PreRish OS: Salvation - Page 2

Originally posted by: Tranquility07

Man, this is epitome of love personified. It was too notch to see his emotions flow through subtle thoughts and mix of his unnerving feelings felt more like a promise to himself to love her forever, unconditionally. That was intense and serene with the light dwelling on Rishabh's hidden characters and emotions. Too deep that I swear, wish to swim through (LMAO 🤪). Great job sweetheart ❤️

Do try writing more of this. Would love to see a similar version for Prerna (considering she lives him with the same intensity)

OH MY GOSH!!! THANK YOUUU ❤️❤️

I’m floored. This is so incredibly sweet of you to dissect it! He is intense and glimpses into his psyche and trying to understand what he is feeling sorta compelled me to pen something.

I think I’m so invested in him and his thought process that it comes a little easy. Her fixation with the dupatta and everything makes it a little hard for me to even connect with her 🤦🏻‍♀️

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Beautiful! You flawlessly portrayed his psyche.

Thank youuuu ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: oa2019

great piece of writing. love the little disclosure of his late wife, nice. would love to read more.

Thank you!! ❤️❤️

I wanted him to recall his wife because I would like to believe that he was happily married at one point :)

Originally posted by: 7APK

Oh My God!!!!

This is a MASTERPIECE 👏👏👏👏

Oh my god!! Thank you ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Annu8193

Very nice update....👏

Thank you ❤️

This is INTENSE!!

I absolutely loved his inner thoughts. About his closed ones, her effect on him, and to which extent he would go for her, to keep her happy, to see a smile on her face. He can do anything for her and he did till now. All for what, just her attention even for a second.

I loved the comparison of his love for his deceased wife and Prerna. Love, but such extreme different emotions.

He is dreading to go to Kolkata as he can't see them together. But he took his decision to not let her go this time. He did it once, but now she is his❤️.

Originally posted by: MR21

This is INTENSE!!

I absolutely loved his inner thoughts. About his closed ones, her effect on him, and to which extent he would go for her, to keep her happy, to see a smile on her face. He can do anything for her and he did till now. All for what, just her attention even for a second.

I loved the comparison of his love for his deceased wife and Prerna. Love, but such extreme different emotions.

He is dreading to go to Kolkata as he can't see them together. But he took his decision to not let her go this time. He did it once, but now she is his❤️.

THANK YOUUU! ♥️♥️♥️

I didn’t want Bajaj to be deprived of love and his previous one should have been pleasant because this time around in love, it brought him a lot of heartache.

He should make his claim on her. I have had enough of this self sacrificing one.. the “then die basu” was my favorite 😂