The Charm of Red Dupatta - KZK PreRish AnuLika FF - Page 2

Originally posted by: oa2019

nice start. good tip would be to clearly sepearate what the character says & the scene but good start.

Thanks dear. Second part is released

Originally posted by: esha143

An interesting concept and more interesting characters.... Looks like Komolika's character will get some justification in this fic....nice.... A different approach to Rishabh's character.... Will have to see how he'll be here as a young man... PreRish are about to become friends....looking forward to that.... Hope Nivi's choice of bride is not Prerna here...Let's see what's gonna happen....waiting to read more.... Do continue soon... And best wishes for your first writing attempt.... 👍💕

Thank you so much dear. Of course, both the couple would be given equal space.

Originally posted by: Peacefulmind

Gooddd

Wanna see new vision

Thanks a lot dear

Awsommmmmmeeeeeeee! Interesting... very interesting... liking the plot very much... Prerna-Rishabh have a sort of crush on each other and for now Komolika is also a sweet gal while Anurag is psycho... I wonder if Anurag's rights would get fixed Prerna... I hope not. Update next soooooooon!

Chapter 3 - The Proposal

The episode starts with Rishabh calling Prerna through phone. Prerna attends the call. Rishabh introduces himself and asks her to come Park by evening as he want to speak something. Prerna agrees. Prerna goes to the park by evening. Rishabh came there. Both greeted each other. Rishabh says, "I know you for some days. I like your personality. Shall we be friends?" Prerna says, "Yes. But I don't know about you only I have a good impression on you". Rishabh says, "I don't have father and my mom raised me. She is my inspiration. I have a sister and her name is Kuki." Prerna shows a photo where Kuki and she took selfie yesterday to Rishabh asks him if she is Kuki. Rishabh nods and asks how she knows her. Prerna says that they were recent friends. Prerna says, "I am an orphan and running a coffee shop as part-time job. I have a sister. Her name is Komolika." They talk till the night. Friendship blossoms along with love. Rishabh drops Prerna at her house.

Next day, Anurag announces his family, " I will open a bakery today so that I could earn for my future. Please attend the opening ceremony." Though his sister are happy, Mohini doesn't like the fact that he is to run a bakery. Anurag names the bakery as 'AnuPre's Sweets'. Nivedita is happy and she plans to visit Prerna by evening.

Komolika visits the shop and asks his well being. Anurag notices that he has some special feeling for Komolika. Anurag says he is fine. Komolika asks her red dupatta. Anurag says, "Isn't your sister?" Komolika scolds him and says, "Its nine of your business". Anurag give ger shawl and ask her to thank Prerna for helping him. Komolika doesn't care his words. Komolika feels guilty of scolding Anurag. After two minutes, she apologizes Anurag. Anurag saw her eyes. Her magical eyes captivated him and they share an eyelock. Ae dil hai mushkil song plays. Komolika left his shop. Anurag follows her. Komolika spots him. Anurag came from his bike and kneel down infront of Komolika. He gave a rose bouquet to her and proposes. He promises that he would keep her safe and happy for the entire life. He says, "I know by your eyes that you admitted me to hospital and you saved me. Even dupatta is yours. I am loving you. Its not a compulsion to accept immediately. Take your own time and give a positive reply." Komolika is astonished and impressed by his proposal. She knows that she too loce Anurag. Komolika give her red dupatta to Anurag and agrees. Anurag carries her and shouts loud.

Rishabh and Prerna meets at park. Prerna asks about well being. Rishabh says he is good. They spoke for hours. Then,Rishabh and Prerna simultaneously says that, "I love you". Kasauti song plays. They share a eyelock. Rishabh asks Prerna if she would become his life partner. Prerna agrees. They hug each other.

Chapter 4 - Mohini's anger issues with Prerna

Mohini gets ready to go Prerna's house for alliance. Tapur and Rakhi accompanies her. Mohini reaches Prerna's house. Prerna greets Mohini and asks them to get inside. Prerna gives them tea and biscuits. Mohini asks about her family. Prerna says, " I have a sister Komolika, she is in coffee-parlor and We are running a coffee parlor". Mohini nods and compliments her house thanks Prerna for saving Anurag. Mohini says, " I am talking straight now. Will you marry my son, Anurag? We are one of the richest family in this place. We are additionally respectable and we have three acclaimed doctors. There is no need to pay dowry too. You don't want to run any cafe too. You can take your own time and give a positive reply". Prerna says, "I am actually memory cafe for my parents memory. I am not interested in Anurag as I am loving someone. Sorry Madam". Mohini gets angry but controlled and says, "You can get too many offers if you marry Anurag. Even you can reform this age old building." Prerna says, " I am not interested in money and I am not a sort of girl who decieve someone for money." Mohini gets angry and about to slap Prerna and she blackmails Prerna. Rakhi and Tapur controls Mohini and apologized to Prerna and left the house.

Anurag dances in club for the song Ek Aankh Maru to Parda hai along with Komolika. The members in the club claps them and wish them to become a romantic couple. Anurag changes his Bakerys's name into "Anulika Bakery and Sweets". Anurag sends a photo of Komolika to Nivedita and says that she is his princess.

Mohini is irked by Prerna's words and she calls some goons to kill Prerna. Mohini murmurs, "How dare she is to disrespect Mohini. She is nothing in front of me. She is utter useless for my son. I'll get a new bride for my son within 12 days" Some goons go to Prerna's house and attacks her. They kidnapped Prerna and take her to the godown. After some hours, Prerna texts Komolika and Rishabh that she is in danger and send the live location to them. Komolika is with Anurag, after seeing her message, she cries. Anurag asks her what happened. Komolika narrates the event. Anurag promises Komolika that we save your sister as soon as possible. Anurag reaches his room by climbing the wall without anyone's notice and took a pistol from his room. Soon, Komolika and he reach the godown. Rishabh was present before them. They noticed that there were ten members. Rishabh asks Komolika to act as a salesgirl. In the mean time, Anurag and I get inside and release Prerna. Komolika pretends to be a salesgirl. Anurag and Rishabh enters inside but unfortunately Anurag sneezes loud. The goons saw them. Komolika hits two men with rod. They faints. Rishabh and Anurag manages to fight with those goons. They defeated almost all. Rishabh releases Prerna. Rishabh thanks Komolika and Anurag for helping him. Three goons are about to stab Rishabh and Komolika. Prerna pushes Rishabh and Komolika and the daggger gets into her stomach deeply. Rishabh, Komolika and Anurag shocks. Anurag shoots all the goons and three were dead and remaining are fractured. Rishabh carries Prerna to the hospital. Komolika and Rishabh cries. Anurag consoles them and says to Komolika that everything will be alright. Rishabh asks Anurag, "How do you get pistol?" Anurag hesitates. Komolika cries louder. Anurag completes all the formalities and he filed a complaint in police station. Doctor says, "Prerna is alright but she becomes sterile". Komolika and Anurag gets shocked. Rishabh thanked the doctor for saving Prerna. Rishabh enters and speaks to Prerna. Prerna cries and says she is unable to concieve. Rishabh consoles and says, "My love wouldn't reduce for you and it is not a big dealing. Only you are important for me." Tum hi ho song plays. Anurag promises Komolika that he would not spare the real murderer. Rishabh and Prerna share a romantic moment. Rishabh kisses Prerna on her forehead. Prerna gets discharged after 15 days.

With the permissons and approval of Bajaj's, Rishabh and Prerna marries each other by taking their marriage vows. Komolika greets the couple. Anurag hugs Rishabh and wishes them to lead a romantic life. Anurag asks Komolika about their marriage. Komolika smiles. Anurag says, "I have to say something about my past."

Originally posted by: kavyanjali08

Awsommmmmmeeeeeeee! Interesting... very interesting... liking the plot very much... Prerna-Rishabh have a sort of crush on each other and for now Komolika is also a sweet gal while Anurag is psycho... I wonder if Anurag's rights would get fixed Prerna... I hope not. Update next soooooooon!

Thanks for commenting.... Of course Prerna won't end up with Anurag. Next chapter is published

Chapter 5 - Anurag's heroic act and PreRish's Romantic night

Prerna and Rishabh enters the house. Kuki intervenes, "Bhabhi, where is my gift?" Prerna smiles.

Prerna - "I didn't buy any gifts after all I am your gift." (looks at her in a funny way)

Kuki - "Oh, don't flatter. You're my bhaiya's gift. Give some bribe to let your romance continue otherwise no first night..."

Rishabh - "Kuki... my god... she is making us embarrased."

Prerna takes a small red bag and gives it to Kuki. Kuki opens it and it is a Shangralla flower which is Kuki's favorite and one of the rarest flowers."

Kuki jumps in joys and hugs Prerna.

Kuki - "Thankyou Bhabhi, Only you're the best."

Rishabh - "Oh, enough of your romance... Let us begin the rituals."

Kuki - "Hello, Mr.Bajaj. I won't spoil your romance anymore. Always possessive about his wife and thinks only he have to romance..."

Rishabh looks confused. Others laugh.

Maya: Dear, don't give a word to her otherwise, the situation becomes chaotic.

All smiles.

They gets inside. They were asked to find a ring from a bowl of milk and flowers. They both immersed their hands into the bowl. Prerna take the ring first.

They get into the bed room. Prerna is sitting like a shy girl and her face is covered by her pallu which make Rishabh smile. Rishabh removes the pallu slowly and Prerna smiles. He kissed Prerna on her forehead. They share an intense eyelock. The lie on the bed and united physically and screen freezes.

Scene 2

Anurag wore a red dress and lying on Komolika's lap who also wore a red dress, speaking about their love stories. Anurag reminds their romantic moments. Anurag says, "Do you have any aim, princess?" Komolika says, "Nothing except developing my coffee parlour". Komolika asks Anurag about the same. Anurag says, "Except keeping you happy and protective, nothing is my aim". Komolika asks him not to flatter. Anurag says that it is not flattering says that it is called love . Komolika asks, "Anurag, how do you get pistol even none of them are IPS or government officials?" Anurag says, "Its something related to my nasty past. Still I am guilty of it".

Komolika looks at him surprised and asks - "Ok, What is your past?Is that affect our future?"

Anurag says, " I worked as a police officer one year ago in New Delhi. I am very workaholic and rarely visit relatives. One day I saw a girl. Her name is Sonal(Hina Khan) who is a photographer. She is really a beautiful girl. She attracted me and she herself proposed. I was confused but I accepted her as my soulmate. Though I am workaholic, I spend nearly six hours with Sonal everyday. I speak about myself to her but she never wishes to reveal much to me. I thought she maybe shy. That assumption made me mad. My higher officials ordered me to find the terrorists planning who is planning for a bomblast on Mahashivratri. I am able to find the terrorists and managed to arrest them. From them, I find that Sonal is the captain for that terrorists group. I felt betrayed for the first time. I got angry with her deeds. But controlled myself not to harm her as she is my love. I located her and she is with remote that activate the bomb. She threatens me to kill the innocent people. She forced me to shoot her. Before she press the button, I shooted her hands but the officers fortunately deactivated the bomb. Out of anger, I shooted her five times. (Aakhri Baar plays). She is dead. I found a note inside her pocket. She said that she loves me."

Anurag cries. Komolika asks, "Why did you resign yout job?" Anurag says, "Sonal was six month pregnant with my child when I killed her. I got higher promotion but I left the job out of guilt for killing my child and Sonal."
Komolika gets shocked. Komolika says, "You're not guilty. You just sacrificed yourself for the nation which is each and every citizen's duty." Anurag denies and shouts that he is a sinner. Anurag says,"Even my parents or friends don't know about Sonal. Only you know her. After that I become a drunkard, psychopath and an idiot. You came into my life and heal all my pain."

Komolika says, "You just wasted a year for your ex. You haveto join the service soon." Anurag says, "No. I am not interested in IPS. Just because of my father, I joined there. My aim is to start a bakery and expand it. It become possible just because of your eyes and charm that has the power to heal." Komolika smiles. Anurag kisses her. Sun raha hai tu plays. Komolika says, "I love you." Anurag hugs her. Anurag takes Komolika to the temple. He creates the fire and they took wedding vows. Anurag applies Sindoor and ties her mangalsutra. Komolika thanks him for making her his wife. They returned to home. Komolika and Anurag consummate their marriage.

Next Morning, Anurag and Komolika registered their marriage in registration office. Anurag enters Basu's house and introduces Komolika as his wife to everyone. Mohini gets shocked.

I just read first part 😍😍 very nice concept I loved it❤️❤️

Nice part i love prerish 😍😍😍