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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi friends...
this is first ff i'm writting..this is dedicated to all those who had warm heartedly welcomed me into the forum...
well i'm not so gud in writting...so forgive me if there are any mistakes....
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PART-1
It has been 3 yrs since he had seen her....sitting behind the big oak table in his office cabin milind had been reviewing the past...
"oh god!!!where are you dear love..!!where are you prachi..i have been lonely since you left me..where ever i see i see only you..why did you leave me prachi why did you...how could you think i will lead my life with another women..?come back to me prachi plz come back..."
[The phone rings]"hello yes.....no i dont want any phone calls...cancel all my meetings for today..ok"
MILIND MISHRA,the business tycoon...in 3 yrs he has made himself be placed in the top list..he has become the youngest business sucess...But this was all for only one person his prachi...
"Prachi 3yrs ago u left me for my good but u are my gud will...you dint understand it...i ran behind you but still i missed you..the bomb-blast took place in the train that you were travelling in.Everyone said me that you are dead but i refused to believe it.because i know tat we are joined from souls,till i'm alive even you are alive..I know u are somewhere here..U dint even say me tat u are pregnent .our first child must be growing somewhere with you without me right..Prachi why you dint say me that you are pregnent.i got the file inthe cupboard so i came to know ,otherwise it would have been unknown to me...Prachi i'll some how find you,again we will be together..happy happy and happy will be in our life..jus come back dear comeback.."thinkink about all these tears started forming in his eyes and he left them to fall freely from his eyes..
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sorry gals,if you dont like,i know i'm a very bad writter..
plz tell me how it is...
if u all encourage me i'll try to continue..
critisism accepted...sorry 4 being such a bad writter...
divi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey divi, that is very good but try to make the sentences more understandable and that is just about it!
want you to continue with this ff!!!👍🏼
and anyway everyone starts bad as they keep on writting they become excellent at it!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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god work ,do not worry about vmistake ,you will learn with time.

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