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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mi*chi*

Opti dear read all three in one go.

Was surprised and shocked with milind... thought he has not got over with Ayesha and was sad for prachi but when I read the last part i felt very bad and sorry for Milind. To keep Prachi in comfort doing two jobs and saving money for an appartment. That was so unexpected.He is a sweetheart.
Prachi leaving the chawl thinking he loves ayesha is sad but can't blame her.What a shock it will be for milind when he gets to know that prachi has left and wonder how is he going to take it.
Beatiful update.Thanks and God bless you.
Michie

Thanks Michie. Yes, my Milind is a sweetheart and so is my Prachi. In fact I think I have made all my characters sweethearts except Alaap I think. Well, one needs atleast one bad apple. Yes, Milind is up for a big shock when he finds Prachi gone. I am half way through my next update. If I finish, maybe it will be up by tonight.
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Posted: 16 years ago
one more part today plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh...Inder is dead😭, but Milind pronounced himself as his son-in-law😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
So far, I have nothing but positive feedback for you, dear! GREAT JOB!
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Posted: 16 years ago
How many parts have you read Kitty?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Finished four parts, Opti!😃

It did seem slightly implausible that Neev was completely ignorant about the wedding preparations, but, that apart, you are pacing the story beautifully!

I am glad there was no "Oh...I want PRachi to get married before I die" melodrama in the hospital😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: krangara

Finished four parts, Opti!😃

It did seem slightly implausible that Neev was completely ignorant about the wedding preparations, but, that apart, you are pacing the story beautifully!

I am glad there was no "Oh...I want PRachi to get married before I die" melodrama in the hospital😳

My fic has minimum melodrama because I do not like it. It may get a bit sentimental later on but I hate loud hindi movie stuff. By the way I did explain why Neev did not know about the arrangements in Part III when different people were mourning Inder's death differently. Have you come up to the part where Alaap gives his marriage proposal to Milind?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Yes, Neev's friend forgot to pass the message, while Pranay didn't' talk to him regularly, but I would have expected his parents to constantly be in touch with him before his big wedding!!!! But, thankfully, that didn't happen since MICHI need to get together!

Alaap's proposal was interesting - would Milind sign over everything? What will happen to Ayesha?

Questions ;) *hug*
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: krangara

Yes, Neev's friend forgot to pass the message, while Pranay didn't' talk to him regularly, but I would have expected his parents to constantly be in touch with him before his big wedding!!!! But, thankfully, that didn't happen since MICHI need to get together!

Alaap's proposal was interesting - would Milind sign over everything? What will happen to Ayesha?

Questions ;) *hug*

For that you'll have to read the rest of the story. As to why they did not get in touch with him constantly lets just say Pranay is just forgetful and too busy arranging his son's wedding. Moreover, they were so confident of his 'love' for Prachi, they never antipated any problems on that front! I know it is a bit far fetched but as you said for the sake of Michi you will have to palate it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow opti🤗...m so glad milind had finally cleared out his confusion...he was thinking that all this time he was in love wit ayesha bt it wasnt like that though...he realy mistook the whole meanin of frienship for lov that time and i can really understand his dilemma at that moment and tried to distance himself with prachi..he was really thinkin that he wasnt good enuf for her...well, m glad that all is cleared now...ayesha is such a sweetheart...she deserves a standin oviation for knockin some senses to milind...
now that prachi has left, wonder how he wil react.😒...he'l b devastated
continue soon🤗

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