NEW FF: YeH ZiNdAgi UPDATED PART 5..PG 11 JAN 9-09 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow another ROKA ff.YEP........so happy.......😃..........love the character sketch.....THANKS ALOT....thanks for making raunak kasturi's brother.......😉....😃😆😆......waiting for u to start......😊I AM UPDATING THE 1ST PART TODAY....ENJOYYYY😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😃😛i really like da character sketch THANKS SOO MUCHHH...

aww.poor kasturi--her parent died..awww YEH IDIDN'T WANT ANY PROB..BETWEEN ROKA

continue soon,....SURE...

I HOPE U START ANOTHER FF SOOONNNN!!!!!😆😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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raunak is kasturi's younger bro...that was too sweet....HI SHUMI DIII....YEP I DIDN'T WANT HIM TO COME BETWEEN OUR ROKA
devika character is absolutely opposite to that of serial. excellent...YEAP AS I WANT HER TO BE NICE TO KAS
anitha is robbie's sister good.. good...OH YEAH SHE WAS ON MY NERVES....
robbie loves to tease people...i know i know other wise how he will tease my sweetooo kashu....YEAH
lol you brought yug in this ff.i love that guy in the other ekta's serial TSPLS
great character sketch👏YEAH I WANTED TO BRING HIM AND VRINDA SINCE THEY R NOT IN ANY OF THE OTHER FF...I LOVE THAT SHOW....SO JUS BROUGHT HIM IN
lol you read 15 FF!!!!! I KNOW I KNIOW....and connenting them too regularly!!!! YEP IT'S JUS THAT I HAVE NO TIME COMMENTING THEM....I READ ALL THE KASTURI FF,...ALLLL OF THEMMM.....NOW I AM GONNA HAVE EVEN LESS TIME COMMENTING OTHER PEOPLE'S FF...I HOPE I SURVIEV JUS KIDDING....omg!!!!...i am fainting. NOOOO DON'T AS WE NEED U😆😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey greate character sketch THANKS...I HOPE U ENJOY...
cant wait for the 1st part! I AM UPDATING IT TODAY...
Aaliyah😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey theree!!
HIIII...
Just finished replying to your comments on my FF,OH... and here I get this surprise!! YEPP...Congo on your first FF- I am sure it will be a success!THANKS ALOT...
The character sketch is brilliant! LMAO I couldnt stop laughing when you put Raunak as Kasturi's brother, and Anita as Robbie's! HAHAHAHAH! I lovee that! YEAH I JUS WANTED SOME CHANGES.....
And Im glad Puru/Devika are good in this FF! YEAH AS I HATE HER MEAN CHARACTER IN THE FF.....
Raunak-Shivani story sounds great! 😛
And I feel SO bad for Kasturi's parents/sisters! Aweee.. *sniffs I KNOW BUT I HAD TO DO THAT SINCE I DIDN'T WANT ANYONE TO CREATE PROB...
Oh.. and RoKa's new love story in your FF- can't wait for that!.....I AM UPDATING PART 1 TODAY HOPE U LIKE IT...
-- Mimi😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good start!!! THANKS....Update soon!!!!UPDATING PART 1 TODAY...😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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here u go guys.....i hope u guys like this part..as i am not sure if i did a good job....hope u guys like it...feel free to comment and criticize..

PART 1:
Sleepy Kastu
ri getting up from her bed and turned the alarm clock off went to the bathroom to wash her face……… and brush her teeth. When she came out of the bathroom she saw vrinda was still sleeping…. As vrinda and raunak both don't get up before 8:00. as rau goes to college at 8:45am. and vri leaves the house to look for job. Eversince she has finish college, she is troubled by finding a job wherever she goes to look for a job, she gets turned down either she doesn't like the rules or the people. Yesterday, she went to give a job interview for preschool teacher, but she couldn't handle it because first of all they offer her very low salary. Then because of one of the kids she falls in the sand box which was a little bit muddy since it rained the previous night. She hated that but got control over her anger. Then she was changing one of the baby dippers. The baby actually pee on her, so she got really mad and left from there very frustrated. When she came home..... by luck Kas was home, so she burst out all the anger on her. Kas understood what had happen. When vrinda told her everything Kas couldn't control and she burst out laughing. That's how vrinda is…

Kas:: vrinda…vrinda utho Dekho its 7;30 and I have to leave in an hour for an interview and u also…..plzzz uthooo….uthooo verna hum log late ho jayengey….

Vri: kas its only 7:30……soney do na mujhe..

Kas: yr interview is at 8:30 2 with me remember we both applied to the same company….if we don't get there on time we might not get the job….and u klnow we need the money really terribly..

Vri: tu fikar kyun karti hai….huh?? sun mein 5 min mein ready ho ki ati hoon….okkk

kas thinking in her mind….yeah right and leaves from there and goes to her closet and takes out a black and white shalwar kameez…and goes to take shower….she comes out of the bathroom goes to her dressing table and applies some make up and wears black hoops….when she is done with herself she finds vrinda gone frm the bed….she knows that now she is gonna take an hour long shower so she goes and knocks on the door….

KAS: vrinda mein mandir jaa rahi hoon jub tum ready ho jao gi tu Mujhe udar hi mil lena….

(kas always starts her day with doing pooja…so she left the house by giving a kiss to Raunak and wishing him luck for his exams….and left frm there)

ROBBIE"S HOUSE

same time Robbie wakes uop and rushes to the bathroom because he was very late for his office as today was the day he was suppose to pick his PA. he comes out wearing a black dress pants with white shirt with blak tie and coat…he runs to the breakfat table and takes his ma and bauji's ashirwad…and then says sorry to everyone for being late …

ANITA+SHI: same time say…its ok bro

Rob: ma mein office mein hi nashta kar loon ga…mein phele hi bohut late ho chukka hoon…

.( with saying that he runs out of the house)

DEVL: Robbie suno to…

( but Robbie as he was in a rush didn't even listen to his ma and went straight ti the same mandir where kas was heading…as Robbie also starts his day by getting blessing frm bhagwan….)

That's it for today….if u wanna know rob and kas meet keep on reading….yeh zindagi….

Hope u guys like it….plzzz leave yr comments…..

Inshallah if u guys like it I will post the next part by tomorrow…

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gud start yaar
wats ur name by the way
hmm ka gonna be robs PA great
update more

sari
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey I just read ur FF and it was great I liked Kasturi and Viranda friendship it was so sweet Robbie looking for a Pa Hope kasturi gets chosen for the post keep up the great work

Update the next part soon

Love Mariam xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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good start........so is kasturi gonna be robbie's PA........waiting for next part......😊

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