Pyar ka Rishta--nu part--pg 15

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Harman

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

wen are u starting. we're waiting for it. huryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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kabee

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

wow roka ff😃 😃 😃
wating egarely 😉

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p@ras

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Her comes the first part.

Kasturi;ka
Robbie-Ro
Raunak-Ra

The story starts from where kasturi is working for Robbie. They are always at logger heads and Ra always tries to pacify them. Ro is very angry with ka after she slapped him and he still has lot of GFs.In my ff Devika is a very good lady concerned for her son Ro but she is not well. She has had an attack and the doctors have told the family not to give any shocking news to her. Divya's abortion is over and kas and Ra have signed the abortion papers as they were concerned for Devikas health and divya has become kasturis best friend.

Robbie comes late in the night and is fully drunk. One of his GF bring him and makes him sleep on his bed and leaves. Devika watches all this from a distance and is very concerned and sad. She is not able to sleep that night. Next day:

Kasturi: Good morning madam.
Devika: Good morning kasturi. Please check whether Ro has woken.
Ka; Yes madam

Kasturi goes to Robbies room and slowly peeks in…the whole room is in a mess and she starts picking up things. She switches on the alram and comes down. The alarm rings non-stop and Robbie is furious. He comes yeeling down at kas.

Ro; kas why did you set my alarm and why don't you get lost.
Ka; Sir you have to go rehearsal
Ro: to hell with rehearsal
Ka: sir your GF had called and she said she would meet you in the rehearsal hall
Ro; teek hai teek hai I will leave for the rehearsals.

Devika is watching all this and she askes ka when did his GF call.

Ka: actuallu madam nobody called I just told like that so Ro sir leaves for the rehearsal.

De: Good kas you know how to handle him.

Devika and Nandini are best of friends.

De: Nandini I am very scared for Ro..he doesn't have any responsibily. He is always drinking and not concerned for his work. He has so many GF and I know many of them come for his money.

Nand: Bhabhi don't worry ..he will be okay

De ; I am scared as if something happens to me then what will happen of Ro

Na; shubh shubh boliye nothing will happen to you

Dev; I think I should get him married to a good girl

Na; this idea is good

Dev ;what do you think of kasturi?

Na: Kasturi..ummm very good choice.she is able to handle Ro well.

De; I also think so I will talk to Robbie

Robbie goes to the rehaearsal hall and sees that his GF was not there only kas is instructing the other dancers with their costumes. He appraoches kas

Ro; kas where is Rina(his GF name)

Ka; who nahin aayi

Ro; you told me she is waiting here

Ka; I lied

Ro; what …how dare you do that

Raunak enter.

Ra; what Is happening Ro why are you so angry

Ro this girl is the limit she has lied that Rina was here

Ra; kas will do for your own good you start your rehearsals Rina will come later

Ro kasturi I will deal with you later

Robbie comes back from the rehearsal and is very angr with kas as Rina never turned up. He is drinking in his room when Devika comes in.

De; Ro I want to talk to you

Ro bolo mum

De: tuum jaante ho I am not well anything can happen to me anytime

Ro why mum nothing will happen relax.

De nahin Robbie I am very worried about you. Somebody must be there to look after you when I am not there.

Ro Don't talk like that mum

De; this worry is killing me

Ro Say what you want me to do

De;Get married

Ro; what…marriage and me..he lauughs histerically

Dev I have selected the girl also

Ro wait…wait…Oh1 my please give me a break don't tell so many shocking news at once

De this is not a joke I am serious

Ro who is the girl

De: Kasturi

Ro: His face goes white with shock .

Edited by p@ras - 18 years ago

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Shruti

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+ 9

Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Its very good. I loved reading it.

Devika Nandini best frd. RoKa at logger hands. I can image all thise fight scene b/w RoKa 😳

Waiting 4 ur next part 😛

Shruti

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Zuzana

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

Excellent opening! 👏 Both at logger heads..loved that.

Please continue soon. 😃

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Krishi

@knumnum

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

So far luved it Paras. U r getting them married, wooooooooooow yaaar... Haan yaar marriage karwaado and then let them fight how much ever they want😆

And the dialogues and characters are soo clear. Luv ur style of writing👏👏👏

Continue soooon and one more request, can u write lengthy parts😆😆

Krishi

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Pretz

@Pretz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Hey

oh dat soo tweet!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳
It brings bak so many memories of wen it was new 😍 😍 😍
i really like ur devika 😉
plz do continue

Cheers
Preetz