Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 47

I enjoyed reading each and every line of this update❤️👌👌drunk prerna was very funny .. I missed kookie though .. but it's fine prerna and rishab were too entertaining 😂😂😂😂

Whatever you decide to do about posting the updates do tell us ... But please don't discontinue it.. it's an amazing story.. I can't help you with the PMs because I have never sent one😅😅

So lets go to part XXI....Come on....😆

I absolutely loved this part....if this is how you are gonna write if you are sleep-depraved...then I'm sorry to say,you should deprave yourself of some sleep once in a while to write such hilarious parts....this is an absolute treat to read...such a light-hearted update...even though I dreaded the beginning along with Prerna and was steeling myself for some bimbo on his arm....you saved me that torture with their dance....then that drunken discussions of PreRish and Anurag was priceless...I was rofling all the while reading that part....and then the bestest...Rishabh taking her home and Prerna trying his patience by winding around him like a vine....the absolute best....I was dying to know what he was thinking at that time...please please include his monologue on that situation in your next part....I want to know how much he's affected by her behavior....isn't he restless yet..??when are they going to start dancing around each other....their restless behavior is going to cause so much trouble for them.......Oh and I was relieved to know that no mistresses part 😆.... anyway,a special shout out for Neelima....Thank you for dressing your memsahib everytime in your sahib's shirts...please continue to do so until your services are no longer required by them and your Sahib himself takes care of her and her clothes...🤣🤣

As I said,I enjoyed this update thoroughly....Please never think of abandoning this story.....a sincere request from a frantic fan of your story and you...consult the mods on this forum if you have any doubts ....they will guide you accordingly....but please dont stop writing....I would really really love to read this story till its natural end....I am dying to see the title Last Part/Epilogue from you ..... pretty please....❤️

Absolutely fantastic 👏

This was a dreamy update

Please update soon... I really want to see Rishabh's reaction after seeing Prerna in his shirt 😃

Drunk Prerna is cute as hell.

Did I tell that I love Prerna swearing in situations where she is embarassed, jealous & everything.

Hilarious update.

I want to see what happens after the stunt Prerna pulled by getting drunk & waking up in Bajaj's clothes again. Genius. 😂😂😂👏👏👏👏

Oh my! What a freaking awesome update!

The whole party sequence was damn entertaining with an intoxicated Prerna taking the lead.❤️

I loved her dialogues and that blatant display of jealousy. She's not going to tolerate RB's philandering ways. Maybe the moves she got acquainted with in her self-defence training will come into play here. 😆

Can't wait to read what happens next.

P.S. IF still needs to fix a lot of issues including PMs. Please don't even think of giving up on this story. 💔

I'm dead! Lmao, Prerna killed me:). She was absolutely adorable. The way she was so fed up with both men (who hasn't been there with there significant other lol) and then fought with Rishabh, ignoring Anurag, was hilarious. I couldn't stop giggling.

Rishabh Bajaj is brilliant! Him being so deadpan and going with the flow in Prerna's drunken craziness made the scene even more funny. Have I mentioned how much I adore Mr Bajaj? I just caught up on the story now and I have to say what I love and admire so much about him is he doesn't have to be the knight in shining armour. He'd rather empower Prerna to be her own hero. How fantastic is that! Kuki us lucky to have him and all fathers should raise their girls to be that independent.

I know that ppl might throw chappals at me but as much as I love Pre-Rish, I feel they are the most mismatched couple I've seen on ITV. Rishabh is unapologetically grey, mature, calm, scheming and patient. Prerna annoys me because she's immature, demanding, impulsive, reactive and so damn self-righteous (all hardly her fault i guese considering her age). But sometimes I think she and Anurag should be together so they can be immature, irritating and melodramatic together.

I love love love this story and your writing. The plot is so engrossing and I can't wait to read what happens next.

Awesome update! Love your Prerna ........ wish the one in the show had half this Prerna's personality 😉

Hi Soha - if I could call you that , I accidentally stumbled upon this FF just browsing thru the forums..I was member of IF years back when IF was new but for servers years haven’t logged in and was just browsing here and there randomly..Since I had watched KZK season 1 I was just curious how KZK 2 was and caught up with some episodes since Bajaj entry and as much as I regret watching it I’m glad I did because that made me stumble upon your FF. I tried to login using my old If but gave up and ended up creating this new ID just so that I could comment on this story, because this story sure deserves one.I read the first chapter and the way you play with the words , had me read the next chapter and Bajaj’s little experiment of having her to spend the night with him and prerna being the naive girl and so in love with A agreed to his experiment got me curious as to what was in his mind and that led me to read subsequent chapters.in chapter 5 I absolutely loved how Prerna answered back saying she was told “ Do whatever it takes to bring A back home” As much as she is naive I love she has a mouth and does use it unlike the one in the show.In chapter 6 as expected the Basu’s if not Appreciate it at least they should have acknowledged but they do neither.In chapter 7 bajaj asked her to cook, I’m so intrigued by your version of Bajaj, I wonder why would he ask her to cook.As much as I want to read further I will have to take a pause here and will continue to read in the next few days and catch up with it. Do you send PM’s when you write an update.I would like to definitely get notified when you have a new update.I know I still have quite a lot of chapters to catch up but once I do I would definitely like to know as soon as you update. Once again wonderful story I almost feel like not watching the show that way I could just imagine Prerna and Bajaj to be the way you have portrayed in this story and not the crap that they dish out.

Oh my god. I am still laughing and I have already read it twice. AmazING.

Hey! I just came across your story today only and have binge read all 20 parts in one go! Hence why you won’t have seen me engage in the comments section earlier. I would hate to miss out on any new parts so if you could add me to the PM list that would be most appreciated- I hate the idea of not knowing what is going to happen next!

As for everything I’ve read so far, I love that you developed a relationship between Mr Bajaj and Prerna before it jumped straight to marriage. I wish they had done that in the show too, I actually feel the audience would have been far more receptive to a love triangle had it been slowly played out. But the writers jumped the gun and went straight to marriage which is why so many people can’t digest Prerna and Bajaj’s relationship. I love that we got to see how Prerna did so much for Anurag and he didn’t have any trust in her at all. Intrigued to see where the story goes next and hopefully the CVs come across your story too so they can take some tips on how to take it to the next level!!