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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Sapna_23

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Amazing Nisha.....and also sad that Kasturi is dying 😭

Sapna



Thank you Sapna 😳

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Kay

😭 😭 oh no Kasturis dying
I thought she hasnt got time because shes pregnant 😕 😆 😆

Get the sad moments out the way quickly.....we need happy scenes! 😃

Update soon

Kay



Thanks Kay and don't worry sad moments will pass soon or later 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

wowwwwwwww
what a part Nisha
Kasturi is dying??????? 😭
No way omg so sad scene.
i love how uve done the 2 parts on youtube describing how kasturis day go by. how sweet.
2 new ppl entering kasturis life????????
I wonder who they are? 😕 😕 😕
& Yh update the nxt part soon and get the sad scenes over i want the ahppy scenes come back between ROKA 😆
keep up the gr8 work Nisha 👏



Thank you so much and don't worry Kasturi won't die for along time and if she dies than she will die with Robbie 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Chor-Ki-Kashish

OMG....Kasturi is dying 😭

Kashish



Thanks

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Yuvraz-Krishna

What the F? Kasturi is dying 😭

Anyways its great and keep up the good work

Krishna




Thanks 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: nrasheed

hey very emotional part, had me in tears, reminds me of the the movie KKHH..when rani dies...😭 please dont kill kasturi off... make it so that robbie adn kasturi are back together with cute happy moment again...

your a very good emotional writer, bravoooo👏robina.




Thanks Sweetie for not thinking that I might have over done it 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: sahib29

OMG Kasturi Dying ????😕...nahi yaar Tum essa nahi kar sakti .....No way ..aare kastu ko kuch ho gaya toh Robbie ka kya Hoga ??...and dear please hume New entry nahi chahiye ..humhe kastu hi wapis chahiye !!

and kuch bhi karo ..Report ko galat kardo ..lekin kasturi ko kuch na ho

U are very Good Writter 👏..after reading this part ..am little disppoint .cos tum kasturi ko maar rahi ho ..but tumhara writting style bahut aacha hai 😳...

ab Jaldi se Next partttttttt likho 😳

Manpreet




Thanks Manpreet

And don't worry those entries won't harm Kasturi's relationship with Robbie.... 😉

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Muskan09

a great ff...like it 2 much...u r a great writer... 👏

It's sad that kasturi is dying 😭 kasturi must not dead 😭

Great ff and parts...love it...
Continue soon...I can't wait for the next part 😉




Thanks 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part Seven - Preet's entry in Sabharwal House as Kasturi's childhood friend.

Recap: Robbie learns that Raunak is playing with his emotions than he calls his friend for help him and Kasturi. Later on Robbie learns about Kasturi's cancer, with a broken heart he goes for his concert and now Kasturi and him are missing each other.


Middle of the night, Kasturi calls Robbie and informed him that she has to go out with Raunak for nine weeks at his friend's place and I don't want to go.

After hearing Kasturi, Robbie hangs up the phone and calls Prem and told Prem the problem.

Prem: I see

Robbie: So, what should Kasturi do now?

Prem: Leave it to me and focus on your Goa concert after your big success in Simla so relax and focus on your concert.

Prem hangs up the phone and calls his younger brother….

Prem's younger brother: What's sup Bro?

Prem: I'm fine and you?

Preet: Absolutely rocking, but missing you a-lot

Prem: Than, why don't you come to India because I need your help?

Preet: What kind of help?

Prem: Preet I can't tell you anything on the phone. You will just have to come here.

Preet: Chill Bro;

You don't have to explain me anything just order, me and it's been awhile since I met her.

Prem: Who?

Preet: No one

Prem: Are you sure?

Preet: Yes

Prem puts down the phone and smiles at Preet's childish behavior than goes to bed.

Heer on the other hand takes out Prem's photo and talks to it when her cell phone ringed. Heer picked up her phone thinking it was Prem, but it was Drishti.

Heer: Hi Drishti

Drishti: What's sup?

Heer: Nothing much just getting ready for bed and you

Drishti: Actually, I need your help

Heer: What kind of help?

Drishti: I need you to call at my sister's place and say that her best friend got into an accident…....


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Heer: Why?

Drishti: It's kinda hard to explain over the phone so I'll tell you when ever I met you.

Heer: So, what's the number?

Drishti: I'll just text you the number

Next morning, Kasturi gets up and looks at Robbie's picture and also kisses it than gets out of bed; takes a shower and comes out wearing red sari that was gifted by her special friend from Canada on her 26th birthday.

Kasturi goes straight into Robbie's mother's room without knocking.

Devika: Kasturi, how many times I told you that I don't like all this?

Kasturi: Mummy-ji, I know that you don't like me coming early in the morning and touching your feet, but after-all you are my mother-in-law so I have the right, but if I hurt you than I'm sorry.

Kasturi was about to leave when Devika stops her and gives her some paper saying "sign it"

Kasturi: What kind of paper are these?

Devika: they are your and Robbie's divorce paper

Kasturi repeats are Devika than goes running out of the room saying "she will never give divorce to Robbie because she loves him a-lot" and rips up, the divorce paper and throws them at her face saying "today you have crossed all your limits by papering mine and Robbie Sir divorce paper and if Robbie finds out that you were trying to create misunderstanding between me and him. And I don't, want him to choose between me and you…..understood Mummy-ji"

Kasturi leaves the room in anger and takes out her anger on Raunak and his family. Entire day Kasturi took out her anger on everyone except for Massi-ji and Robbie's father.

Three weeks later, a person comes at Sabharwal resident with his luggage and rings the door bell. Alaana opens the door and says "who are you?"

The person says "I am………"

"Preet" Kasturi comes running down the stairs and hugs him tight and says "Welcome to India"

On the other hand, Prem goes to the airport to receive Preet from his long journey. Prem waited and waited for Preet since 10 in the morning.

"Hey Beautiful, are you going to invite me in" Said by Preet, who is still hugging Kasturi while Raunak make wired faces in seeing someone else hug Kasturi the way Robbie hugs her.

Kasturi invites Preet inside; brings him cup of coffee without any sugar.


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Twenty minute later, Prem gets a call from Preet, who tells him that he is at his friends place so he will come later on. Than hangs up the phone while Kasturi takes sip out of his coffee while Raunak's entire family, were making faces at them.

Kasturi: Man, how can you drink this coffee without any sugar?

Preet: Who told you to take a sip out of my coffee?

Kasturi: What do you say in English?

Preet: What?

Kasturi: Never mind, but tell me how did you get, my address of my husband's place?

Preet: Does it matter how I got your address, but its matter that we met after many years.

Kasturi: True, but how?

"I tell you how he got your address?" Said by Drishti, who was mad at Kasturi's friend

Kasturi hugs Drishti than introduce her friend to her. Drishti recognized his voice and starts yelling at him.

Kasturi: What's the matter and why are you yelling at him Drishti?

Drishti: Because of him Garish, left home without having breakfast because of your stupid friend, who calls my place at 6 in the morning to get your address by using a girl's voices,

Kasturi looks at Preet than starts laughing at him saying "you went through whole bunch of troubles instead of checking your e-mail"

Preet looks at Kasturi than takes out his lap-top, hooks up his wireless internet connection than goes onto his e-mail and reads Kasturi's e-mail than looks at Drishti, who was still mad at him.

Preet: I'm sorry Drishti (Preet holds his ear and bends down on his knee)

Drishti and Kasturi burst out laughing at him even he laughs along.

Preet: Hey Sweetie; you haven't told me who is your husband the man, who took you away from me?

Kasturi: Actually he isn't here but I'll show you his picture later on, but right now I'll show you your room next to my husband's room.

Preet: Hold on

Kasturi: What happened now?

Preet: I'm confused!

Kasturi: About, what?

Preet: You said my room is next to your husband's room?

Kasturi: Yeah! What's so confusing about that?

Preet: So, do you live with your husband in the same room or somewhere else?


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Kasturi: Shut up (Kasturi hits Preet on his arm)

Next morning, Robbie calls Kasturi, who was busy making Preet's favorite dish, if she could remember properly. Kasturi was so busy that Preet picked up her phone and answered it.

Robbie: Who are you and why did you answer my wife's phone?

Kasturi: Jaanu, who's on the phone?

Preet: Sweetie I think your husband's on the line

Preet turns on the speaker while Kasturi talk with Robbie; Robbie had many questions about who she was calling Jaanu other than him.

Kasturi: Robbie, I know that you have many questions about my friend, who is close to my heart and thanks to him I get to stay in your room so come back early and also where is Prem? He hardly calls me or come here?

Preet: Oh shit?

Kasturi: What happen?

Preet: I'm dead

Kasturi: why?

Preet: Bro's going to kill me

Kasturi: Witch ro? The one close to your heart or the other, who is name for your brother?

Preet: Sweetie my Bro, who is my life?

Kasturi: Oh you mean Shurya

Preet: Yes

Robbie: Hold on guys! I'll talk to you guys later on and whoever you are you are my friend because you're my wife's friend and please take care of my wife in my absent.

Preet: Don't worry dude; I'll take good care of your wife. (Winks at Kasturi… Than hangs up the phone than starts chancing Kasturi around the house)

Raunak, who was sitting on the wheelchair; looks at Kasturi, who was having fun with her friend like three year old kids.

Out of no where, a man walks in Sabharwal house with his luggage. Kasturi, who was running here and there bumped into that man and fear came on her face.

***
😳

I think i'll stop over here and some people from Kahani Ghar Ghar Ki will enter to bring insaaf to Kasturi and save her relationship with Robbie.

Nisha




Edited by Nisha_106 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was a nice part nishi, i really like how u introduced this new character, really like his character and their friendship. that was nice, how robbie was a little jealous wen she called him jaanu. 😆 ur putting great efforts in making vms and the banner for u ff, really appreciate that. keep going.

love
harman 😛
Edited by Herman_4u - 17 years ago

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