Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 57

Sohaa!

First of all, I cannot tell you how happy I am that you found your inspiration back. I missed you so much... I totally agree with you. Writing about characters of a shitty show is a different kind of pain in life. But hey, your story retains the characteristics of the Bajaj we were promised and Prerna's character is more developed than the cardboard one in the show, and you took the time to make their deal and now their romance organic. So you really don't have to worry about not watching the torture-fest of a show, because your story is practically AU anyway. So please, please continue 🙏🙏🙏

Okay, about this update.. Mr. Bajaj's conversation with his courtiers made my commerce heart sing with joy. I can't tell you how disturbing it is when CVs dole out half-assed logic to explain business takeovers and other shit. Like that Bajaj Mansion takeover. I almost shot myself from the trauma. And then reading this fiction, which is so technically sound..😭😭😭😭. Thank you so much.

Thank you for giving me a Bajaj who has not lost his head and is engaging in dhol bajaoing competition with Anurag to win the battle for Prerna's heart. (By the way Bajaj also set himself on fire in the show to get her sympathy. Idk why I included this info in the comment. I guess I didn't want to be disgusted alone..🤪)

London. I love London 😍 And I love your Prerna. She seems like a woman one would want to be friends with. I loved, loved the gym scene. Pre getting all hot and bothered. And the allusion to Hades and Persephone. Oh, Prerna is falling for him

Sohaa you're perfect.

Love,

Aparna.

Originally posted by: meethi24

I read your FF from part 1-19 in one go! Such an amazing writer you are! Right mix of relatable, rational sequences, drama and some comic relief from time to time!

I like this Prerna and RB more than that of the show. I mean RB in the show us awesome but Prerna has a spine in your FF and is not crying every other minute.

Like the interactions between pre and RB. Like how she is trying to figure out RB but is at a loss every time. But specially love the kuki ahd Pre connection! Also RB’s relationship with Veena Sharma... I so wish it were like this on the show or atleast it will become like this in future. The one on the show seems so unrealistic that a mother would humiliate and disregard their own daughter with no good reason!

Prerna thinking about Paresh Rawal’s body parts and Hera pheri to avoid getting affected by RB’s body was hilarious!!! 😂😂.

Loving your FF so much! Please add me to your PM list! Look forward to more parts and updates soon! 🤗❤️

Me too same to same(but late🙃).

🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Please pm about updates🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Ps: don't even know how to use IF.(ughh shame on me😩😭)

An update after so long. Thank you for this.

It was much needed after the horrible episodes. Can’t wait to see Rishabh’s plan unfold.

Amazing update. So so worth the wait. So Rishabh Bajaj took his family on a vacation and got outvoted by them. So cutee. And martial arts training and conversation before it showed just how comfortable they are around each other. Somehow reading the word 'trouble', my head immediately starting playing Taylor Swift's Trouble. Lol. Annddd the Greek mythology conversation is just so …I'm very fond of Greek mythology since I came across a Percy Jackson book in my school library. Loved the turn their painting conversation took, alluding themselves to Hades-Persephone. So Prerna has fallen for Rishabh. But she actively tries to avoid acknowledging that fact. As she knows the outcomes of that. And Rishabh. What wouldn't I give to know what goes on inside that man's head. He's so mysterious. But he does get affected by Prerna in more ways than one.

What I really love about your writing is how authentic and realistic it is. The businessman Rishabh Bajaj. And the meetings, his conversations with his subordinates, the economic times like articles you've written. Hayee...it feels so good to my little commerce brain. Comparing them to the show, the characters you've written might as well be considered as Original characters. And it's so good that your characters do not bear any resemblance to the show. Maybe you could write this story as something to stand on its own, unrelated to the show. Your story is thousandx times better. I pray your muse doesn't stray from you. This story, your writing is Soo good. Will look forward to the next update....

-Rekha.

Amaàaaaaaaaazing

I don't how I landed here. I don't even watched this show (crap feast) for once.

But

This ff is something .....................(🤔no words😐 read what u love😏).

And pls do continue.😊

👍🏼

Ps: is there some instruction manual for this complicated mess🤓 i.e. India forums

What an update. Awesome Sohaa🤗

How I love this office/work setup here. We hardly have any work discussion in the show apart from the success party or snatching the deal. This looks so real and showing bajaj dealing with Anurag from the work front is something which I would have appreciated in the show. And I am loving it here in this story. Anurag played his game getting involved too much which may hurt him more now. How quick Bajaj thinks about a reasonable solution in minutes👏. And it's vacation time.

Who hates Christmas/Newyear time, that too, in London. He is weird no doubt😆. Okay, I am really curious to know about his past now, when would we get to know it. I love how he is happy seeing both the ladies in his life enjoying the festivities though he is not much into it. The wife is upset and he is planning to pacify her by buying her favorites. You know what I like this in him so much, he tries to so do in a proper way, if not then he goes through the back. A typical successful businessman, he is not too righteous, and I love this about him.

The training☺️. Prerna being all lazy in holidays😆. But seriously, who would workout instead of enjoying & lazying around on holidays😆. She agreed only after the chocolate bribe. I love how she doesn't have any filter to her mouth while talking to him, and vice versa. Hayeee, they did the training together, and damn she is affected. That smal moment between them❤️. He withdraws and she is thinking to let go of this feeling fearing the future. You know I seriously want to know his thoughts about her and about their proximity now.

Coming to Hades & Persephone. Quite interesting take on their story, eventually leading to Bajaj-Prerna's story. And the way they physically come closer talking about this is so magical. This is an amazing parallel - "He was the only to see the darkness in her beauty and she saw beauty in his darkness." So finally, she has fallen❤️.

Now I am looking forward to her feelings and her behavior with him. And we need his side of the story too for her. And looking forward to his meeting with Nivi. What is in store for Basus now. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Please update soon.

So thankful for this update! I’m worried our prolific writers in the forum will lose their inspiration with the show taking disappointing turns, but thank you!

The reference to Hades and the Greek mythology is
Such a pleasant surprise in your narrative. Awesome! Please continue, it’s these fan fictions that we look forward to and gives us an escape from the Kzk reality. You guys rock and keep it coming!

Well hate you👿👿👿 average job,🤒🤒

You call all that average job honey!!

Oh my god.......I was wondering where was the detail of that drunk flirtation😍😘 and found it....

I looked for the new developments🙃 found it.

I waited for more personal yet mesqueraded conversation .....found it through all☺️😊😊😇😇😇

And I wondered why people are writing about " that beauty and darkness " thing🙄🙄🙄and I found it....the answer☺️🙃

You. Know I always had this thing for preseohone and hades story ..😊🙃

I wanted to know more.....but damn 🙄😰😨😱😳 that was some real .....creative insight there. ....,😳😳😳😵😵😵

You were so good there that I stop myself for asking this personal detail...,🙏🙏 Sorry and you don't have to answer that.....

You read it somewhere or this presephone running away story was completely your idea.....or if it's inspired from somewhere.....can I know the source.....

I have ideas too🙄😣😒😣 but I can never wrote this way 😍😍😍

Wow.......dear ! 😍😘

You cannot stop okay! Not allowed 🙄🙄🙄

You take your time ...days may be week ....2 week okay☺️😊

And f**k kzk.......and f**k Ekta Kapoor and f**k Anurag and f**k star plus

And let's leave to mr Bajaj to f***k Prerna....😂😂😂(sorry my bad)

But you can mould it in any manner....you like

I like thriller more than romance I can even handle his meetings details😊☺️

But don't stop.....and if you are losing interest because of the show,☹️🙁😕

Well then STOP WATCHING IT....😃

WE DON'T NEED THE SHOW.....WE NEED YOU TO WRITE .....

make an end atleast please....🙏🙏🙏 Or keep writting forever ...whatever you like ...please I am begging ....😍😛😛

With loads of love 💗💞💞💕💕💝💘💖♥️

Tanu😊☺️

Many many thanks for the wonderful update.i was so sad when you mentioned u lost your inspiration and may not update.that was a very painful moment for me.look dear may be you took RB from the yb show but your RB and this story is fully yours,it has nothing compared with that wretched tv show your story has logic and beautiful details and we all enjoyed it to the core.plz take it as your own child and plz nurture it in your own way(forget the bullshit of Indian tv show.....,they are not even close to a mile if I compare with your writing)thanks a million for the wonderful update again.take care.👏👏👏👏👏👏

I just freaking love your Bajaj and Prerna! So even though Rishab promised Prerna not to go after Basu for the moment, it's good to see that he's still the same person.

The way Prerna thought of Anurag while want to learn how to kick men in the nuts and their easy banter was so much fun. Rishab is also getting affected by his wife, he doesn't like her unhappy while parting with him even for the shortest amount of time.

And the way they talked about themselves in the hindsight of Hades and Peresphone ❤️ It seems Prerna is the first one to fall for Rishab and I hope she doesn't get hurt in the process.

Please update soon 🤗