FIGHT AGAINST DESTINY-PreRishFF Thd#3 (Chapter 28-34) - Page 3

I loved the conversation between Massi & Rishabh.

He is ok with Prerna till she doesn't create any problem for Kukki.

Maasi knows he didn't forget the past yet.

His dream💔

He is in so much pain thinking Kukki doesn't have a mother and now she is looking for that affection from Prerna who may leave her anytime.

Maasi was very worried of Rishabh, that he may go back to his dark phase. And its good that he is not going back to that phase now.

Kukki & Rishabh scene is all hearts❤️

Prerna is worried about whether to tell him her past which he doesn't know or not.

Her fear is genuine as she doesn't know how he would react after knowing this.

The meeting was kind of good, in the beginning, turned a nightmare for Prerna by the end.

RB & his questions😎

Prerna thought Menaka did it deliberately. But even if she didn't she did get to have a normal conversation with Rishabh after all these years.

I can understand why Menaka was so lost in the meeting after she met Kukki, we can't blame her.

But Prerna still feels that Rishabh did this knowingly.

I am very excited for her TALK with him now.

Lovely update Meenakshi, continue soon.

Heyyy !! First of all, Congratulations for your third thread! So proud!

Coming to the story, I loved Maasi and Rishabh's scene. It was so emotional and showed how much Maasi cares for Rishabh unlike in the show. It seemed so genuine.

The flashback scene between Rishabh and Menaka was also very heartfelt. It clearly shows how much Menaka loved or still loves Kukki. She even wanted Rishabh to always choose Kukki. Seems like Kukki is a complete carbon copy of Menaka. She understands him especially gets to know when he's sad as did Menaka.

Prerna still thinks Rishabh would do something so deliberate just to make her leave from Kukki's life. She needs to think a bit more. She wants to get accepted in his life but she herself can't trust him enough.

Menaka and Prerna's conversation was very nicely written. Menaka's emotions were very well depicted.

All in all, a very good chapter. Waiting for the next!!!

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Everyday 😱

Kaise hoga. Insaan saans kab lega

Humko toh sir Insaan hi nahi samajhte hain

Not Menaka please ab aur nahi she is unbeatable too much sugary sweetness. I somehow fell she will retort to her old shrewdness.

When will rb know what happens in Prerna's life☹️

She has definitely lost her mind. Again they are going to lock heads. Hope for the best.loved it awesome update

Loved the conversation between Rishab and Maasi.

I must say you have incorporated everything

Rishab's Past - That scene with Ara was so beautiful

Rishab's guilt - I always always wanted to see a monologue of him regretting that night

Both were amazing.

Prerna had a right to be angry with Menaka. I get it she didn't do it deliberately but she could have handled it a bit better and not through Prerna completely under the bus.

Prerna iski life main itni schemes ho chuki hain use sab kuch ek sazish lagti hain. But it would be amazing to see them both logging their heads to each other. For me the first Prerish scene were they were challenging one another was one of the best. Waiting to read more of them.

I have a sincere request I am ok with some Meneka but itna business language mat dala karo baar baar padh ke samajhana padta hain aur aadhi cheezein sar ke upar se nikal jaati hain. 🤔

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Loved the conversation between Rishab and Maasi.

I am glad you liked it.. I always wanted Masi to be the nice Mom figure Bajaj had. She entered the show a good caring elder but fir Cvs went mad as usual. But last mein she ended as nice again.. thanks CVs for that warna Masi ko kaise redeem karna padta pata nahi 😃

I must say you have incorporated everything

I tried to offer a variety of angles, past, present and a bit of what happens next.. Glad it worked..

Rishab's Past - That scene with Ara was so beautiful

He had a great life. He was an amazing business person but he wasn't always this cold. The past that was missinh from the show is what led to this story in the first place..

Rishab's guilt - I always always wanted to see a monologue of him regretting that night

Yahoo.. unknowingly I fulfilled your little wish 😃🤗

Both were amazing.

Thank you..

Prerna had a right to be angry with Menaka. I get it she didn't do it deliberately but she could have handled it a bit better and not through Prerna completely under the bus.

Yeah agree.. though Menaka didn't do anything deliberately becahse she was being the professional she is... but it was enough to Prerna to feel hurt..also after a successful stint at Acharyas with an informal environment. She faced top business leaders for the first time. Her beingn youngest and least experience didn't help either. That's why she felt like she failed. Next chap will touch this lightly and she will change. She has been learning and evolving since chap 1 slowly..

Prerna iski life main itni schemes ho chuki hain use sab kuch ek sazish lagti hain. But it would be amazing to see them both logging their heads to each other. For me the first Prerish scene were they were challenging one another was one of the best. Waiting to read more of them.

That was the purpose.. she reacts and then regrets. Also she changes into a person who is not ready to give up so easily as soon as she id around Rishabh. That was the case in Basu Badi as well. Baki sabke sath she is always the one sacrificing. His presence brings that side of her that is mostly dormant. That's what I tried to do here. Next chap is all about them.. No Menaka 😕

I have a sincere request I am ok with some Meneka but itna business language mat dala karo baar baar padh ke samajhana padta hain aur aadhi cheezein sar ke upar se nikal jaati hain.

There have been three business convo heavy chapters so far. I had to do it bring out the feel of the room and the conversation and keep it a bit close to reality. But it won't be a lot I promise. Also taking your request and suggestion into consider will try to keep it lighter if there.are more such incidents in future updates.

Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your thoughts.. :)

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

That was the purpose.. she reacts and then regrets. Also she changes into a person who is not ready to give up so easily as soon as she id around Rishabh. That was the case in Basu Badi as well. Baki sabke sath she is always the one sacrificing. His presence brings that side of her that is mostly dormant. That's what I tried to do here.

Tell me about it. It is like she is a different person altogether who has mind who fights and speaks not the stupid lovesick sacrificing mad that she is.

Next chap is all about them.. No Menaka 😕

Originally posted by: crazyforu

She has definitely lost her mind. Again they are going to lock heads. Hope for the best.loved it awesome update

She is the youngest in the lot, inexperienced facing some big shots of business world where emotions take a back seat and work takes the front foot. Wo emotional isliye snapped facing her first encounter that she thinks was a failure.. but it leads to get into her stronger mode. Next chap is thr conversation..hope it interests you.. thank you for reading.. 🤗

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

That was the purpose.. she reacts and then regrets. Also she changes into a person who is not ready to give up so easily as soon as she id around Rishabh. That was the case in Basu Badi as well. Baki sabke sath she is always the one sacrificing. His presence brings that side of her that is mostly dormant. That's what I tried to do here.

Tell me about it. It is like she is a different person altogether who has mind who fights and speaks not the stupid lovesick sacrificing mad that she is.

Exactly. You said it all..

Next chap is all about them.. No Menaka

I really hope it works with the readers. 😊