FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12) - Page 23

Originally posted by: jinc118

Interestingly i found your last update better than the previous ones???

I knew you will be amongst the few who would appreciate an update like this.

and to think that the story didn't move an inch. 😕 😃

Yes, it did not, the reason why I thought most people may not be interested in it but I felt I needed to give the backdrop for what is to unfold. Since I did not delve much into who Inder really was and had killed him off before I got down to describing him, I thought it best to describe him as seen by the people he loved and who loved him.

But i guess i like the backgrounds behind everything. It was detailed enough yet short enough...

Thank you. I am not too good at character sketches. Was confused as to how to strike the balance between detail and length.

and also cause it was stuff i didn't know about. hehe.

I did tell you that I have a few surprises up my sleeve.

I want to hug PL. 😭 I feel most terribly for her and Prachi too but PL a bit more.

Losing someone with whom you have practically lived your entire adult life with is really bad.

I was a bit surprised by your description of Pranay tho. I always felt they never did delve into the psyche of Pranay in the show. They abruptly turned him into a murderer without much justification...cause throughout his scns he came across as the Pranay you described...the one that had the best of friendships with Inder and yet was mute in front of his wife to preserve some peace i guess. His character i felt was a lot like Neev's in front of Ayesha...except Neev understood Ayesha to a greater extent than Pranay did Niharika. But they ruined that angle in the abrupt murder track that was never resolved.

Since I started watching KYM only after the near rape incident, I did not get to see much of Pranay. So I went with my gut feeling and portrayed him as I want to see him.

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Nice update...thanks for soldifying the setting and the characters........nicely written. There is just the right amount of information for the reader to understand each character and thier motivations. 👏👏👏

Now..........that you've set the background............I am looking forward to the real GUTS of the story..........MICHI union....how they agree to marry each oter.

Update soon.........thanks!

--Nargis

Originally posted by: DJKM

aw my heart rly goes out 2 PL....n poor prachi

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Opti nice update and u very well discribed how all the members related to Inder coping up after his demise.

Now i am looking farward how Prachi and Milind end up in marriage.

Originally posted by: cbkola

nice part Thank you.