New *FF* upd:'LoVE-BaCK TO BAcK':Pt 6 pg8 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
wow puja great part i love it exp karan
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

again an awesome part puja..

omg...i'm loving it sooo much...
d way shubhz keeps waiting for him...d way she gazes at him n ofcourse d way she tore his shirt is sooo cute...i could imagine all dis really...amazing part...
shubhz tore his shirt in front of everyone only to clean his bare chest..oh wow...😍
n d best part was:
Then Karan ran as fast as he cud with his hands over his shoulders..(to save his izzat).to his makeup bus...😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update dear👏...chaiwala ad juice wala scene were good to read...shu tore his shirt and cleaning his chest...no comments😳😛
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sv003

awww.. such a nice update by u puja👏

i loved the roka{karan-shubhangi} part a lot☺️❤️ Haa all the parts were Of them only!!

thanks for the PM🤗

waitin for the nxt part...Will Update soon

love
swetha

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shumi.

great update dear👏...chaiwala ad juice wala scene were good to read...shu tore his shirt and cleaning his chest...no comments😳😛


Arre thanks Yaar
I knw Specially I luved the juice one!!!
NO COMMENTS!!!...I can understand Y!!!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
wow
1st part was aussum
loved it yaar
shubhangi ka character mast hai
n the concept is so good..
keep it up...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
2nd part was hillarious...
loved it..
shubhangi ko karan se pyar ho gaye pehli nazar mai..wow..
Edited by hazraluvarjun - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

superb updaTE

u r a gr8 writer...👏👏
Edited by hazraluvarjun - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Thanks all GUys thank u thank u thank u for liking my FF
So here the 4th part
Soryy for such quick updated!!!!

Karan in Dressing Room::::::

Karan:::"He bhagwaan...Ye ladki!!!Mughe sabke Samne Nanga kar diya!!!Shit mannn...Maine aaj tak ayesi ladki nahi dekhi...She's crazzy..

Conference::::

Press:::"Ekta Ji congratutions on ur new show..I have a question for Karan-Karan How did u bag the role oF Robbie??
Karan:"Amm jst got a call from ekta nd..agreed to do the show!!

Press:::"wow aapko toh ghar baithe baithe offer aa gaya!!!"
Ekta::"And He's worth it..I mean he's really a vry gud actor nd that u'll vitness in the cuming episodes!!"

Press::"Ok Shubhangi..Tell us sumthing abt ur love life...Kya apko apke sapno ka rajkumar mil gaya hai??
Shubhangi::"Ahh..My dream man...I guess (looking towards Karan) Haan mughe mill gaya hai!!!"
At this Karan's smile was lessened a bit !! (He didnt knew that it was He himself)

After sumtime in the set::

Director::"Ok OK NOw Shubhangi Ye Tumhara nd Karan ka pehla scene hai..Karan tumhein bathtub mein kheech lega nd Tumhe chillana hai chodo chodo..OK is that clear??"

Shubhhangi::"Clear Hai sir"

DIrector::"OK NOW
TAKE 1
ACTION!!!"

Kasturi Enters into Robbie's room.."Sir..Robbie Sir"
Suddenly Karan pulls her in the bathtub..
Shubhangi forgot to say chodo chodo...She sarted staring Karan And Karan was lookiing into her eyes..Her wet hair..Her wet cheecks!!!
"Love will find a way..Janiyeee Hiriye!!!!!!"

Director"CUT...
Shubhangi ye tum kya kar rahi ho?Tumhein chillana hai chodo chodo..
and Karan..Tumhein use tickle karna hai...C'mon guys..."
OK TAKE 2
ACTION!!!

Shubhangi enters the room...
Karan pulls her to his bathtub..
She starts shouting chodo chodo...
They act out the scene for 5 mins..

Director::"OK cut...very gud shot guys!!"
Shubhangi::"chodo chodo chodo chodo"
Everyone was staring at her...Karan had left her already when the director had said cut...
Bt still she was going on shouting "ChODO CHODO"
Karan"Shubhangi...scene ho gaya...main tumhein kabka chod chuka hoon"
Everyone-the lightmein,cameramen,makeup man..everyone started laughing at her...

NEXT SCENE::

DIRECTOR::"see shubhangi ..yahan tumhein Karan ko thappad marna hai..OK and tumhare lines is paper mein likhe hain yaad karlo.."
OK
ROLL CAMERA
ACTION!!!!

Shubhangi slaps Karan..

director::"CUT
SHUBHANGI !!!Karan koi bacha hai kya.??TUM use pat kar rahi ho??
Itne softly nahi zoor se maaro...TUm toh uske cheek aeyse chu rahi ho jaise yahan koi romantic scene chal raha hai!!!"

SHUBHANGI::"Par sir main Karan koi itni zor se kaise maar sakti hoon"
Karan::"Shubhangi..u dnt worry...tum bas character mein chuso and mughe zor se thappad maro OK"
Shubhangi""OK"

DIRECTOR::"NOw TAKE 3
Roll CAMERA
ACTION!!!

SHUBHANGI AGAIN SLAPS KARAN GENTLY..AS IF SHE IS TOUCHING him ...

Director::"CUT
Shubhangi kya kar rahi ho..?feel lao...Zor se maaro"
Karan"haan shubhangi chalo c'mon..slap me"
Shubhangi"NO"
KARAN:"SLAP me I said"
Shubhangi::"Nahi..main ayesa nahi kar sakti"
Karan::"I said slap me"she shouted
Shubhangi"OK"

And Shubhangi slaps him...HARD
us thappad ki gunj...Dur dur ke gaon tak bhi sunai Di...

KARAN's hands were over his face..his mouth open..AND he stood still ..Groaning in pain..
Shubhangi::"oh I m soo sorry I m sooo sooryy"she said in hesition"aap hi ne toh kaha tha ki.."

KARAN::"itni zor se nahi kaha tha.."

SHUBHANGI::'I m soo sorry...apko bahaut zor se lagi kya??"
Karan::"Nahi...mughe toh lagi hi nahi.."he said..making fun of her..
Shubhangi::"Aap mere saath chaliye...mere dressing room mein.."
She dragged him to her dressing room..

And took out a medicine to cure his cheecks which had turned reddish...😆
She Applied the cream on his cheecks
Karan::"ye kya hai??
shubhangi::"arre ap dekhiyega isse apke gaal phir se thik ho jaenge"
While Shubhangi was speading the cream on his face..Karan was gazing at her...
He looked into her beautiful eyes..
Her pinkish cheeks
and her lips!!!...
and again there was LUV IN THE AIR
"Mitwaaa"





Edited by Iloveroka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
wow
superb update...this line was so funny..
He bhagwaan...Ye ladki!!!Mughe sabke Samne Nanga kar diya!!!Shit mannn..
i love shubhangi's character...she slapped karan omg...bechara karan...pls continue soon...
Edited by hazraluvarjun - 14 years ago

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