PreRish - OS - [ Because I Love You ] - Page 3

Originally posted by: aryapdane

Dear Summerlove,

Hiiiiee✋

The last line is perfection. It's so good that I wish I had written it myself.

You are too kind. Feedbacks like this always make the long process of writing worth so much more.

Okay, you had me all teary eyed and heart broken during the confession. Rishabh saying all that.. I can't imagine a woman turning away from those words. But then our Prerna is not a normal person. Varna how she stops herself from jumping him is beyond me..🙄

Tell me about it. Prerna you blind or what. Crazy. I've never been a fan of ksg. I've briefly seen a few of his work but could never connect to the actor. But ksg as Bajaj is just MashaAllah. And to think I frowned upon him when the news broke out 😑 I love how his put a even darker spin to RB. Grey characters are my biggest turn on.

Oh he wants to love her selflessly? Prerna doesn't need selfless, sacrificing love. She needs a man who'll make and unmake the world around her. I have said this before in the forum but I'll repeat myself.. Prerna doesn't know the power she has. She has absolutely no idea who she is playing house with. It makes me weak that this Alpha-male incarnate goes so soft for her.

Well... So he says to her. We all know his a master manipulator. When he says selflessly what he really means is selfishly. He's no Saint to hand over the love of his to another. Why I’ve always loved Bajaj. I love that he goes weak on his knees for her. His ruthless & unforgiving to the world and soft & bent for her. I hate shows where the guy goes through a whole personality makeover once he falls for the girl. But I agree, Prerna is in desperate need of a wake up call. Wake up and smell the coffee woman.

Now the BajKom scene... Their chemistry is something I am so looking forward to and you have given me more hope. I love their scene so very much. This flip he does from vulnerable to bloody Lucifer is what I live for. Thank you for reminding me why I sold my soul to this devil in the first place.

Are you sure you sold it to him? Cause I gift wrapped mine and handed it to him with a bow 😂😂

Also you can't possibly leave us hanging like this. This should be a TS. Please, please. Can we get a sequel? Like pretty please..🤗

Sssssshhhhhh 🤫🤫😂❤️❤️❤️

Love,

Aparna.

❤️❤️💚💚

Originally posted by: vena.cava.

This was incredible 👏

The descriptive layers to his words and the situation, the way we as the readers are slightly duped by his rouse until the truth unfolds. SO well done. This is exactly what the show is missing, how to write Rishabh as a man who is masterful, who is critical and 10 steps ahead. Nothing should ever surprise, except perhaps her love for him, but nothing else. This was just so well written it made me fall in love with Bajaj all over again. I hope you continue to write in this forum, it's such a pleasure to read from writers like you!

Thank you🤗🤗🤗 I’ll coming running to post here whenever my inner fangirl is in desperate need of an outlet.

I hope mata starts paying attention to the show and fires her writers. The show is still to some extent salvageable.

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

I absolutely, incoherently, quintessentially love this!!!

I absolutely, incoherently, quintessentially love your comment 😂❤️

"Because all I ever want to do is give and give and give everything I am to you until there is nothing left inside me but you. Just you." Damn it, you had my heart here! ❤️

I had tears in my eyes while reading RB's confession😭❤️, who could turn away from such a heartwarmingly beautiful confession! Aahh prerna!🤔

Loved how you made komolika an airhead!😆 Now RB is in action! The dark, mysterious, calm, powerful and ruthless RB is back. Such a treat he is to read.

continue this soon, make this an SS since you're so good with your words.🤗

This is sheer brilliance!

The dark, manipulative RB with his Machiavellian intelligence is a Muse we all adore. ❤️

Your one-shot was a delightful read and portrayed everything we want in the show. Looking forward to more such pieces. :)

This is just amazing OS 😳. I m hoping u will continue this because m sure as usual RB will rock 😎.

Btw I book marked this

Originally posted by: Yush001

"Because all I ever want to do is give and give and give everything I am to you until there is nothing left inside me but you. Just you." Damn it, you had my heart here! ❤️

I had tears in my eyes while reading RB's confession😭❤️, who could turn away from such a heartwarmingly beautiful confession! Aahh prerna!🤔

Prerna. If it were possible, I would completely erase her out of my mind and Rishabhs life. I just can't with her. Can't.😵

Loved how you made komolika an airhead!😆 Now RB is in action! The dark, mysterious, calm, powerful and ruthless RB is back. Such a treat he is to read.

continue this soon, make this an SS since you're so good with your words.🤗

Thank you so much🤗🤗🤗
I was all smiling while reading this☺️😳 🤗

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

This is sheer brilliance!

The dark, manipulative RB with his Machiavellian intelligence is a Muse we all adore. ❤️

Your one-shot was a delightful read and portrayed everything we want in the show. Looking forward to more such pieces. :)

You're sheer brilliance. I read a piece of your work a few weeks back when I first came across the forum. Devastating God. #Talent!

Wonderful wonderful OS. Specially the part where Rishab tucks his wife's mangalsutra just above his heart and gently pats on it,so beautiful. And the way he said no other name will ever join hers.

Please write a second part where Prerna gets shredded apart by both Komolika and Basu and Rishab swoops in to save his love please😳

Originally posted by: tikit

This is just amazing OS 😳. I m hoping u will continue this because m sure as usual RB will rock 😎.

Btw I book marked this

Thank you!! You're so sweet! I'll try to!! I hope to.

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗