried. The gangster had certainly slapped her brutally, he figured she might wish to use the lavatory and had guided her to a common one in the chawl. Since it was early morning there wasn't much of a crowd yet Prachi had noiselessly washed her face clean rinsing her mouth the best she could she so badly wanted to brush her teeth. Moments later she stood beside him "Thank you" she had managed which had resulted in a dead pan silence on his end.


At the airport it was a mess it appeared that dozens of passengers had undergone similar circumstances, the shoot out the previous evening had created a chaos. " Dekhiye bhai sahab mera luggage baahar tha shayad koi ander ley aaya ho" Listen brother my luggage was outside maybe someone found it and brought it inside Prachi had tried to explain to the custom officer for the hundreth time. "Madame kyun mera dimagh kharab kerney per tuli ho kitni baar keh chuka huun terminal sey bahar jitna saaman tha uskey zimmmedaar hum nahin. Aapko kiya lagta hai aapka samaan jaisa aap chor gayi thi waisa hii hoga. Yeh Mumbai hai London nahin or agar hota bhi to wahaan bhi ab tak to aap ka samaan chori ho chuka hota." Madame why are you driving me crazy. How many times do I tell you that all items outside the terminal are not our responsibility. This is Mumbaii not London and even if it were London your luggage would probably have been stolen by now he had wrung his hands in exasperation. He had been facing similar accusations since morning and now it was almost noon. Milind stood fretting near his taxi cursing the moment he assented to take Sunil to the airport none of this would've happened if he hadn't come here yesterday. He saw Prachi hound the officers and the way they rebuked her, tired and defeated he saw her fall down to the floor in a heap. As quick as a flash he was beside her patting her cheeks gently he tried to wake her up "Utho.... utho" Wake up he tried to bring her around. It was obvious extreme stress had taken a toll on her dainty form she had never been subjected to such atrocities before. Milind sensed a crowd gathering and thought it best to leave before he was charged of anything, he didn't want a scene being created. Lifting her up in his sinewy arms he had placed her gently in the passenger seat of his taxi. "Bhai sahab kidhar ley jaa rahey ho larki ko?" Brother where are you taking the girl ? an inquisitive onlooker had questioned. "Hospital ley jaa raha huun.... aaja tuu bhi saath main" To the hospital... wanna come? Milind had snarled ruthlessly causing the man to discard any thoughts of furthur debate.

Thankfully the confusion and urgency to retrieve their belongings soon had caused the crowd to disperse without showering them with any more attention. Driving to a nearby hospital Milind had gotten her checked the doctor had cited it as an acute case of stress and fatigue. Milind had felt a slight pang of guilt rise in his chest in his attempts to get rid off her as soon as possible he hadn't even had the courtesy to ask her if she'd eaten anything or not. Her pallid form lay wearied and decrepit on the hospital bed. In an hour or so she had gained conciousness totally dumbfounded at the rapid pace on which she managed to switch surroundings without moving so much as a finger. Putting her palm to her head she tried to stop it from hammering incessantly. "Ab kaisi tabiyat hai aapki?" How are you feeling now? the doctor had questioned shining a torch in her eyes and checking her pulse. "I'm fine doctor, how did I get here?" she had inquired flabbergasted to find herself in a hospital last she remembered she was at the airport. Milind sat stunned to hear her speak in perfect british accent she certainly looked as she hailed from a respectable family. "Yeh layein hain aapko yahaan" He has brought you here the doctor had turned to face Milind standing tall near the open windows of the room. Prachi's eyes had followed the doctor's head and once again she was spellbound to see him stand right by her in her time of need. "Mrs Mishra I think you'r ready to go home" the doctor had smiled causing Prachi to lift her eyes at him in surprise did he just address her as someone's wife, maybe he had mistaken her for someone else. "I think Mr Mishra I can discharge her you'll have to sign some papers before that" he had smiled at Milind who had fixed a steely gaze at Prachi making her squirm under it.


Oh so he had had to fake her as his wife to get her treated Prachi had stared at his broad frame follow the doctor penitently he'd only been subjected to a hoard of problems since he'd met her. She managed to get up on her feet and decided to go back to the airport this time on her own she simply had to find her belongings but before that she wished to thank the kind gentleman. Searching him down the crowded corridor she spotted him purchasing her medicines from the pharmacy. As she approached him she saw him count the thin wad of notes in his hand over and over again. Milind certainly could not believe his bad luck he had not made a single dime that whole day on top of that the few notes he had were being spent on that girl's medication. Counting the money carefully he had handed it to the man opposite the counter and had taken the bag with the medicines from him. Prachi had ambled up to him "aap ney merey liye itna kuch kiya thank you. Per ab main aapko or takleef nahin dena chahti main khud hii chali jaungi airport apna saaman dhundney." You've done quite a lot for me thank you I don't want to bother you further. I'll go to the airport myself to find my luggage. He had not answered her but had handed her the pack of medicines "Yeh dawaii hai tablet eik subah eik raat iss sey pehley kuch kha lena" This is your medication tablets one in the morning one at night eat something before taking them saying so he had left her in that crowded hallway at the hospital. Prachi felt sick and weak she hadn't had anything since the previous night and could not find the courage to take another step. How in the world was she going to trace her belongings and how was she going to get to the airport again. Thoughts assailed her as she mustered up courage to walk out of the hospital and on the road. Milind had been only to too happy to get her off his hands, starting his car he had driven off. He had parked his taxi at a nearby taxi stand and now awaited passengers, taking out his rose stick he proceeded to chew it sunning himself against his car door. Prachi had reached the bus station and now stood clueless with the packet of medicines in her hand she had to eat something before she took the medicines but what could she buy, she had no money on her. Her head spun as the afternoon sun beat on it mercilessly and she felt herself crash against a masculine form. "Arey chikni girna hai to baahon main gir na apun to hai hii terey vaastey" Hello beautiful if you want to fall, fall in my arms I'm right here for you she heard a sly voice emit from behind her.

Edited by blind horizon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
me first!!! 😎😎
*happy dance*
Edited by sailat@PA - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

me first!!! 😎😎

*happy dance*

Faster than a flash you'r super girl!!!!!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
ohhh poor Prachi!! :(( afterall, ismein milind ki bhi koi fault nahin hai if he wants to get her off his hands!! but obviously, he'll have to recue her yet again!!
Munee--thanx for the amazing update!! :DD
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

ohhh poor Prachi!! :(( afterall, ismein milind ki bhi koi fault nahin hai if he wants to get her off his hands!! but obviously, he'll have to recue her yet again!!

Munee--thanx for the amazing update!! :DD

Obviously hun he's in no mood to take on her responsibility. 😊 Yeah he'll have to rescue her that's for sure.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ohhhhhhh........I feel so bad for Prachi........kya kismat paayee hai usne.........first an uncaring/unfeeling father..............then a possible marriage to a gay guy, now all this!!!
😭
Great Update................me thinks Milind will her save her again????!!! Looking forward to the next part.
Thanks.
--Nargis

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