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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Hello Annuu..🤗

Nice update sunshine...smiley32

Thank you so much .. 🤗

Rishabh nd meneka part is very fishy....

U ended in very bad part.. mujhe prerna ka gusse wala roop padhna tha....😂😂😂 Badly waiting...bas prerna apne mann ki bhaat bolde...

Hahaa.. I know but wo part hua nahi tha.. isiliye wahi ek point tha to end. Next part is about their conversation. :)

Does rb don't have a feeling for prerna???smiley5

No. Not at this point. He is absolutely and completely over whatever little he began to feel like a family for her at Basu Badi.

Waiting

Continue soon

Working on it. Saturday is the target...

Thank you again for reading...🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#52

Hello Yoga.. hope you are doing well 🤗

Heyyy !! First of all, Congratulations for your third thread! So proud!

Thank you so much.. All the credit goes to the amazing readers like yourself, who read and share their views, indulge in conversation, discuss things related or unrelated to the story.. suggestions, criticisms. Everything.. so thank you ..

Coming to the story, I loved Maasi and Rishabh's scene. It was so emotional and showed how much Maasi cares for Rishabh unlike in the show. It seemed so genuine.

Masi here is the caring one, just like she ended with Bajaj phase 1. I always wanted to see her as a positive character but CVs ruined her in between.. I am so happy her emotions came across as genuine.. makes me so happy :)

The flashback scene between Rishabh and Menaka was also very heartfelt. It clearly shows how much Menaka loved or still loves Kukki. She even wanted Rishabh to always choose Kukki. Seems like Kukki is a complete carbon copy of Menaka. She understands him especially gets to know when he's sad as did Menaka.

Kukke indeed is a carbon copy of her mother. She loves and understands her father equally well or more may be.. That scene was also written to give a glimpse that Rishabh has been protective of his daughter even before she was born. Glad you liked it…

Prerna still thinks Rishabh would do something so deliberate just to make her leave from Kukki's life. She needs to think a bit more. She wants to get accepted in his life but she herself can't trust him enough.

She is still the same person who reacts and thinks later. Also when she is around Rishabh her dormant fierce side easily surfaces and she turns into something she is not with others like we saw during the pre-wedding and pre EMA phase of the show. She will learn soon..

Menaka and Prerna's conversation was very nicely written. Menaka's emotions were very well depicted.

Thank you :)

All in all, a very good chapter. Waiting for the next!!!

Thank you so much for reading.. and sharing your thoughts.. I always love to read what readers feels when they read.. I am working on the next one.. should be up by saturday..

Take care 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#53

Hello Jyoti.. how are you 🤗

Congrats Meena for 3rd thread..

Thank you so soo much Jyoti.. aap sab read nahi krte.. views share nahin karte to ye hota hi nahi.. so all thanks to you 🤗

I just read the next part and saw ur reply.. thanks for replying..

Please don't thank me.. I love reading and replying to all the comments.. :)

Yeah Masi know's about Prerana and she gave her 2 pounds on her come back..

Yess.. Tanvi the khabri told her already so Masi knows it. 🙂

Rishab's was so gulity reminiscing that night how kukkie was hurt and feared..

He is. He was even in the initial chapters and felt miserable.. and Kukke's accident made him realise of his grave mistake..

FB was nice they had all - understanding, love and affection i am curious to know what Meneka did?? kukkie did learnt her mothers magic trick without her teaching, and rishabs reaction is worth reading. Menaka also wants rishab to choose their daughter over her.

Kukke was always the priority.. even before she was born. He promised to keep his family together but he didnt or couldn't. Glad to know you liked reading it :)

He could not protect his family?? Does Rishab's mother met menaka??

Rishabh's Mom died when he was 12 years old so no one but Masi knows his mother and Dr. Rastogi

Masi really good and cares for rishab.

Yess.. koi to bada hona chahie uske life mein .. so Masi it is..

Prerana felt humilitated but Rishab was right he is investing his money and he has to know its utilised and how they are planning. Meneka was not at fault i felt that day she was so emotional by meeting kukkie..

Exactly .. you read my mind here.. exactly what I had in mind while writing.. 🤗

And what prerana wants to speak with him?? he was no where wrong.. Hope prerana understands and learn things fast..

She will learn for sure.. but it's good at least she is going to talk to him instead of keeping it to herself rising the misunderstandings..

This time u updated very fast smiley20

Yeah.. thoda jaldi..:)

Continue soon..

Saturday. Wish me luck ho jaye tab tak..

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Posted: 5 years ago
#54

hey great update.

Hello… thank you for reading 🤗

it's getting a little trickier for me, i don't think Prerna is in love with RB but just wants her family back

You got it all right. She isn't in love with him. When Bajaj 1 phase ended (beginning of this story) she respected his as a father but she was totally in love with Anurag. After Anurag went missing and Basu including Moloy almost threw her out of Basu Badi did affect her and made her think about herself and family. She did remember RB's words about self respect but it was all respect not love. Losing her child made her realise how she wronged Kukke. While detaching with Anurag she began to understand her 3 months as Mrs. Bajaj but that wasn't love. She defended Bajaj in front of Sharmas but that was realisation that they did worng but can't be love. How I see Prerna's character she can't fall for him so easily. But she wants Kukke for sure..

& I'm not sure if Menaka wants RB or her family back either.

She wants them but she has tried a lot in the past and she know its not so easy. That's why she is happy being able to be around people she loves.

its hard to decipher Menakas feelings, she seems genuine at the moment. really need to understand how things went wrong in the past, RB & M seemed so in love so it must have been something major. can't wait for the reveal.

Very soon we will all know ye kya chal rha hai.. Prerna will get into it and find it out. Just prerna ko us stage tak phonchaya ja rha hai..

and eagerly awaiting the next chapter and the confrontation that's coming. i just hope P doesn't make a fool of herself, she has a habit of overreacting.

You got her so right. She overreacts and then realises ki ye kya kar liya.. I will update it on saturday..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ektamaddan42

Nice update sunshine.....👏

Thank you so much Ekta.. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

Again I am posting without reading it from the start but I could not stop myself from reading the latest updatesmiley4

Haha.. not an issue.. I know reading so many chapters can take time.. so even if you want to read from the latest updates :)

How wonderful Masi is. Loved her worry and care for her.

Thank you so much.

Reading the update and comments of fellow members I understand that dream was of Rishabh and Menaka (who I presume is his ex-wife and Kukki's mom). But what a beautifully written dream sequence. Loved every bit of it. That little dream explains why Bajaj has been so protective about his daughter. Dream gave quite a beautiful insight of that aspect of Bajaj- the father.

As you have not read previous chaps, I'd like to share that this story is based on past of Bajaj missing from the show with focus on building PreRish in the process. So that dream was a part of his past to show how he has always been protective of his daughter.. even before she was born..

He didn't want to come back to his house because something has happened, probably I need to.read previous chapters to know more. Meeting room conversation felt sooo real. Bajaj and Prerna... lovely.

Yes. He has some bitter memories linked with the house he is in.. his own house

Now they new one to one in next update ..

Will update on saturday.. hope it comes out well.. something you enjoy..

Thank you so much for reading.. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#57

Hey read all your chapters continuously. And I'm in love with this ff.Hope rb and priyu reconcile early and menaka is positive in this ff. She will sacrifice for rb and prena .And reading ur ff .i myself am planning to write a story on prerish all thanks to u bcoz I got this inspiration from reading ur ff 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

What a brilliant update!!!

Thank you so much Pori.. I am so so happy you liked it smiley31

I loved all of it ♥️

Yahooooo smiley41 Ty
RB in the meeting seemed so different.

I hope "different" wasn't bad. I tried to bring out his Businessman wala side. I hope it worked..
okay, lemme be honest, I’m starting to like this version of Menaka and trying not to get attached to her.

This has to be one of the best comments I must say and I love you say 'you are trying not to connect with Menaka'. Menaka should feel proud..
Woman, you need to continue soon!! Finally RB and Prerna is meeting one on one and Prerna is angryyyy, lol

I am working on it .. am a bit scared how it will come out post writing. But I know I should leave that on readers.. thank you very much again for reading. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: original07

And Congratulations for the 3rd thread! 🥳🤗

Thank you soooo much... wouldn't have been possible without you and all the beautiful comments shared every single update.. so thank you again 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#60

Hello Sunshine

Hello 100% Original07.. how are you doing?

I just read the last two parts.

Thank you so much for your valuable time. Appreciate it🤗

Loved them.

Yeyyyyy.. isse zyada khushi ho nahi sakti..

Is Menaka positive or negative?smiley44

Ummm what do you think?? 😁

Like till now toh she is positive..and i think what she did in meeting too wasn't planned or something...it was spontaneous to get RB's attention momentarily.smiley22

You are absolutely right. She played no game in that meeting. She acted like any experienced professional will act. She is one of the founding members of AMRA herself so she wants the best like everyone else even if she is externally connected at present. She got his attention in the process was a cherry on the cake. No planning no plotting..

I dunno what you have thought..but i don't want her to be negative!smiley14

Okay.. done 😁 I love how Menaka has made a little space for herself. Some hate her, some readers like her.. yeyyy..

And Prerna lashing out at Menaka..I thought she won't say anything to her...but she just blurted out everything. Hmm. And i think she was a bit jealous too seeing Menaka with RB all cool...great progress there..atleast she is showing first sign of love..jealousy! smiley9

Ekdam sahi pakde hain.. jealousy is where we are heading to. Aise hi to she will not fall him.. nahi to Basu Badi mein hi ho jata 😊

When will RB get to know what happened with Prerna and Anurag? smiley44

Soon as per story timeline but update wise a little bit time is needed. Till now 2 weeks have gone in the story since she moved to Mumbai. Very less interaction. Post next update more interactions will start and then situations will come up where she will tell him.

But then what?? RB being RB would still think that Prerna would leave them once Anurag is back!smiley24

Exactly .. abhi bolke nothing happens.. so I am creating some situations where it will create some impact on Rishabh. Abhi to he will become over protective for Kukke if he isn't already

This conversation which is coming between Prerish will be really interesting.. waitinggg!

And I am writing :)

I was a bit with busy with my work so read two updates together and hence comment. Abhi ke baad i will be regular with comments. smiley31

Please don't say sorry as we all have a life to live and we all are busy. Rather I feel grateful when you decide to spend some time reading this and sharing your thoughts and questions. Everytime I see a notification it does make me really happy.. so Thank you

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