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Posted: 16 years ago
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di di di di di di di di di di.........

i'm sooooooooooooooooooo happy dii.....i'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooo happy today!!!
today only happy news for me...ME TOO HAPPY TO HEAR THAT U R VERY VERY HAPPY.MAY ALLAH KEEP U HAPPY FOR EVER...from school,from home n from my dear dii shumi dii.....our class got FIRST prize in TALENTIA DANCE COMPETITION........its done class wise!......n our class got THIRD prize in CLASS DECORATION COMPETITION!!!! heartiest congratulations for the achievement molay👏
BCK TO UR FF!!!
dii.....in the first part itself......roka..yep😛...in all other ff's ro used to hate ka in da begining n den start loving her.....but here it different~!!!! for sure this ff is going to be different.
yea i'm sooooooooo happy dii today,....i dnt have wrods to express my happines!! thanks dear.be happy in your life for ever
dii wat a part dii wat a part!!!no words to describe it!!!!!!no words at all!!!
ooooooooooooooooooo robbie as rockstar again....dat's great!!! thanks
dii is dis the story of only ROKA or ARJUHI will cum in between???????????? (pls answer dis 1st dii) it is only RoKa no arjun and arohi...😃
its definitely "FORTUNATELY" (not UNFORTUNATELY) kasturi's name was not there in the first half!!! but it is unfortunate for robbie.poor guy...wait for the other parts to know about it.
u noe wat jaanu will be very happy wen she'll see this thread as much as i was...i bet!!! i know. i think she is busy in attending her coaching classes.for the past few days she did not log in at all😭.i just saw this thread n i just jumped into it without luking any other thread!!!! hahaha...thanks molay
dii y did u change ur concept??? because the previous concept will lead to a very long FF which i cannot right now.present ff is going to be a short ff not very long.whether u change or diddnt change ur topic....dat doesnt matter.....i'm sooooooooo happy dat u started ur new ff!!!!!!!!!😃😃X10000000......0000....thanks
n now i can read it evryday!!! sorry molay i don't think that i can up date daily.but i will try to up date frequently.
let's rock it dii!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ yep let us if u all support me😃
lets continue our journey to CROSS 250pgs this time......yeaaaaaaaaaaa😉yep my previous ff crossed 255 pages,but i don't think that this ff will cross even 100 pages.let us see
i'm soooooooooooo happy!!! thanks
continue fats dii!!!😃will try
love u😳 love u 😳love u😳 love u 😳love u😳 love u 😳love u diiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!😳me too...me too...me too....
Nechu
shumi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swan20

Shumi congrats on starting your 3rd FF.........👏thank you soooooo....much anuuuuuu.....😃.hope it will impress you like the other two😛.

very intriguing beginning.....thanks...so RoKa know each other from before..yep kasturi knows him but not robbie....wanting to know how & where.....😛to get to that point you have to wait for minimum of 10 to 15 parts....hahahaha...i know you are looking at me like this...😡 heeeee....i am sorry i cannot disclose so soon because that was the key of my FF...😳

loved how you described both robbie & kasturi. thanks

as always your style of storytelling is very smooth & relatable.....great going...
👏thanks again for u r appreciation.these words means lot to me and gives strength to my FF😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hmughal1

Shumiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!! 😃

wahayyyyyy another ff!! woop woop!! glad to see you happy and dancing😃
fantastic start!! im lovin it already!! 😛thanks sounds very interesting...and different!! 😉for sure i will try to make it different ofcourse interesting too
love the way yu described robbie and kasturi 👍🏼 too good!! thanks again dear for liking it
n the end part wen kasturi says confidently that robbie wil come 2 them...woahhh that was deep..i felt that!! yep that is what i want to feel ie kasturi's confident and her deepth in her saying and you got it.i am glald that i was able to convey what i want.
all in all awesome beginning sweety!! 👍🏼i hope it will go good till the end
n the best part is that this time i will be a regular reader n not join in from the end!! 😆hahaha.....so true
looking forward 2 next part!! 😊will post soon
Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago
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first of all congrats di ke aap ne new ff start kia aur as usual aap ne bohot acha lika superb di!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Shumi 😊

Awesome start 👏
Im already very intrigued 😲
Pehli nazar mein - I love that song - and could totally imagine Robbie singing it 😛
Loved how you described Kasturi thorough Robbie's eyes, with him noticing each little detail 😊
Also loved Robbie's description 😳
So they know each other...Kasturi remembers...Robbie doesn't? 😕
Confused but sure it will be revealed 😉
Update soon 😛
Love TJ xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

m soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy😃😃😃 that u r back with yet another terrific fanfic..... ur new fanfic is just fabulous...thanks for u r grat comments.... now we get to read daily updates😃😃......i am sorry my health doesn't permit me to up dater daily..i will try to up date alternate dates.... just loved the concept, its really new as kasturi already knows robbie and robbie has started falling for kasturi...trying to make it new.let us see hoe it comes out.and how far u all like it?... every fanfic of urs has a compleletely unique and fantastic story...thanks for your biggest compliment😃.. dieing to knw robbie's and kasturi's past...you have to waight for 10 to 15 parts to get the story unfold ...heee..i know u are all getting angry...hahaha...... pls update sooooon, to day i will inshallah will u update daily? i don't think so😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: missindia26

Hi Shumi 😊 hi TJ😃

Awesome start 👏thanks dear
Im already very intrigued 😲hope till the end i will try to keep up .
Pehli nazar mein - I love that song - and could totally imagine Robbie singing it 😛i love that too .that is y i gave u the link.thanks for listening
Loved how you described Kasturi thorough Robbie's eyes, with him noticing each little detail 😊
Also loved Robbie's description 😳i know😳.we all love robbie...😛
So they know each other...Kasturi remembers...Robbie doesn't? 😕yep
Confused but sure it will be revealed 😉yep..but not very soon.
Update soon 😛inshallah today
Love TJ xxx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-3
next day it was Saturday morning around 8am:

robbie sabarwal bed room:
robbie was hugging his pillow and lying upside down.the time he went to bed he was continuously getting disturbed by the little girl in his dream ,who gave the excellency medal to him .finally he woke up from the sleep.with out opening his eyes he tried to bring back her innocent face in his mind.he put his hand under the pillow and searched for the thing which he kept yesterday.when he got it he took it out,he opened his eyes and looked at it.it was Indraprastha University excellency medal !!
'i do not got a medal either in school days or in college days.that too for academic excellency😲...no way...😊'the thought brought a smile on his face.he stared at the medal.he could see the innocent face of that girl in it.' who is she? why i am so much attracted towards her? among thousands of girls what is special in her ? why i could not control my self ? i am not a adolescent boy to get infatuated and she is not the first girl whom i met, then why i am impressed with that little girl?.she is very much younger than me,may be 6 to 7 years younger.so far i have moved with ladies more or less of my age. but now what is wrong with me 😕...'he wondered.

i don't even remember her name,i can only recollect that she is second year chemical engineering student. i have to wait till monday, two more days...' he calculated the hours left for monday in his head.
alana:'robbie...enough of sleeping get up...'she came in with tea tray.robbie immediately hid the medal under the pillow ,closed his eyes and started pretending as if he was in sound sleep.alana is robbie's elder sister,yet to marry.in fact has no interest in marriage.
alana:'robbie...utto...'
robbie:'dii...aur thodi thayr sonay tho na...'he said without opening his eyes.
alana:'omg...do you know what is the time now?...'
robbie:'dii...please...'he said hugging the pillow tightly.
alana:'...aaj shaniwaar hai. get ready and come down for pooja...'she gave the tea to him.
robbie:'teek hai...'he got up hesitantly and took the tea cup from her.

chawala house,kasturi's bed room:

kasturi was in sound sleep.

kiran:'kasturi...utto...'she pulled her blanket.

kasturi:'please dii...aur thodi thayr sonay tho na...'she pulled the blanket and covered herself from head to foot.

kiran:'kasturi...university jaanay may late ho ja wo gee...utto...'she shook her.

kasturi:'wofo...dii...aaj chutti hai...'she pushed the blanket from her face and found non in the room.she suddenly got up with shock and sat on the bed.she started sweating.

kasturi:'di...dii...diii...😭'she screamed and looked around.kiran was not there.her scream turned in to cry.she put her hand under the pillow in hurry and took out kiran's photo, looked at the smiling kiran in the photo.

kasturi:'diii....😭'she wiped her tears.

kasturi:'thum nay issa kyun kiya?😭...ek baar bhee may ray baaray mai nahee socha?😭....socha ho tho thum issa kabhee nahee karthee... kabhee nahee...😭'she hugged the photo and winced.

ajay:'kasturi....'he entered calling her.kasturi immediately wiped her face and hid kiran's photo under the pillow.ajay is kasturi's elder brother.he is elder to kiran too.he is a civil engineer by profession.
kasturi:'ji bhaiya...😊'she tried to smile at him.

ajay:'aaj shaniwaar hai.jal thee say chai peelo aur thayaar ho jawo. hamai mandir janahai...' he came in with tea cup.

kasturi:'teek hai ...'she took the tea from him.

monday:

most awaiting day for robbie sabarwal.he killed more than 48 hours to reach this day.around 10 am, robbie was in his office and his secretary anitha was reading his schedule.

anitha:'meeting with the bombay client at 10:30 am,..'

robbie:' ummm hummm...'he nodded his head.

anitha:'rehearsal for the up coming concert from 1 to 3 pm...'

robbie:'then...' he was keen about his 4pm appointment

anitha:'coffee with your friend rama at 4pm...'

robbie:'cancel that...'he said instantly.

anitha:'tho...sushma kay saath fix kar dthon...😃'
robbie:'😡...'he raised his head and gave an angry look.
anitha:'chaar bajay tho mai bhee free huon😛😳.....'
robbie:😡
anitha:'sorry sir...' she went out with long face

exactly 4pm robbie parked his car in the parking area of Indraprastha University.it is the month of january.the climate in delhi was very chill.robbie step down from his car and slammed the door.
he was wearing white jeans and white full sleeve shirt.over the shirt he wore a sleeveless , close neck crimson red plain sweater, around his neck there was a long white muffler.he pulled the muffler from his neck and cover the lower part of his face with it.he don't want to show his identity and create disturbance in the university.first time in his life he regretted to be a celebrity.he put his hands in his jeans pockets and slowly stepped ahead the university entrance gate.

kasturi and shivani came out of the cafeteria.kasturi was wearing a long baby pink skirt and long matching blouse,over that sky blue full sleeve sweater.she was holding her books close to her chest with her left hand and licking choco bar ice candy from her right hand.

shivani:'kasturi you are unbelievable...ithnee sarthee mai ice candy...?'

kasturi:'i like to...😃'she said while licking the dripping side of the candy just like a school girl.
shivani:'weird taste...'she shrank her face and teased her.

both were walking towards the gate to exit .kasturi was concentraing on her ice candy. robbie noticed kasturi from the distance.soon his blood rushed from his toe to head ...head to toe...and created a feeling of roller coaster emotion.he took his hand from his pocket.he slowly pulled down the muffler and uncoverd his face.

kasturi:' thum...😛'she rushed to him with her eyes wide open.

shivani:' robbie sabarwal...😲' she never expected.

robbie:'hi...😊'he tried to speak. his face became as bright as thousand 1000watt light.he could not stop staring at her.he hoocked on to her innocent face and ocean blue eyes.

kasturi:' hi....😃'she looked left and right side of herself,her left hand holding books and in right hand dripping ice candy.she quickly bit a big part of the candy and remaining gave it to shivani by force.

shivani:'shock...😲'

kasturi extended her right hand to him.he looked at her hand with a smile.

kasturi:'sorry...'she said looking at her dirty hand with choco bar sticking here and there.she immediately tried to wipe it on her skirt.before she could wipe robbie put forth his hand and hold her palm.

robbie: 'hi...😃' he grinned at her.his voice got chocked.their hold extended for a minute with no speech.kasturi could feel the warmness of his hand while robbie could feel the chillness of her hand.both the palms were in opposite temperature created a wonderful sensation.

before he could speak or act kasturi pulled back her hand.

kasturi:'...auto...'she stopped a passed by auto and rushed in.shivani was completely confused.

shivani:'...k..a..s..t..u..r..i...😕'she ran behind her shouting and jumped in to the auto.the auto moved.

' K..A..S..T..U..R..I' robbie recorded her name in his mind.

shivani:'what the hell you are doing?😡....'she threw the half eaten candy out side the auto.

shivani:'kasturi... you gone crazy.because of you second time i missed the chance of getting autograph from robbie sabarwal...kith na acha moka tha...ufff...'
kasturi:'shiv..i did not call you...'she said with out any expression,as if nothing happened.

shivani:'i know... idiot...😡' she yelled at her.

shivani:' doesn't matter...patha na hee wo kisay doondthay huway yahaan aaya tha? mai patha lagawoon gi aur uss ki autograph ek dhin zaroon loongee...'she challenged to kasturi.kasturi gave a sickning smile at her.

robbie stood still looking at the auto slowly dis appearing from his sight..he took the muffler and covered his face again.' why i am behaving as crazy as a teenager????' he wondered.
Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yipee....me first!
Superb part yaar!
Robbie is a very busy rockstar......he's tooooooooo coooooool:)

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