Do Dil:08/09 Part 35 Pg 62 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
Gr8 part yaar
Well done yh am angry at raunak 2 his 2 much
Anyways gr8 part now I gues the nxt part Kasturis going to meet them or isnt she?
😆 😆 😆
Keep up the gr8 work. Update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
@ manpreet: thnk u!...n dun throw in the towel yet for Raunak....he's like an untrained dog....if that's a hint! 😉

@ Princezz07: Thnx!...n yes Ka will b meeting em...but da "how?" of dat matters mor than the actual meeting... 😃

thnx again for reading n giving me such cute comments...will update soon! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Excellent part.... im sure that car belongs to robbie n raunak... also its sooo different to see raunak as the spoilt 1 n robbie as the nice one.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
👏 Nice part...........cant wait for RoKa to meet at college 😳

Keep updating! 😃

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ Neha: Thnks! N ur rite....abt the car part...n wit the role reversal...arre I got so tired of seeing Robbie as the bad guy...I mean uski bhi toh koi acchi image chahiye na?

@Kay....thnx...n here;s the update!

Ok so without further delay!

PART 3:

Back to St. Xavier's College:

A Black car almost crashes into Kasturi and her friend Sia.

Sia: Aaah! Hey Dekh ke nahi chala sakte kya? (Looking at Kas' leg) Omg! Kas...is your leg alrite? Lemme see....(Kas has sprained her leg)

Kas: Ouch! Sia...dard ho raha hai...

Sia: Lagta hai tere pair main moch aye hai..(leaves her sitting on the side, on a bench and comes back to the Black car, whose driver has now parked it, and is just getting out.)

Sia: I said, can't you see where you're going? Andhe ho kya? Meri frnd ko kuch hogaya hota toh? Idiot!

The driver takes his RayBans ( sunglasses) off, and just looks at Sia with a smirk.

He says: Do you know who you're talking to Ms. ...Whoever you are? The name is Singhania......Raunak Singhania. (Imagine him saying this Bond style, he he he)

Sia: Haan haan. Hoge jo bhi, but that does not give you the right to do whatever you please. (She grabs his hand and pulls him towards Kasturi)...Abhi say sorry to Kasturi. Come on! Mera muh kya dekh rahe ho? Apologize!

Raunak (sneering): Apologize? Me? (Bursts out laughing ) Shayad tum jaanti nahi ho, toh main bata doon, Raunak Singhania does not say SORRY, not even to his mother. Yeh word meri dictionary mein hi nahi hain. And now, if you will please LET GO of my hand. (Pushes Sia's hand away and starts to leave.)

Sia: Well, if you never learnt that word, main abhi sikha deti hoon. (Goes after him, pulls him back and makes him stand in front of Kas.)...Abhi bolo... 'So' 'ri'... 'sorry' (and she smiles a wide smile! )

Raunak (infuriated ): Who do you think you are to be doing this? And speak this way to me? And you expect me to say 'Sorry' to her....this...this... 'behenji'....I mean look at her.....her clothes.....Jeez!

(Just to let you guys know, Kasturi is wearing a beautiful baby blue salwar kameez- a short top with hand-crafted pattern of flowers, and simple but matching jewellery. Her hair is let down, and she looks simple but beautiful) Par yeh Raunak ko kaun samjhaye?

Meanwhile, Kas stands up pulls Sia towards her and says: Sia, let it go. Meri galti thi. Jaane do. Waise bhi we're gonna be late for class.

Sia: Kas! What are you talking about? Teri galti nahi thi, aur jiski galti thi use toh mai mafi mangwa ke rahoongi.

While all of this is happening, another guy is standing by the Black and watching everything. He was the passenger of the car, and its none other than Robbie. Now, he comes forward, places his hand on Raunak's shoulder and....

Robbie: Raunak, bro. I'm sorry but it was your fault. Chal aab acche baccho ki tarah maafi maang le. We gotta get going.

Raunak (turning back to Robbie, with a questioning look on his face): Robbie tu bhi? I mean come on yaar. You're my best friend. And tum is...iss '2-by-2' ki side le rahe ho? (To those who don't watch Kuch Is Tara, '2-by-2' is a reference to the fact that Sia is a petite girl. I luv the nickname, so I'm gonna use it here!)

Robbie: Nahi Raunak. Main kisiki side nahi le raha. I'm just telling you what I saw. It was your fault, aur aapni galti ki maafi mangne se koi chota nahi ho jaata. Come on yaar, for me? (He makes a puppy dog face, which let's be serious, who can resist? )

Raunak (exasperated): Fine. But only because of you, traitor.

He goes to Kas. and says: I'm....I'm sorry. Meri galti thi.

Before Kasturi could reply, he turns around and leaves, taking Robbie with him.

-------------------------------THE END--------------------------------------

So, that was part 3. Hopefully you all will like it...n comment plz plz plz!!!

Edited by stars_shine - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ RoKa4eva: Wow...another newbie...yay! welcum....tho im still a newbie too he he he...n thnx 4 reading!...gud 2 kno u like it, esp. the 2-by-2 ref.! its hilarious!!! 😆 Thnx! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hai stars 😃 I just read the 3 parts together . I am sad it finished so soon 😭 .next time try to Write big parts dear 😳 . But sure ur studies come first .

And I am really liking the way u r explaining everything 👏 . Hey r u planning to hook Gia with Ra ? 😉 .And this Ra is too irritating 😡 . In the serial even if Ro was arrogant he never used to behave to his mom like like this Ra guy is doing .

Anyways u r doing a very good job 👏 .I am looking forward to knw how u r going to make RoKa fall in love 😉 .

Write many parts .Best of luck. Will catch u soon. 😃

Rosy
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
OMG wel gr8 part Stars
Well done yaar.
Wel raunak being like that in a james bond style 🤣 Saying do you know who i am?🤣 🤣
Wel raunaks apologised for the first tym wowwwww. Lukz lyk his going ot be doing much more now.
Awwww Robbies so sweet. Lol.
Update the nxt part soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww... such a cute part... luved the '2 by 2' n robbie makin a puppy face who obviosily no one can resist... but there was no convo between robbie n kasturi 😭 CNt wait for both of them to meet each other!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30

Hey great part as usual 👏

so ..hey dear sabse pehle tum jab part start karo ..toh please Recape jaroor likho ..cos aaj kal Forum meh bahut si FF chal rahi hai so story mix ho jaati hai ..ki humne kaha tak read kiya tha ...so i hope u don't mind 😳

and yaar ..tum jab kastu ki dress ke baare meh bata rahi thi ..toh tumne yee kyu likha ki raunak ko kaun samjaye 😕..that means tum Raunak aur kastu ka chakkar chalana chahti hoo ..no iss raunak ko kastu se dur hi rakho 😆

very nice part dear ...par tum thorda sa long likha karo 😳

Manpreet

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