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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: annu08

my guess was right please update soon

waitinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

ohh,i was jus writin da next part
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: robbieluvr

wow jatin is the best in acting evil

agreed
you chose the right guys
😃
but plzzzzzzzz update karo yaar
okay

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sarareimoo1

jaldiiiii updattttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!

muniiiii!!!.....quick quick!!!
cant wait!!
came online to read ur FF!!!!!
Lolzzzz!!

omg!!!!!!!!!!!dat is so sweet of u dat u came on I-F to read my FF..it means alot to me..thanks n dunt worry ill update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!I M SOO HAPPY I HAV NO WORDS
ANODER SURPRISE-A NEW READER
YAYYYYYYYYE
OKAY,ILL UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 17 years ago
~~~~PART 18~~~~

Robbie woke up next morning.Kasturi was not on her bed.Took a shower & went downstairs.He found nobody dere.

Robbie:Nandu Kaka!!!

Nandu:jee sahab

Robbie:sab log kaha hai

Nandu:devika aur puru sahab tou kisi kaam se subhah nikel gaye the.Pata nahe-koi office ka kaam tha shayad.Raat tak aye ge

Robbie:hmmmm.Aur kasturi Kaha hai?

Nandu:woh bhe kahe gaye the.Buta kar nahe gaye.

Robbie:Kya??kasturi ghar mein nahe hai..Kaha jasakti hai.Acha ye butao kab se gaye ve hai

Nandu:sahab!4 ghunto se

Robbie:hmm.acha tum ab jao

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Two hours had passed.Robbie was waiting for Kasturi.He coudn't pass the time.Sometimes he switched on TV,den closed it-den sat on the computer-den closed it.Now he had started to get Worried for Kasturi.

Robbie thinking:Kaha jasakti hai ye???kaha phone karo.Us ka tou yaha koi hai bhe nahe aur us ke paas tou phone bhe nahe hai.

He was getting restless.

4 hours had passed.Kasturi is till not back.Robbie went to the terrace & closed his eyes & started praying to god

Robbie:bhagvan!mein ne app se khabi kuch nahe manga leken ab mang raha ho.Please mujhey Kasturi lautadey.Ussey waapis bhej dey.Pata nahe kaha chali jaye hai mujhey chor ke.Please Kasturi ko bhejdey.Ainda app se kuch nahe mangu ga leken meri ye dua zarur qabool karan

While he was saying dis,His eyes were teary.

While he was praying,Kasturi was back

Kasturi:Nandu kakka!!nanduuuuuuuuu KAkkA!!!

Nandu:jee

Kasturi:sab log Kaha???(Robbie heard heard Kasturi shouting Nandu's name.He came downstairs running-Kasturi's back was facin her)

Kasturi:Sab log Kaha-

When robbie grabbed Kasturi's arm & turned her around with a jerk.Kasturi was surprised.She saw da tension on Robbie's face.

Kasturi:Sab theek hai na?r u alrite?

Robbie hugged Kasturi(dishoo dishoo-camera zoomed-lolz)

Kasturi was quite confused,buh she hugged Robie back coz to Kasturi Robbie seemed v.disturbed.

Robbie while huggin her

Robbie:mein ye nahe pucho ga ke kaha gaye the leken ye zarur kaho ga ke ainda baghair bataye aggar tum mujhey chor kar kahe bhe gaye-to mein tumhey jaan se maar do ga(wid dis he wiped his tears-& moved away from Kasturi)

Kasturi:mein mandir gaye the.buh is everything alrite??

Robbie:(a lill angry at dis q)no its not alrite!subhah se ghar se ghayab ho aur mein itna pareshan tha

Kasturi was surprised at his behaviour.

Kasturi:mum dad ghar par nahe hai!

Robbie:tou

Kasturi:drama karney ki kya zarurat hai,wen dey arent even home

Robbie:tumhey lagta hai ke mein drama kar raha ho?

Kasturi:well,in reality,humara koi RISHTA nahe hai,aur app dramey kar rahe hai tou its good buh if u r really worried den its strange coz HUM APP KE HAI KAUN???

Robbie:(fuming wid anger)Tum meray liye mera..................................................................(robbie thinking=Kya?kya hai ye akhir meri)

Robbie:uhh!!!kasturi!!waisay he-i was worried. ab itne sawaal matt poucho

Kasturi:okay!okay!I M SORRY

robbie:its alrite

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scene changes to Robbie alone in his room

Robbie thinking:

Akhir kya hai hum dono key beech mein.Woh such he tou keh rahe hai.Humara koi RISHTA nahe hai-ye tou sab aik drama tha...Per mujhey Kasturi ki itni parwa kuon honey lage hai.Kuon mein us ki aik jhalak dekhne ke liye tarasta ho.Kuon us ki mathey ki aik shikand pe mein puri dunya sar pe uthane ke liye tayaar ho.Kuon us ke bina jeena acha nahe lagta.Kuon us ki siwa kuch acha nahe lagta

Background music:

Na jaane kab yeh hua

Na kisi ko khabar Na khud ko pata

Khoye khoye rehte

Hum yahan hai

Silsilo ka silsila hai Hua shuru

abb jo nikle bhi jaan

Abb se humraahi chahton ke

Yeh jaise phela nasha.

Woh pheli nazar phela gumaar

Yun lage mohabbat hi jahan hai

Doston ki dosti yaaron ki yaari kam lagne lagi

Behke hai hum behka yeh sama hai...

akhir kuon

????????????????

Ye Kya horaha hai mujhey.Mein aisa tou na tha.Kahe mujhey pyaar....Nahe nahe....Tumhe kaisay pyaar hosakta hai Robbie sabhwarwal

Kuon nahe hosakta.Mein tou pyaar pe yaqeen bhe karta ho aur in books mein ne parha hai...Pyaar ke side effects aur symptoms aur mein bilkul waisa ban gaya ho....

Shit!!!!!!!!!!Robbie sabharwal-tujhey pyaar hogaya hai..Tujhey tumhary sapno ki larki mil gaye hai..........

Hawa bhi mili thi humein

Jhokon mein pooch rahi th

i Pyaar yeh agar nahi to phir kya hai

Aye aasmaan tu bhi aajkal saang chalta hai

Saaath leke chanda taare ..

Kaise samjhaau tumjhe

Mera phela phela pyaar hai yeh

...

I love u!!!Kasturi-i love u v.much

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Writing dis part of the FF was da most difficult task!!!n it took alot of time 4 me to write dis as i wanted to make it special.Mayb its not upto da mark buh plz plz plz leave ur comments even if u think dis part sux coz i really worked hard on dis part
Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
reserved.

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yayee!me first!!

sorry!I read this part b4 but cldnt comment as I was quite busy😭

this was the best part till now!!

wow!robbie hugged kasturi!lolzzz..the camera zoom was cool!😆

and I loved the song!😳

and finally!finnallY robbie realised he loves kasturi yayyeee!!😃

lolzz...I just cant stop dancing!😆
Edited by shanu333 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part Muneefah.............it took me back to the time when Robbie had started falling in love with Kasturi in the serial....😍 😳.........u've captured the same turmoil which robbie feels very well...😊
Robbie praying for Kasturi's wellbeing was so sweet....😳
ROKA hug was so cute.....😳........the dishoo camera effect was funny....😆.....tum ekdum serial ka effect la rahi ho...😉
Loved the part.......waiting for next one...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
umm!!!!!!!!i m sorry buh wat do u mean??😕
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: muneefah

umm!!!!!!!!i m sorry buh wat do u mean??😕


means that i have reserved the place and will comment later😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shanu333


means that i have reserved the place and will comment later😳

ohh yea!!!!!!!!!so stupid of me!!okay dokie..ill wait 4 ur comments

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