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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunn_shine

Yeyyy... next chap it up it seems. Will be back in the night


Will wait for your comments

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

This part reminded me of the s1 track in which Mr Bajaj requested Basu to let the doctor attend an infant Sneha first.

Even I remember the part. He could have gone to any length for Sneha that was Rishab Bajaj.

I liked how RB manipulated that wicked Komolika to save Sneha.

Thanks,Komolika is wicked but Rishab Bajaj can be much much more than her when needed

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow quite a dangerous side of Rishab can be seen in this part.... But it didn't help sneha is still in danger... Hopefully they will find the donor soon.. please continue soon... Eager to read more... Take care :)

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Chapter 7 – Karma comes back to bite you

“Doctor there must be some mistake, aap ek baar sari reports confirm kijiye agar nahin to Basu family main kisika match kar sakta hai. Aap try to kijiye.”

“Mr bajaj maine saare ke sare reports confirm kiye hain none of them are a match. Inki family main kuch logo ka match hota hain but sare conditions feasible nahin hain. We need to keep looking”

“Mr Basu please there is some mistake let us do this one more time this is not possible”

“Go to hell both of you”

“Mr Basu hell kya hota hain aapne dekha nahin hain main ab aapko dekha sakta hoon aur main dekhaongo but right now I don’t have time for this, aap phir se ek baar test karwaenge”

“Wow just wow what actors you are both people. You know Prerna main wakai main is hope pe aaya tha ki shayad yeh bachi meri hoon par nahin. But I guess yeh sab hona tha tumhara asli chehra samke samne aasake.”

“That’s enough Mr Basu. Not one more word about my wife. Aap abhi jakar test karwaenge abhi.”

“Warna kya karenge aap. You know Prerna hume dhamki deti thi ki yeh hamare business ko barbaad kar denge. Par dekho haath phelaye kkhada tha. Hara hua plead kar raha tha hamare samne ab bhi kar raha hain.” Mohinibasu

“Mrs basu main kya kar sakta hoon yeh aap log dekh chuke hain, shayad bhul gaye honge main yaad dilao. Aapke ghamand ki neev kya hain main jaanta hoon hilane main waqt nahn lagega.” And he looked straight at Komolika standing behind them.

“Dhamki de rahin hain mujhe Mr Bajaj” Anurag

“Warning de raha hoon aur yeh bhi isliye bcoz right now I need you else. So go in and perform the tests” Anurag grabbed his shirt

“Anurag let it be, ek baar aur test karwa lete hain.Choti si bachi hain kya kya farak padta hain. Mistakes ho jati hain. Inhe bhi yakeen ho jayega and we will be done with it” Komolika

After sometime in doctor’s cabin and even after a second time the test came negative and they had no other option but to look for donor and time was running out.

“Is that enough for you, we are leaving. But you know what I am happy we did this inhe aise hara hua haath phaiwale hue dekhneka mauka mila.” Mohini Basu

“Ek din aapko sach pata chalega and you will realise ki inhone jo kiya usme unki haar nahin unki sabse badi jeet hain.” The Basus left from there.

“Mr and Mrs Bajaj we are trying to find donor we need someone by the blood group of b-ve. Apki family ya relation main agar kisika ka hain”

“Ek min B- yeh yeh to Kukki ka blood group hain.” MrBajaj

“But no” Bajaj and Prerna both said at once.

“nahin Kukki abhi bachi hain uske test hi nahin honge to transplant ka sawal hi nahin hota hain” Prerna

“Mr & Mrs Bajaj maybe we should try once, I mean operation main itna risk nahin hain, Kukki is a healthy kid her liver will grow back that is if she is a match. Let’s do one thing why don’t we get her tested by then if we get some other match then great otherwise, we have to make a decision and it will give you some time.”

“Meri bachi bol nahin sakti thi kuch din pehle tak ab ja kar she is better and you are saying phir se. No way. Nahin Mr Bajaj yeh main nahin agree karungi. Kabhi nahin. Ho sakta hain reports ko kisine manipulate kiya hoon ho sakta hain Komolika ne jo bhi hoon aap dobara sare test karwaye jo karna hain kijiye par Kukki nahin.”

“There is no manipulation Prerna, reports are correct. Anurag is not a match and we are not able to find one and “

“And what ek bachi already meri main dono ko kaise,jyada risk nahin hain par risk hain na.”

“I will give you somtime” Doctor

“Some time for what. Kukki is small and she might not be able to handle this.”

“Yes, you are right maybe we should keep looking for donor.”

“That is the final decision we will keep looking for a donor.” Mr Bajaj nodded as he knew Prerna was being emotional but this seemed the most practical thing if Kuki was a match, she is healthy and she will also be fine yes, she will be hurt but it is important for Sneha’s life. He knew he had to make a choice but how the hell was he supposed to choose and time was running out. His guilt of being responsible for doing all this become even more after he had found out about Kukki being a match. Mr Basu said it correctly that karma comes back to bit you in the worst way possible. For her daughter he had done all this and now his daughters and prerna might be paying the price.

He came to Prerna’s room and found Kukki there alone.

“Aap yahan kya kar rahin hain. Mumma kaha hain?”

“Tests? Hum Sneha se kab milenge and why is it that I cannot see her, Who mere liye hi to aai hain.” MR Bajaj looked at her confused.”Dekhiye aap papa aur aapki Mrs Bajaj mumma aap log to pehle se hi hoto the ek bar phir se ban gaye aapki promotion hui kya nahin na. But main main badi sister ban gayi ab tak sirf Kukki thi ab Di ban gayi hoon. To hui na who meri sirf mere liye”

“Logic I must say. But who hain meri team main yaad rakhyega.”

“Haan jab mumma aur aapki fight hogi to teams bana lijjiyega and mumma and I will win but in any other case we are Bajaj sisters and we will always be one team and give everyone our best fight. I will make her very strong.” And Mr bajaj laughed.

“Aapko pata hain jab bhi aapke papa kisi problem main hote hain aap papa ke sare problem solve kar deti hoon. Aap hamesha se papa ki angel thi?”

“thi”

“hoon”

“Actually, thi chalega aapki angel bante bante thak gayi hoon and it sounds childish I am big now no I want to be your buddy yes buddy friends ok and you can make Sneha your angel. Use thoda time lagega main sab sikha dungi. Ok”and did a thumbs up

“ok” and with that Mr Bajaj made the decision or Kukki made the decision for her sister and he took her to the doctor.

“Ok kukki now I want to hear carefully. Aapko pata hain Sneha is sick bcoz one of her parts is not working and we need to replace it. Like your toy batteries when they expire, we replace it. Now we need new batteries and Doctor is saying that it might match with yours, na mera na mumma ka sirf aapka” He was almost fumbling while saying it.

“Of course, it will match dekha mera logic correct thana” and Mr Bajaj smiled.

“So they need to take some tests and then if necessary they will take some out from your body and give to Sneha, now it might hurt you for some days and it might get scary but papa mumma rahenge aapke saath I promise okay”

“Papa” and then she showed her muscles and Mr Bajaj smiled and the doctor started their procedure.

Prerna came back to the room and found Kukki missing.

“Kukki ghar chali gayi hain. Maine bhej diya use.Main aapko batane aaya tha ki donor mil gaya hain. They are taking Sneha into surgery.”

“Really?

“Lekin ab aap rest kijiye, aapko apna dhyan rakhna hain na” Prerna was so happy that she didn’t argue took the meds “Dekha maine bola thana kuch ho jayega. Sab theek ho jayega Kukki Sneha sab” and slept. Mr Bajaj didn’t want her to ask who it was as he didn’t have the strength to lie to her face and he couldn’t tell the truth and fight with her right now.

Kukki was taken into Surgery and so was Sneha. Rishab Bajaj was sitting outside the OT on the chair head between his hands when Mr Mehra came and sat next to him.

“Sir Coffee?”

“Nahin. I took the right decision right. Prerna nahin manti who kabhi nahin manti and time was running out. I took the right decision.”

“Mujhe samjha rahin hain ya apne aap ko?”

“Agar kuch ho gaya in dono ko main Prerna ko kya jawab dunga? Main khud ko kya jawab dunga”

“Sahi ya galat to nahin malum par yeh pata hain They will be fine; they are the Bajaj’s they are made strong by birth and just like me, they all will be very proud of you sir” It brought a faint smile on his face.

“Please have something you need your strength.” And Mr Bajaj took the glass of coffee.

After some hours Prerna woke up and went to the doctor’s cabin to ask about the operation.

“Mrs Bajaj ap kyun uthi. Kukki aur Sneha are fine perfectly fine and we will shift them to ICU very soon.”

“What?”

“The transplant went perfectly fine and Mr Bajaj hain kukki ke saath. Kukki’s liver was a perfect match and Sneha is responding well to it. Both of their liver will grow in some days to full form I must say you have two very strong daughters.” Prerna legs gave away with the shock and Doctor guided him to the nearest chair. She was taken into the ICU and she found Mr Bajaj sound asleep next to Kukki. She went near him and touched his head. Mr Bajaj woke up and looked straight at Prerna and she looked at him with anger in her eyes. Then she went near where Mr Bajaj was sitting before and sat next to Kukki and took her hand in hers. She had not said anything and Mr Bajaj didn’t know what to say and went out of the room. He knew Prerna will not like this decision to do it all without informing her but he did what had to be done. He wished that Prerna had shouted at him done anything but her silence was unexpected and it was killing him.


Chapter 8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasautii-zindagii-kay-2/5163074/prerish-journey-that-made-them-imp-pg108-last-chapter-at-ff-section?pn=23

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Wow quite a dangerous side of Rishab can be seen in this part.... But it didn't help sneha is still in danger... Hopefully they will find the donor soon.. please continue soon... Eager to read more... Take care :)


That was exactly my intention to show how ruthless Bajaj can be when it comes to his family and Komolika is nothing. Thanks for the comments and do continue reading

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Posted: 5 years ago

😆batteries part was so cute

Image update. 🤗

Both sneha and kuki were a match 😎 I don't need to boast I knew it. 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

I liked how Rishabh explained the entire thing to Kukki and she is such a brave child to have gone ahead with this. She loves her sister a lot. ❤️

Prerna has all rights to be mad at Rishabh because despite her saying no for it he had gone ahead with the operation. Now it will be interesting to see how he will manofy her

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Posted: 5 years ago

I am soo sorry I am late. I was supposed to read it last night but I was so sleepy after formating an update. But I am here after reading not just 1 buy 2 updates.. no cliff hanger for me 😛


Chapter 6


Moloy Basu surprised me a lot. I wasn't expecting anything like this from any member of Basu Family. Would be interesting to know why he is such an exception in the entire family. I mean he was happy when Bajaj told them about Sneha's birth.

Now about about Bajaj going to Anurag for donor match. When I read for the first time it didn't settle down well because as a reader we already have a few expectations and it can over ride a writer's pov. Words can be interpreted differently. Also I haven't seen S1 so I can't imagine Bajaj-Sneha relationship. I have not created any liking for Rishabh-Sneha relationship from the show yet because they didn't show anything and it will be very hard to overpower Kukki-Rishabh because their bonding was the best till date in the show. In fact I liked grown up Kukki (uptil now) in the show more than Sneha. So these prejudices also lead to me thinking that why did he even go to Basus.

But after reading the following conversations where you have explained your thought process I read it again with your pov as a writer in my mind. And then I understood that you did this to show how and to what extent he can go when it comes to his family. He kept Bajaj at the backfoot and let Risbabh take over in that moment for his little girl. Perspective changed as I stepped into your shoes.

He even manipulated Komolika. I always imagine Hina Khan wali komolika when I read yours:)

As mentioned as guess in my last comment fortunately Anurag didn't end being a match. Agar wo save karta Bajaj ki newborn ko to faltoo mein ehsaab ho jata uska.. glad aisa kuch nahi hua.

Now I have to read the next one.. though I would loved for Bajaj to be the match but Kukki it is, it seems..

Be back with next one.

You are so quick with updates 😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

😆batteries part was so cute

Image update. 🤗

Both sneha and kuki were a match 😎 I don't need to boast I knew it. 😆


Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Niyati_T

I liked how Rishabh explained the entire thing to Kukki and she is such a brave child to have gone ahead with this. She loves her sister a lot. ❤️

Thanks and yes she is a very brave girl who is ready to do anything for her sister.❤️

Prerna has all rights to be mad at Rishabh because despite her saying no for it he had gone ahead with the operation. Now it will be interesting to see how he will manofy her

Oh she will be angry very angry and both of them will get over their insecurities and guilt when they patch it up with each other

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