Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 23

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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part..thank god kasturi safe..i like ronak said to anjali..
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey Soniaaaaaaa ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


God bless you. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ......such a lovly post ๐Ÿ‘ ....I am so thrilled to imagine that Kasturi gets to know what Robbie loves her. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...conveying it through a third person was so good ๐Ÿ˜Š

And you have made him such an endearing husband ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I also loved the proximity between them when she comes back to the hotel

Now if only I was kasturi for a change ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks so much again for a bright ray of sunshine after such bleak eppys.


Looking forward to the next part....hope she gets to know fully.....cant wait to see how she reacts when she meets him after knowing the complete truth that he loves her.... ๐Ÿ˜‰


jaldi jaldi likho ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

take care sweets

JWMRK ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
i luved the power packed dialogues of raunak nd anjali,luved the way kasturi felt jealous by seeing gals poundering over robbie ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sonuuu, finally read the part and absolutely adore came to adore your RK all through...

Kaha se shuru karoo

1. I looved the way R was worried for K and your cinematic way of making Robbie kneel down right in the middle of the road...๐Ÿ˜†

2.Looved the caring R, taking care of the flu inflicted K

3.And your RK are still sharmilee couple...Especially your Robbie๐Ÿ˜ก, he better learn a thing or two from my Robbie...๐Ÿ˜ณ

4.How you almost landed Anjali there and then cancelled her trip at the last minute..In any case the way you were slowly making sure that Raunak and Anjali hook up, didn't seem like her presence in Mauritous would be any threat to our RK...

5...Awww, looved the small small gestures and display of love and concern between eachother....๐Ÿ‘Especially the scene where K wipes R's cheeks, awwww that;s cho chweet, even her jealousy...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

6.last but not the least was celebrating our Krish's b'day...This part shows how nice and considerate you are...Its really such a sweet gesture to remember her b'day and include a bit for her...It not only made her day special, but it also showcased your awesome heart...๐Ÿ‘


That's all for the day and now I want more, as usual....When can we expect it???

luv,
Raksha๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago
contineu this great ff soon ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
@Harman: Hermu thank you so much.... i'm so happy taht you liked the whole part and RK moments too.... Arre baba sorry bola na late post karne ke liye ๐Ÿ˜ƒ... I'll try to update ASAP ๐Ÿ˜ณ.... No probs dear I love you too....

@Shara:Thank you Shara... good to know that you liked it... will try and postt he next part soon.... pakka promise ๐Ÿ˜ณ

@Krishi:The b'day gal.... madam Robbie was in the hotel car na... they were escorting him and provided a driver as all big 5 stars and 7 stars do... toh why would he pay the fare?? see I work at details ๐Ÿ˜‰ and so it was easy get Kasturi escorted by the same driver na....

I'm so happy that you liked the surprise factor of the part ๐Ÿ˜ณ... This was the least I could do yaar...
Thanx for ur sweet replies ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...

@aksn:Glad to know you are liking the Raunak-Anjali pair... Thanx for the appreciation ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...

@JR:Thank you JR.... I know I made Robbie the most ideal hubby... The one as I would like to have ๐Ÿ˜.... Hmmm so you wanted to be in Kasturi's shoes... who won't hai na ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ.... I'll try and update soon....

@Famy:Hi dear... good to know that you liked Ra/Anjali pairing and Kasturi's jealousy... thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜ณ

@Rakshu:Rakshu these are the sweetest comments I have ever received ๐Ÿ˜ณ.... i'm so humbled... thank you for writing all those sweet things for me ๐Ÿ˜ณ....

Actually I like all such small gestures of love....and My Robbie is balancing your Robbie you see ๐Ÿ˜‰... will try and update ASAP....

@Rumus:Thank you Rumus for appreciation... will try and update soon...

Sonia
Edited by sonia_s11 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part Sonia!!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I so much loved your Robbie...the way he cried when he lost Kas!!! They are slowly inching towards eachother....but she is confused ....she doesnt believe Robs can love her!!! OMG...she will be so thrilled when she knows how much Robbie loves her! ๐Ÿ˜ณ I was wild when you were about to send anjali and Ra there......but ofcourse you being ardent clever fan of Rk would never do that!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

i hope to see some romance in the next part!!! Just cant wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part sonia
love the way driver tell kasturi about how much he loves her
i wish i could that scene on screen
it made me sad, can't wai when robbie says that he loves her ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sonuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ๐Ÿค— wonderful part ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
I really liked the way you write lagta hi nahi ki meh FF pard rahi hoon
I really loveeeeeeeee this robbie said m nothing without kasturi ๐Ÿ˜ณ and take care for her ๐Ÿ˜ณ
sonu i love this robbie himself talking about his feeling for her ๐Ÿ˜ณ
next she wiping robbie cheeks with her dupatta ๐Ÿ˜ณ
and love this dailouge''banda sirf aapki kidmat karega ๐Ÿ˜ณ
krishi birthday tumne to mujhse bhi acha surprise usse de diya ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

and mujhe kehne ki to jarorat hai nahi baar baar ki tum acha likhi ho cos you are a perfect ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

plzzzz continue cos i am waitng to see this robbie how to confess his love befor kasturi ๐Ÿ˜ณ mene to sapne lene bhi shuru kar diye ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜

thanks once again for pm

mannu ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
okay sonu, i'm forgiving u for this cuz the scene was definitely worth waiting. ๐Ÿ˜‰

love
harman ๐Ÿ˜›

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