Prerish os series: STOLEN KISSES part 5 updated 9/6 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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awsm update to gud

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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

I love your narration.

The way Prerna was trying to distract him to pull him out of the depths of betrayal and its aftermath was heartwarming.

Mr Bajaj's growing urge to kiss her. ❤️

Thank you
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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Update kaun dega kaun dega update.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Update kaun dega kaun dega update.

Dungi toh main hi bas thoda sa patience.🙂🙂
Edited by Guntaaskaur - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Here is an early update for you.My take on the party because we deserve it.

Mr and Mrs Bajaj

“Mr Bajaj aap kaha hai, saare guests aa gaye hai aur host he missing hai, aur aapne mere calls kyu nahi receive kiye” she huffed and he could sense the irritation in her voice, his grip on the steering just tightened a little.

“Mrs Bajaj agar maine aapka phone answer nahi kiya, matlab main busy tha, I am sure aap itni competent toh hai ki ek party sambhal le”

“My competence isn’t the point, yeh aapke guest hai aur aapk isuccess celebrate karna chahate hai, aapko congratulate karna chahate hai toh please jaldi aa jaiye”

“Aap biwiyo ki tarah order kyu de rahi hai Mrs Bajaj” he asked mildly irritated, mostly exasperated.

“Aap patiyo ki tarah argue kyu kar rahe hai Mr Bajaj, please jaldi aa jaiye” she said and hung up.

Such meh inse toh baat karna hi baikar hai Prerna thought and began attending the guests.

While she had been talking to the guests she saw Nivideta enterthe party and color drained from her face, there was no way Mr Bajaj had invited her but she couldn’t create a scene here and decided to tackle the situation calmly.

“Nivi di…….” She started but was cut off.

“Wow Prerna humari family ko barbad karke apni life enjoy kar rahi ho, tumhe pata hai yeh party tumhare pati ki jeet nahi mere haar ki hai pardon’t worry bohot jald meh jeetungi aur isse se bhi badi party dungi, tab dekhna,I am so happy Anurag aur hum sab ki life se tum bahar ho” Nivi was about to walk past her but Prerna stopped her by holding her wrist.

“Really Nivi d” her tone was low and menacing that would definitely make her husband proud “itna sab hone ke baad bhi aap mujhe accuse kar rahi hai, aapke liye maine jo kuch bhi kiya uske baad bhi, maine aapse zyada ungrateful log nahi dekhe, aapko pata hai aap kyu nahi jeeti kyuki aap sirf dusro ko haarena ke bare me sochti hai. Aur mere ghar meh guests ki respect hoti hai par aapko yaha par kissi ne invite nahi kiya, so I suggest kiapp shanti se yaha se chali jaye aur doobara bina bulaaye yaha par aapki family ka koi bhi aaye toh agli baar security aapse baat karegi”

she knew she was being harsh but nivideta certainly deserved it,after everything she had done for them, they had the audacity to accuse her in her own home and Anurag’s foolishness of trying to go after Mr Bajaj was getting on her nerves now, it felt like an insult that he had no respect for the sacrifices she had made to keep him safe and was hell bent on digging his own grave.

Both the ladies were oblivious to the pair of eyes that had noticed their exchange.

“Prerna tum apni hadh bhool rahi ho” Nivideta started and was cutoff

“Hadh apni aap bhool rahi hai Mrs Sengupta, mere wife se aise koi baat nahi kar sakta, don’t you think aapko apne office meh hona chahiye clearing up your brothers mess.” Said Mr Bajaj walking towards them and standing behind his wife.

He was certainly proud of her but her crestfallen face tugged something in his chest and he wasn’t going to let her be sad now was he “Mrs Bajaj you could give me a run for my money in some cases, waise agar aapki shaadi Mr Basu se huyi hoti toh aapke life me drama ki koi kami nahi hoti right” he teased her in an attempt to lighten the mood and was rewarded with a small smile instantly.

“Drama toh mere life me aapse shaadi karke bhi bohot hai, but aap bohot terrible host hai, apni party me itne late, aren’t you worried ki aapke guest par bura impression padh sakta hai, I mean I don’t exactly have much experience with such things” she asked with raised eyebrows.

“Mrs Bajaj, I am sure aapne mere guests ka dhayan bohot ache se rakha hoga, I trust you and your capabilities” he said it in the same manner like he talked about everything routine but the words warmed her heart and her smile reached her eyes.

“Well hum already bohot time waste kar chuke hai, guests attend kar le” she said moving past him towards some of his colleagues and he couldn’t help smiling at the coincidence that the green of her saree perfectly matched the colour of his tie.

Wasn’t this too domestic. He thought

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“Mr Bajaj if you don’t mind me saying, aapki wife bohot achi hostess hai, she is not just beautiful but also charming” Mrs Dutt praised.

Rishab wouldn’t admit it but he was certainly impressed, this was the third time in the past five minutes someone was complimenting his wife, so it looked like it was just his head she wanted to bite off every time they conversed because it appeared that everybody else was in awe of her.

“And extremely sweet and polite too” someone added and Rishab controlled the urge to roll his eyes, “polite” and “sweet” “do ghante main dus bar argue karti hai” but there was no need to tell them that.

“You really are a very lucky man”

He looked at her from the corner of his eye, talking to an elderly lady with a sweet smile gracing her lips and the corners of his mouth tugged up just a little while he replied “That I am”

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Later in the evening she was in his arms, dancing to some cheesy romantic slow song he didnt recognize and all he wanted to do was kiss those lips painted in red,he so desperately wanted to figure out how would she taste, sweet like the smile that grazed her lips or like heat and spice that was on the tip of her tongue by default or smooth and exotic like the wine he had just drunk instead he had simply twirled her in his arms, carefully measured her reaction when her back had hit his chest and let his brain fantasize about scenario’s that never would be.

******************************************Hope you liked it, don’t forget to leave your likes and comments.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Domestic PreRish everyone praising mrs Bajaj & Mr bajju ka reaction 😆 and and and drama kam nahi hai 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Domestic PreRish everyone praising mrs Bajaj & Mr bajju ka reaction 😆 and and and drama kam nahi hai 🤣

Drama kam ho he nahi sakta. I love the fast comments.
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guntaaskaur

Drama kam ho he nahi sakta. I love the fast comments.

I opened the thread when it was 0seconds. 😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

yay early update, thank you. the chapter was lovely, written very well. can't wait for the next moment.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Oh my god! A surprise update and so so so good!!

The conversation reminded me of the scene from the show! Again, I wish show main yeh dekhne milta

But I am so happyyy that you decided to re-write it and you are doing a fab job’🤗👏

Aise hi jaldi jaldi aur fantastic updates dete rehna 🤗

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