◘ Breaking Point ◘ | Anurag & Mohini Confrontation / Anupre OS | - Page 2

Originally posted by: bashful_moon

Yippie....

Amanat finally posted an OS...

Thanks buddy for considering my request...

Resing now...

Will unres soon!!!

Unresing finally!!!

Thank you for the OS Amanat... And thank you much more for considering my request.

You have encompassed everything so well... Anurag's fragile mental state, him getting flashes of his past, him feeling an indescribable pull towards Prerna , Sonalika cheap tricks and connivings as usual and Mohini being her cruel and callous self.

Nivedita is another disappointment, as usual.

However, I love this Anurag.... observant and the one acting with planned methodologies rather than heart or impulse.

Now coming to Mohini --- the one you have envisaged here should be her actual nemesis-- her pride, her Anu, seeing her true face and distancing himself from her for good.. But alas!!! In Indian Soap, ma to humesha ma hi hoti hai... How I wish them to show a high octane-emotional drama surrounding this prompt.

And a request --- Please keep writing. I don't know whether you have written anything before or not, but you should keep writing because not only do you have way with words but also a knack to construct idyllic plots, that flow superbly without losing the connect with the precedence(s).

Yeh dil maange more, Amanat!!!

Please give a thought for a sequel....

Thank you once more for making me so proud....!!!🤗

I ❤️ your review!

No problem. I actually write some things when I have strong feels from this show. My dislike for Mohini and exasperation for her getting away with things is one of them. I still can't forget that scene in the hospital where Prerna was in her lavish bong look and she wanted to meet Moloy but Mohini and Nivi ganged up on her. They bullied her and hearing Prerna's sad voice made me sad and angry. 😡

Anurag's fragile mental state is something that would naturally occur after having many accidents, losing memory and being subjected to Mohini's voice on a daily basis.

Who needs an alarm clock if you have Mohini Basu in the house?

My Anurag Basu is slightly different from the show, I really wanted him to react rather than ignore and act like nothing happened. All that pent up frustration and Prerna's influence of right and wrong rubbing off on him.

I love the observant and methodological Anurag too, that's the one I was introduced to when I first watched the show. Those Naveen Babu days...I miss them.

For me, mother is not above God because injustice happens if that's the case. People are people. Not some divine being. Still can't believe she made rasgullas for Anurag rather than apologize to the Sharmas. Omg. This woman only cares about being in her son's good books rather than owning up to her mistakes. She has no ounce of humanity and Anurag is the only one who holds a dagger to her heart so it's poetic justice if he walks away from her.

I do write and enjoy it. I have practised as a kid. I've written a small oneshot of Anupre at the start of this track which hasn't been published and I also wrote an unfinished story based in the last track but scrapped it as it was too hard not to just have Anurag and Prerna kiss or hug each other. 😆 There's a little prompt too with Anupam and Anurag deciding on baby names for their daughters.

Thanks for your lovely review! Glad to be appreciated.

What about you? Do you write?

How did I miss this.. Would love to see mohinis crimes catching up with her..

Do write more... 🤗

Want mohini to run for anu like paro for devdas ..

It was awesome .pls continue if possible.❤️

Originally posted by: Amanat284

I ❤️ your review!

No problem. I actually write some things when I have strong feels from this show. My dislike for Mohini and exasperation for her getting away with things is one of them. I still can't forget that scene in the hospital where Prerna was in her lavish bong look and she wanted to meet Moloy but Mohini and Nivi ganged up on her. They bullied her and hearing Prerna's sad voice made me sad and angry. 😡

Anurag's fragile mental state is something that would naturally occur after having many accidents, losing memory and being subjected to Mohini's voice on a daily basis.

Who needs an alarm clock if you have Mohini Basu in the house?

My Anurag Basu is slightly different from the show, I really wanted him to react rather than ignore and act like nothing happened. All that pent up frustration and Prerna's influence of right and wrong rubbing off on him.

I love the observant and methodological Anurag too, that's the one I was introduced to when I first watched the show. Those Naveen Babu days...I miss them.

For me, mother is not above God because injustice happens if that's the case. People are people. Not some divine being. Still can't believe she made rasgullas for Anurag rather than apologize to the Sharmas. Omg. This woman only cares about being in her son's good books rather than owning up to her mistakes. She has no ounce of humanity and Anurag is the only one who holds a dagger to her heart so it's poetic justice if he walks away from her.

I do write and enjoy it. I have practised as a kid. I've written a small oneshot of Anupre at the start of this track which hasn't been published and I also wrote an unfinished story based in the last track but scrapped it as it was too hard not to just have Anurag and Prerna kiss or hug each other. 😆 There's a little prompt too with Anupam and Anurag deciding on baby names for their daughters.

Thanks for your lovely review! Glad to be appreciated.

What about you? Do you write?

Thanks once again Amanat... I love what you wrote, you loved my comment. Lets give a mini break to mutual admiration society membership for now...

I concur.... Mohini Basu is a walking, talking banshee... It is surprising that Anurag Basu was born to this specimen of the woman. As I wrote in Grace's thread, she is a woman propelled by two emotions --- ego and insecurity, individually toxic, lethal when combined. In her ego she has become blind to even see that degrading or harming Pre means degrading and harming her own son. I can still understand her aristocratic mindset and all the baggage that comes with it, but to hate a pregnant woman just out of some insecurity has knocked Mohini several notches down in my eyes... I believe that subconsciously she knows that Pre's child is Anurag's. Hence, I too want the same poetic justice you have envisaged for Mohini... If not CVs, I will have it in my own alternate universe as well as in your writing.

Please write often. AnuPre or any general character, doesn't matter... I shall be looking forward to reading anything that you would jot down based on the prompt you have. I can already feel that it is going to be light-hearted and intense at the same time....

WRT writing, I'm more into poetry than prose. However, back in school I had to write both prose and poetry as a part of English curriculum. I still write poetry but as a student of mathematics, writing prose has now become an occasional escape. 😊

Originally posted by: -Doppelganger-

Very nicely written amanat 👍🏼 The creatives did steal some scenes from another OS. Lets hope they lift this scene as well.

You have a great command over the language . Do writer more if you get time 😳

Thank you DG. I have noticed the writers taking ideas too. They have taken some from me already (e.g. anupre photo, anupre car scene...). And possibly one from you (replied to you in Anurag AT)

Which story is that? I'm interested now, I want to read it and see if I can remember that scene in the show. Please do share.

And sure. 😉

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Thanks for the OS Amanat and also the link in the AT. 🤗

This was something we all have been waiting for since long. The way Mohini treats prerna despite she doing everything for them and Anurag she deserves even worse. You have nicely conceptualized the scene and brought that our with your words👏

Hope kzk writers can give us such a scene as this lady keeps on getting free pass for all her deeds just bcoz she is his mother. But in my pov everyone ought to face the repercussions of their deeds sooner or later. So mohini too should face that and none other than her own son can do that.

Brilliant OS dear 👏🤗

🤗

Thanks for encouraging me, otherwise I might have not posted. I have more unfinished Anupre stuff but since I'm a perfectionist, it will take time. I think you might love it as it's based in the last track but Anupre are married despite Bajaj being there.

Mohini makes me so angry, I have to control myself when I talk about her. Let's just say, if she sinks so low to the point of no return, Anurag better leave her for good. There's limits that should never be crossed. Using the mother card is so cheap. If being a mother meant getting away with things then all the women in the world would chose that.

Him just emotionally distancing himself from her while staying in the same house as her is too soft, he'll forgive her in no time and she will go back to being a selfish mean evil woman, rinse and repeat.

She needs a fitting punishment for her fitting crimes.

I care about Anurag a lot so I want him to stay away from her and heal. He can't do that if he's listening to her screeching all day and being manipulated.

Thanks once again!

Thanks to everyone who liked, read and replied. 🤗

Moniloveanupre

Tranquility07- I want that scene airing too! would make for great screenshots. Whose Ankie?

Cute_Virgo

RollingStones

Ifmember

Autika

hope4u

Enchantuer

And thanks to silent readers too!

Originally posted by: Amanat284

Thanks to everyone who liked, read and replied. 🤗

Moniloveanupre

Tranquility07- I want that scene airing too! would make for great screenshots. Whose Ankie?

Cute_Virgo

RollingStones

Ifmember

Autika

hope4u

Enchantuer

And thanks to silent readers too!

@Bold

That would be a whistle worthy scene. Requesting to both of you!

Originally posted by: Amanat284

Thank you DG. I have noticed the writers taking ideas too. They have taken some from me already (e.g. anupre photo, anupre car scene...). And possibly one from you (replied to you in Anurag AT)

Which story is that? I'm interested now, I want to read it and see if I can remember that scene in the show. Please do share.

And sure. 😉

IFLove had written an OS some time back which had a sonography scene. Let me check for the link. I will share it with you

simply loved it❤️

finally found ANUPRE stories...very well written👏