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Posted: 18 years ago
love it!!! im new to if.. well ...not really new..but just registered, before i was just a lurker, and must say u have done a great job.... cant wait to read more...
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love it!!! im new to if.. well ...not really new..but just registered, before i was just a lurker, and must say u have done a great job.... cant wait to read more...

Welcome to IF sephora.... You'll have great time here with the wonderful people around over here....I hope you enjoy your stay here😃

Coming to my ff.... I'm so glad to know that you are liking it... hope you continue to enjoy it... keep reading... I'll be looking forward for more interactions from ur side😳...

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Posted: 18 years ago
Soni darling kaha ho tum .I want to hug u 🤗 🤗
Jab tumahri ff pard rahi thi mujhe itni khushi ho rahi thi tum andaja nahi laga sakti 😳 😳
mehne abhi do parts parde hai rest aaj raat ko aur subha pardhugi
u know i love this robbie 'c'night dream tumhne gana bhi bhaut hacha chuna( bhaho ke darmiya do pyar mil rahe hai ) 👏 👏
ok dear i read the rest part to night and leave the comments
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Posted: 18 years ago

Thank you dear.... Glad to know you liked it... Keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: sahib29

Soni darling kaha ho tum .I want to hug u 🤗 🤗
Jab tumahri ff pard rahi thi mujhe itni khushi ho rahi thi tum andaja nahi laga sakti 😳 😳
mehne abhi do parts parde hai rest aaj raat ko aur subha pardhugi
u know i love this robbie 'c'night dream tumhne gana bhi bhaut hacha chuna( bhaho ke darmiya do pyar mil rahe hai ) 👏 👏
ok dear i read the rest part to night and leave the comments
love manpreet

Manu.... sweety thank you so much.... Thats my all time favourite song too yaar😳..... I hope you enjoy all the parts .... Do leave in ur comments....

Sonia

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thank you so much guys for such enduring comments….. Here goes the next part I hope you like it…..

Recap: Robbie is happy to see Kasturi happy by the prospect of going with him…. They share a cute moment and Kasturi feels attracted towards Robbie…. Kasturi is jealous of Anjali and her familiarity with Robbie…. Kasturi does her packing and goes to meet her parents…. RK depart for Mauritius…. Kasturi is scared of traveling by air so Robbie tries to distract her….The Air hostess complimented RK….. RK reach Mauritius and move to their hotel….

Part 9:

Kasturi enters the room and is just taken aback with its beauty…. It's a beautiful suite…. With curtains in pattern of red and gold and and a cream coloured walls it gave a very elegant look to the room...... Kasturi went to the window only to face beautiful blue waters…. The view was breath taking….

Kasturi: (reffering to Robbie) Kitna pyara nazara hain na??

Robbie: (looking at her) bohut pyara….

Kasturi looks at him…Robbie gave her one of his best smiles….. She just moves away from there and opens the bedroom door…. The room is decorated with flowers…. There are roses everywhere… Kasturi sees this and doesn't know how to react… Robbie sees her stuck in at the doorstep ad goes there…. He follows her gaze and is shocked to see that… Kasturi looks at him and he looks at her…. Both of them feel very awkward….

Robbie: Hmm… Kasturi woh…. Yeh sab…. Woh….

Kasturi: (smiles) Its ok….

Robbie makes a cute puppy face and relaxes a bit just then Raunak calls up….

Raunak: Hey bro…. Kaise ho tum dono??

Robbie: (goes a little bit toward side) bro ke bachche… yeh sab kya hai??

Raunak: Kya kya hai??

Robbie: duffer…. Yeh yahan ke arrangements…. Kisne kaha tha yahan yeh sab karne ke liye… pata hai main Kasturi ke saamne kitna embarrassed feel kar raha tha…

Raunak starts laughing….

Robbie: Ha Ha Ha…. Yeh sab tujhe bohut funny lag raha hai na??

Raunak: (controlling his laughter) Robbie tu baat hi aisi kar raha hai…. Tu embarrassed feel kar raha tha… tu?? (laughing) Ladkiyon ko handle karna toh tere baye haath ka khel hua karta tha na??

Robbie: duffer tu janta hai ki main ab woh Robbie nahin hoon…. Duffer abhi tak main Kasturi ko apne dil ki baat nahin keh paya hoon aur tu…..

Raunak: Bas yaar… Mujh par gussa karne ki koi jaroorat nahin hai…. Waise bhi yeh idea uncle ka tha??

Robbie: Dad ka?? Mujhe nahin pata tha dad itne Romantic hain…. Anyways ab main rakhta hoon…..

Raunak: Ok bye…. Apna aur Kasturi ka khyal rakhna…

Robbie: Yeah… bye… u take care too

(keeps the phone….. and looks behind and sees Kasturi has gone to freshen up….)

Robbie: (enters the bedroom and looks around and smiles and says to himself) Main jaanta hoon Kasturi ki aaj humare beech woh rishta nahin hai…. (touching the flowers near the bed) lekin mujhe yakeen hai ki ek din mera pyar tumhe mere pass jaroor le aayega…. Us ek pal ke liye main saari zindagi bhi intezar karne ke liye taiyar hoon…. (picks her dupatta that she left on the bed) Kaash tum samajh paati ki main tumhare liye kya feel karta hoon…. (kisses her dupatta)…. Lekin main jaanta hoon pichle kuch dinno main tumpar kya beeti hai…. Jis din tum apne ateet se bahar aa jaogi us din main tumhe apne dil ki baat kahunga Kasturi….

Kasturi: (Kasturi comes out of the washroom and sees Robbie holding her dupatta) Robbie…

Robbie: (looking at her) Haan… kuch kaha tumne??

Kasturi: woh mera dupatta…(pointing at it)….

Robbie: (realizes and feels like an idiot) woh actually main toh bas tumhare dupatte ka fabric dekh raha tha…

Kasturi: (looks at him as if he's lost it) kya?? Fabric…. Lekin kyun??

Robbie: woh… (to himself… Robbie beta aaj toh tu phasa…. Kuch aur nahin bol sakta tha… fabric dekh raha hoon…. Kya dress designer banne ka shauk ho raha hai…)

Kasturi: (looking at him) kya hua sir… aapki tabiyat toh theek hai na??

Robbie: Haan haan… bilkul… arre tum bhi na… (Handing her the dupatta) yeh lo… main fresh hokar aata hoon…. Then I need some sleep…. Bohut thak gaya hoon… Tum bhi kuch der aaram kar lo….

Kasturi: (confused) Jee….

At SS Mansion…..

Anjali enters Raunak's room….

Anjali: Kya kar rahe ho Raunak??

Raunak: (engrossed in a file) Anjali tumhari aankhen kharab ho gayi hain kya??

Anjali: (frowns at him) How rude is that!! Mujhe yahan aakar ruk n eke liye kaha aur mere liye kissi ke pass time hi nahin hai…. Ek woh hai Robbie jo honeymoon ke liye nikal gaya aur tum ho ki files main ghus kar bethe ho?? Isse toh main hotle main hi achchi thi…. Mujhe yahan aane ki kya jaroorat thi… you guys na…

Raunak: (closing the file and keeping it aside) bas bas… Anjali tum kitna bolti ho?? Baap re… non stop!!! Kya problem hai tumhari??

Anjali: what do you mean kya problem hai?? Main bore ho rahi hoon….

Raunak: Toh madam aap chahti kya hain??

Anjali: Lets go out somewhere….

Raunak: tum pagal ho gayi ho…. I've a meeting in an hour's time….

Anjali: (sulking) theek hai…. Toh tum apna kaam karo…. Main ja rahi hoon….

(Devika enters his room)

Devika: I have a solution beta….

Anjali: Aunty aap…. (both Ra and Anjali are a little surprised to see Devika behaving so normal… after RK's wedding she has kept herself away and coz of her foul mood nobody dared to cross her paths… to an extent apart from formal pleasantries just once Devika didn't even bother to talk to Anjali at all )

Devika: Haan beta… Toh tum yehi keh rahi thin a ke tum ghar par beth kar bore ho rahi ho??

Anjali: Ji Aunty…. Robbie bhi nahin hai aur Raunak bhi busy rehta hai toh….

Devika: Not to worry…. (turning towards Raunak) Raunak beta… Kuch hi hafto main Robbie ka ek bohut bada concert aane wala hain na??

Raunak: Ji aunty….

Devika: Anjali tum ek kaam kyun nahin karti us project ki zimedaari Raunak ke saath tum kyun nahin sambhal leti?? You'll get a good exposure too…

Raunak: I think that's a fantastic idea Aunty…. Anjali tum karna chahogi??

Anjali: I would love too…. Isse kaam main mann bhi laga rahega aur mujhe kuch sikhane ko bhi milega…. Thank you so much Aunty….

Devika: (smiling at her) My pleasure… (walks out of the room while Anjali and Raunak are chatting… she turns and looks at them once and gives an evil smile and walks off)

Back to Mauritius….

Kasturi goes and sleeps on the bed… Robbie comes out of the washroom and sees Kassturi sleeping amidst those flowers… He looks at her and smiles…. She looks as innocent and delicate as those flowers.... He then moves to the couch and sleeps…. She opens her eyes and sees Robbie is sleeping…. She goes upto him and puts a quilt on him…. Then goes back and sleeps…. As soon as she shuts her eyes… Robie opens his eyes and looks at the quilt and smiles!!!

Chawla house:

Ajay is ready to go to office when Kaushalya gets a glass of milk for him…. Ajay takes it from her…

Ajay: Arre Taiji aap ne kyun takleef ki?? Pooja kahan hai??

Kaushalya: Arre puttar isme takleef kaisi?? Pooja neeche kitchen main hai…

Ajay: thik hai Taiji…. Taiji guddi ki koi khabbar??

Alka: (says while entering) Khabar achchi hi hogi… arre sabarwal khandan ki bahu jo ho gayi hai….

Ajay: Ma aap…

Kaushalya: (cutting him in between) beta Raunak ka phone aaya tha… Robbie aur Kasturi thik thak pohunch gaye hain….

Alka: Wah kya thatt hain maharani ke… ab phone bhi dusron se karwaye jaate hain…. Bhool jao usse… ab humare liye uske paas waqt kahan hoga….
Ajay: Bas kijiye ma…. Guddi ke khilaf kuch mat kahiyega…. Kal jab guddi ghar aayi thi aap bahar chali gayi aur aap kehti hain ki uske paas humare liye waqt nahin…. Taiji main office ke liye nikal raha hoon….

Ajay and Kaushalya leaves and Alka stands there sulking….

At Mauritius…… Robbie gets a phone call….

Kasturi is first one to get up and pick up the phone….. Its from the organizers who inform Kasturi that Robbie has got his rehearsals at 4…. Kasturi sees its already 3 and decides to wake up Robbie so that they can catch up a quick bite before he leaves…. So she orders snacks and coffee for both of them….

Kasturi: (goes towards Robbie) Robbie… (nudging him) Robbie uthiye….

Robbie: (opening his eyes a little) kya baat hai Kasturi ??

Kasturi: Sir aapke organizers ka phone aaya tha… 4 baje aapki rehearsals hain….

Robbie: yeh organizers bhi na…. aaj hi toh aaye hain…. Thik hai… (he gets up unwillingly an goes to freshen up…. Mean while the waiter comes with the tray containing the eatries…

Chawala residence…
Pooja: (putting up an act) Mummyji I'm sorry… Ajay ko aapse is tarah baat nahin karni chahiye thi….

Alka: Arre puttar isme uski kya galati hai…. Galati toh meri kismat ki hai….. Mera ek hi toh layak beta hai… woh bhi mujh se jyada JP bhaisaab aur kaushalya Bhabhi ki waqalat karta hai….. Aur taraf woh Kasturi hai… (gets dreamy) Kaash Kasturi ki jagah main hoti…

Pooja: Matlab….

Alka: Arre puttar matlab saaf hai… (again getting dreamy) Kaash meri shaadi Robbie ke saath hui hoti toh….

Pooja looks at her as if to say have you gone mad!!! Tiku enters at the same moment and completes Alka's sentence….

Tiku: Toh kya…. Robbie sanyas le leta….

Alka: (gets on high alert) oye…. Tu mujhe chen se sapne bhi nahi dekhne dene na….

Tiku: (sunny deol style) Mumma…. Main khud hi toh apki dil ka chen hoon….

Alka: (Putting both hands on her head) Haye rabba kaisi nalayak aulad di hai….

Back to Mauritius:

(Robbie comes out wiping his face with a towel and comes to Kasturi) Kasturi yeh kya hai?

Kasturi: Aap ko rehearsals par jaana hai na…. Toh maine socha aapne subah se kuch khaya nahin hai…. Bhuke pet jaana bhi achchi baat nahin hai na??

Robbie: (touched by her move) Thanks Kasturi….

Kasturi: Apno ko thanx nahin kaha jaata…(saying this she immediately gets to make coffee while Robbie stares at her…. Robbie is so happy that Kasturi finally considered him apna atleast…) Robbie coffee…

Robbie: huh…. Kya hua??

Kasturi: (giving a small laugh on his reaction) kya hua aapko… Coffee le lejiye….

Robbie: Oh ya…. (Sipping on his coffee) Nice coffee…. They both have their share of eatries and then Robbie leaves…. Kasturi just tries to wither away the time… Robbie's concert was scheduled 5 days after they had reached Mauritius…. So Kasturi knew he'll keep busy this while…

SS Mansion…. Raunak comes home after a hectic day… Anjali enters….

Anjali: Hey Raunak…. How was the day??

Raunak: very hectic ya… tum batao?

Anjali: Very boring!!!

Raunak: Ek kaam karte hain lets go out for dinner….

Anjali: really?

Raunak: Haan baba….

Anjali: great!!!

Both of them get ready and go for dinner and have a fun together…. Anjali enjoys her dinner thoroughly….

Back to Mauritius….

Its been two days now that Robbie is kept busy and Kasturi spends most of her time in the room itself…. Robbie feels bad about it…. But both of them knew that the rehearsals were extremely important plus he also had to be there for promotional campaigns…Kasturi misses Robbie…. RK are having their dinner at the hotel's restaurant where he plans to speaks to her…...

Robbie: I'm sorry Kasturi….

Kasturi: Sorry kis baat ke liye??

Robbie: Woh hum jab se aaye hain… tab se tum issi tarah kamre main bethi rehti ho aur mujhe waqt hi nahin mila ki main tumhe kahin le ja saku….

Kasturi: Koi baat nahin… Main jaanti hoon ke rehearsals important hain… Don't worry… Main theek hoon!!!

Robbie: Kasturi main soch raha tha kyun na tum kal shopping ke liye chali jao…

Kasturi: Main??? Shopping par jao?? Woh bhi yahan par akeli… nahin nahin main yahin theek hoon…..

Robbie: Come on Kasturi… tumhe achcha lagega….

Kasturi: Aap samajh nahin rahe hain….\

Robbie: Main jaanta hoon tumhe yehi darr hain na ki tum yahan par kuch bhi nahin jaanti….

Kasturi: Hmm

Robbie: (smiles) not a problem…. Tum kal manager se baat lar lena… he'll guide you…. Aur agar koi bhi pareshani hui toh mujhe ek phone kar dena…. Simple….

Kasturi: magar….

Robbie: Kasturi saara din room main bethkar bhi toh bore ho jati ho na??

Kasturi: (reluctantly) theek hai….

Robbie: I promise Kasturi ek baar yeh concert khatam ho jaye….. uske baad we'll have loads of fun… Mauritius is a beautiful country so don't wory… we'll not be missing it….

Kasturi: (smiles) Theek hain….

They then finish off their dinner with a soft music played in the background and stealing away glances at one another….
Next day….
Robbie is brushing his hair…. Kasturi gets his jacket for him….

Robbie: Thanks…. Kasturi see if you feel like going… Tumhe thoda change bhi mil jayega….

Kasturi: Theek hai... dekhti hoon....

Robbie gets a call… He speaks with them and cuts the call….

Robbie: Kasturi main chalta hoon… Organizers se aaj kuch final details ke baare main discuss karna hai… tum apna dhyan rakhna… Bye

Kasturi: (smilingly) Bye….

Robbie bids Kasturi good bye and leaves….Kasturi thinks a while to what Robbie had suggested….

Kasturi: (to herself) idea bura bhi nahin hai…. I think mujhe jaana chahiye…. Issi bahane thodi der bahar ho aaungi….

(She quickly gets ready and goes to the manager…. Manager tells her about a Mall that was nearby so she takes a cab and reaches there….)

Robbie's discussion with the organizers had lasted for around 4 hours and now his thoughts were running to Kasturi…. He was thinking whether or not she went…. But he still patiently finished the work and bid good bye to the organizers…. He was about to move to his next destination for rehearsals when he again gets a call that rehearsals have been postponed…. He took the opportunity and goes to his room…. He enters the room to find it empty and so he calls up the reception desk…

Robbie: Hello this is Robbie…. Can you please tell me where did my wife go and did she leave any message for me….

Receptionist: Sir she left around 2 ago to the eternity Mall….

Robbie: Oh k (he then takes few details about the mall and cuts the line…. He then lies down on the bed… He's missing kasturi badly looking around the room…. While thinking about Kasturi he just drifts away to sleep with a smile on is face…. Sudden buzzing of his cell phone snaps him out of his sleep…. He picks up the phone and is informed that the rehearsals are cancelled today becoz of the sudden down pour…. He just makes a face and cuts the phone… He looks at his watch and is shocked that he has been sleeping for more than 3 hours…. he looks around and realizes Kasturi is still not back….He gets tensed as now Kasturi has been out for more than 6 hours and the news of the down pour…. He gets tensed and frantically dials Kasturi's cell number but it was unreachable….) Kasturi kahan ho tum?? ( He looked out and realized that it was getting dark…. And it was raining like cats and dogs…. All sorts of ill thoughts were now making their way in his head…. He now curses himself for even coming up with such a stupid idea) Kaash maine Kasturi se bahar jaane ke liye kaha hi na hota… main aisi bewakoofi kaise kar sakta hoon?? Oh God…. He picks up his jacket and runs down stairs…. He asks the receptionist about the mall…. The receptionist also tells him that coz at that time all the cars of the hotel were occupied so she went by a cab….

Robbie: (Angry) what…. How can you do that?? Isn't it your responsibility to escort the guests…. How can you send my wife like this??

Receptionist: Calm down sir… There were no cars available at the moment… there was nothing we could do about it….

Robbie: Ab main kya karu?? Kahan dhoondu Kasturi ko?? Usse kuch nahin hona chahiye….

Receptionist: Sir why don't you go for yourself to see for Mrs. Sabarwal…. We'll arrange for the car right away….

Robbie: Ok… (he just leaves the place and reaches the mall in an hour's time…. Traffic was horrible and each and every moment was passing away like an year for him… He keeps looking out hoping to spot Kasturi somewhere…. He rushes inside the mall and runs around like a lunatic but to no avail…. Kasturi is no where to be found…. He runs back outside…. He sits back in the car…. Passing through various streets to search for kasturi… the driver is very co-opertaive… all the efforts turned out to be futile…. They reaches a lonely lane where Robbie completely dejected asks the driver to stop and he gets out of the car and walks a bit away….)

Robbie: Kahan ho tum Kasturi?? (tears are rolling down his cheeks) Main tumhare beghair nahin jee sakta…. yeh sab meri hi galati hain…. Kyun maine tumhe akela choda?? Kyun?? Mujhe tumhare saath aana chahiye tha…. Lekin main….. (By now he is crying like a baby…. And fell on his knees to the ground…. He is remembering all the moments spent with Kasturi…. Kasturi and him during the wedding… Kasturi holding his hand to ask whether everything will be fine…. Kasturi and him at the temple…. In the plane… with a background score of Tu tu hai wohi slow version playing…. Suddenly he shouts Kasturiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

End of Part 9

That's it guys for today…. Hope you like this part too…. Ab jaldi se apne comments post karna shuru karo…..

Sonia
Edited by sonia_s11 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
jaanuuuuuuuuuuu 🤗 🤗 🤗

Thank u dear for keeping ur promise... And the part is very gud.... I missed cute moments of RK but i know i ll be reading loads in the next part with some spicy moments 😉

And Miss. Sonia, i found 2 bloopers in this part 😆 .. one is, Kasturi gets a call from organizers saying tat rehearsal is at 4.. but she tells Robbie tat rehearsals are at 5.. 😆

And another one is, Ajay and Kaushalya leaves and Kaushalya stands there sulking…. 😆 😆 😆

And i luved the climax yaaar, choooooo chaaaaaaad Robbie.... Kasturi wapas aayegi, ro mat pleaseeee 😭 😭 😭

And i understood Devika's plan.. Everything here benifits RK.. so no probs at alll.....

Thank u again for yet another wonderful part dear🤗 🤗 🤗

Continue sooooooon, will be waiting 😳 ...

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
Krishuuuuu,

Arre yaar part post karne se pehle tumhe pilot study ke liye dena chahiye yaar 😆.... Maan gaye aapki parkhi nazar ko 😉 .... I corrected those bloopers... thanx for pointing kya karti yaar bohut neend aa rahi hai.....

I'm choooo happy I could keep my promise and lived upto ur expectations.... I missed RK moments too.... Thanx for commenting 😛....

Sonia
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia_s11

Krishuuuuu,

Arre yaar part post karne se pehle tumhe pilot study ke liye dena chahiye yaar 😆.... Maan gaye aapki parkhi nazar ko 😉 .... I corrected those bloopers... thanx for pointing kya karti yaar bohut neend aa rahi hai.....

I'm choooo happy I could keep my promise and lived upto ur expectations.... I missed RK moments too.... Thanx for commenting 😛....

Sonia

dhokebaaaaaaaaaaz😉, u corrected the mistakes😆😆😆.. chal theek hai.. no probs😛..

Ab jaldi se bataa, kab post kar rahi hai next part..I know tat iam very laalchi but cant help it🤔😆

Krishi

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sonia
the part was amazing
hope he finds her soon 😭
and you too continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey Sonia,

Yipeeeeeeeeeee 😃 .....You are so gifted..this is great...you are spoiling us now .... 😉

I just love you 😃 .....thanks for a story that makes so much sense. I loved the Robbie missing Kasturi part. Oh God, this is the drama that I can live with ......not we are watching on the show

And Tiku saying to Alka that Robbie sanyas le leta. 😆 😆 ........hmnn now that is not we die hard Robbie fans want, do we?... 😆

Unless he decides to take the sanyas in my abode 😉 😆 😆

Lots and lots of thanks dear

Rooting for part 10........ 😃

JWMRK
Edited by JWMRK - 18 years ago

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