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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

milind and tapori love that look gr8 part cont soon

Thanks Jyothi, I love that Milind too!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update Opti........but too short. I have some suspicions on how MICHI will meet..........but I need you to update to confirm my suspicions.
BTW.....are the triplets identical or feternal(different looking).....and girls or boys or a combo?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Nice update Opti........but too short. I have some suspicions on how MICHI will meet..........but I need you to update to confirm my suspicions.

BTW.....are the triplets identical or feternal(different looking).....and girls or boys or a combo?
--Nargis

Thanks Nargis. I'm afraid I really cant give long ones unless the scenes demand it. Have updated my next part take a look to see if your suspicions are proved right.
I think I mentioned that the triplets are two girls and a boy. There will be a twist in this which I will discuss much later in the story at the appropriate juncture.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hahahahaaha she thought he was a plumber... damn cute.
So Milsi is already attracted to her😳.. though he wud never admit it
waiting for more...pls hun longer updates☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey opti..
excellent part..
aww milsi is already attracted to her..
ahhaa...thinkini he was the plumber!..lolz..
cant wait for the nxt part continue soon pls!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri

hahahahaaha she thought he was a plumber...

Can you blame the girl? The guy was wearing a khaki shirt and looked anything but a guest to the party.
damn cute.
So Milsi is already attracted to her😳..
Yes, he is.
though he wud never admit it
No he will not, for a long time to come.

waiting for more...pls hun longer updates☺️
Hey, girl. Am I not updating on a daily basis? I cant write longer than this. That is why I am updating frequently.

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Posted: 16 years ago

"So, finally you have arrived. Have been waiting for you since morning."

The guy was stumped at the reception he got from this perfect stranger.

"Ugh!", he managed to grunt.

"The bathroom sink is clogged. Can you see what the problem is?"

He stood still, not registering what she was saying. He could not take his eyes off those soft, supple pink lips which were the same shade as the heavy lehanga she was wearing. As she spoke, the lips parted to reveal a set of pearly white teeth. Seeing his unmoving form, she was getting impatient.

"Hello!!! are you hard of hearing?"

On hearing another grunt from him, she raised her decibel level.

"THE BATHROOM SINK IS CLOGGED! CAN YOU PLEASE TAKE A LOOK?"

Her scream nearly tore his ear drum. Shaking himself, he cleared his ear with his index finger and took in his surroundings. Turning to her, he asked,"Why are you shouting?"

"I thought you were hard of hearing. I'm sorry, it's now obvious you are not. By the way where is your tool kit?"

"What tool kit?" He looked at her puzzled.

"The plumbing tool kit, of course"

"Now why would I be roaming around this house with a plumbing tool kit?" By now he had come to the conclusion that the girl, though beautiful, was mentally unhinged.

"Well, a plumber will carry his tool kit when he comes to attend a complaint, would he not?"

"Plumber, who me?"

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OMG Opti,that was fantastic,superb and an amazing part sweety👏
oh my word.....their meeting is so funny and so cool ..lolzzz I can't believe she miss took him for a plumberlolzzz oh dear Prachi how can u think my hunk is a plumber gal?lolz
ok,alright hun,do not kill me if I start PM u asking for an update everyday of the week Opti after this part.....goodness me it was too good well done dear👍🏼
thank u so much.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hmm so Michi meet typical of him to find her beautiful name one occassion when he hasn't been drawn to her lol. Though the plumber mishap reminds me of a movie I saw with Farooq Sheikh and Deepti Naval Farooq's friend brags of Deepti falling for him while truth was she too mistook him for the plumber. Saw the movie a few days back the reason the scene was quite fresh but I see you'r was different since Milind didn't run away from there rather caused her to repent on her mistake. I do hope in the near future she will apologize for her presumption on his attire. Why do I have a feeling Neev is going to fall for ayesha. Anyways as always tight script I do hope Prachi too falls for masculinity soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel's life

OMG Opti,that was fantastic,superb and an amazing part sweety👏

oh my word.....their meeting is so funny and so cool ..lolzzz I can't believe she miss took him for a plumberlolzzz oh dear Prachi how can u think my hunk is a plumber gal?lolz
ok,alright hun,do not kill me if I start PM u asking for an update everyday of the week Opti after this part.....goodness me it was too good well done dear👍🏼
thank u so much.

Thanks Angel. Well, not only the parts will be about Michi. Hope you would still be interested to read the fic even when I move to the other characters of the story.
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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry opti....cudn comment on ur last 2 part....bt better late than never :DDD

part 3 - mishraji seems to be very harsh on milind😕..bt who can blame him also? oooohhh....i just luvd the way u'd described milsi in his chawl avtaar...i ssoooo want to c him again like that😍

part 4 - Milind and Prachi's encounter...very different...Prachi mistook milind as a plumber and milind gettin pissed off wit it

cant wait for more...continue soon hun🤗...plz make some looonnnngggg updates😆

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