PreRish One-Shot: But I Come With a Dream in My Eyes Tonight - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very nice update shruti 👏

Beautiful written char of prena nd bajaj...😊


Now they are strangers again...but this time prena has sneha sharma as daughter...😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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What a OS darling .. why did you hesitate for posting it .. why 😡

i just love it .. and you choice of words are always Platinum

agli OS ka bhi intejar hai .. kab milegi


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annu8193

Very nice update shruti 👏

Beautiful written char of prena nd bajaj...😊


Now they are strangers again...but this time prena has sneha sharma as daughter...😊


Tu AT pe ati kyu nei 😡

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: opsora2090


Tu AT pe ati kyu nei 😡

Warning ki wajah se...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annu8193

Warning ki wajah se...

DM kar kaunsi warning

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Posted: 5 years ago
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DAMN!!! This is so INTENSE Shruti❤️. Absolutely LOVED it.

He is lonely. The loneliness which used to be his companion and his peace is not the same anymore. All because of the lady he loves knowing that she may never reciprocate his feelings. Even after seeing her without any marriage signs, he couldn't ask her about it. The so-called aloofness to show in front of the third person to avoid unnecessary discussion about their failed marriage. No wonder Prerna is confused with his behavior.

She understood his worth and the bond they shared as parents & wife/husband only now. Prerna Sharma & Sneha Sharma revealed the unsaid and he is back to being her Mr. Bajaj and she is back to being Miss Sharma. The hug is all feels❤️. He is indeed her companion.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is amazing Shruti, you definitely have a way with words. Loved it!

I'd be honest some of the words were way beyond my capacity of comprehension 😳, but its written in a way that expressed their feelings and emotions so beautifully. They are back to being clean slates and free to write a new story this time

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Shruti🤗

What an Amazing piece again!

Thank you for writing again...❤️

I love all your master pieces...

Write more ,if possible...

And i am going to read all your work again😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

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Forum mummmyyyy is happy

Happy ho ke bhool gayi ki unres bhi karna hai. 🤪

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

This was a very good One shot Wistfulness Ji 👏


The variations in emotions was explained very beautifully and u can literally imagine all of it....heck even I can imagine that award and speech etcc 🤪😆


I think U use very unique wording for your OS....and let me tell you this it is unique for me 😳😆


Baki I am confused from the file bit...wahan se kya hua kuch samjh nahi aaya...


Par it was a very very good part...👍🏼

Thanks a lot Mayur ji. 😃

Yeah I botched up that file part in hurry. 😆

Just to clarify, that file belonged to Prerna and had her medical records and Sneha's pic. Medical records revealed that she gave birth to a baby girl and the surname SHARMA confirmed she's single.

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