PreRish One-Shot: On the Threshold of Fresh Beginnings! - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was soo good .. Aiyawahi kuch bhi bol rahi thi ❤️❤️

First thing first .. The title is ❤️ so apt for their situation at the moment..

You have described Prerna’s fear when Rishab was not there so well and her relief and gratitude when finally RB made presence in the courtroom..👏

Their eylock and that conversation through eyes ❤️ though they have not been the conventional lovey dovey but they always have a comfort level and undefined understanding which make them clear every mis-understanding through conversation.. ❤️☺️ be it verbal or through eyes

Aww the respect to satsuma❤️ best damad .. Sasuma’s gratitude with the guilt for her past behaviour was wall described..

Finally the sahara P provide to his weakened self and hand holding 😵❤️ it was beautiful Aap ko Kuch ho jata to ! ❤️❤️Biwi ab Bajaj ka khub khayal rakhegi to bring him back to good health☺️☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Nobody understands my real emotions.

haan ji aur kuch 😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Shruti, this is so damn awesome and I loved the title. Wish something similar to this happens in the show. I loved every bit of this OS.

Starting with her wish if he was here, her trust in him to set everything right. How far she has come. I loved her intuition that he is here. Their silent eye convo while he assures her. The enemies reactions🤣 and finally the hug to give support to him❤️. I liked the communication between sasumaa-damaad. And I loved the ending, her care saying if something happens to you. Their relationship dynamics have changed now.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Nobody understands my real emotions.

Paglu, read my comments.
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hope to see something similar in the show yaar.

Well written, Prerna emotions wow.

Mr.Bajaj - as said he respect everyone’s mom still date he haven’t ill treated or misbehaved any women just been selfish for his daughter

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

👏Fantastic OS....the OS form of PreRish AT's khayai pulao is excellent....the way you portrayed Prerna's felings ....the relief....the guilt....the assurance only RB can provide to her at this stage...everything was damn good....and the way you ended the story....with a touch of RB's feelings is very nice....loved it❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awee Mr Bajaj is touched by Prerna's one sentence. I hope we get to see this in the show He knows Prerna isn't interested in his money but in sickness and health she'll be there to worry for him

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Just awesome story ďear soo realistic Abhi tumne current court room drama pe likha hai padh ke lagta hi nhi ki koi story padh rahi hoon aisa lagta aane wale episode ke spoilers hai tumhe na definitely cvs ke team mein hona chahiye

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Superb,Fantastic & Beautiful.....👏....LOVED IT❤️

Pls do write more dear....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awwwww this is just a wondeful ...you are amazing with words....its such a pleasure to read your work 🤗

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