Added Chapter 23: All The King's Men: PreRish - Page 90 - Page 14

Finally! Yesterday, I was constantly refreshing this page for your update. I'm beginning to behave like an addict in need of a fix. You have me hooked.

Mr. B is too fascinating for words. I think of him as a spider, sitting in the middle of its web and tweaking every strand. I've never been in love with someone but after reading Prerna's erroneous conclusion about the Basus being the paragon of saintly behaviour, I wonder if love hijacks your brain and dilutes logic. Because if she had an ounce of logic, she'd have fallen head over heels for Mr. B. I mean the man practically takes care of every little problem she or her precious Basus encounter, gives her life changing advice, and tries to ease her discomfort during periods! But hopefully she'll get there.

I'm guessing from the animated movies part that we'll have Sneha in this story. If so, I am really excited to see how you write Bajaj-Sneha dynamic.

Kilotons of love,

Aparna.

P.S: Brooklyn 99 is ❤️.

Once again beautiful update

Love this Bajaj

Why is he so interested in her?

He never ask a wrong question ever does he?

He wanted her seen by the reporters and she has no idea

She is so clueless and naive

Does she ever wonder why man like Bajaj is entertaining her?

Prerna is so comfortable with him and always come to him to fix everything 😆

Anu’s lack of trust on prerna is going to be reason for their separation

I want strong prerna who gives it back to everyone

Is Sneha part of this story?

Thank you so much for the update 🤗

Soha 🤗

You updated

Okay so I finally finished reading this.

Sometimes I feel that RB is courting and testing her at the same time and Prerna has no clue that she is going to be his queen who is rule as equal with him. BTW I just loved the Queen Isabella reference. Honest to god the world would be a much better place if women ruled it. But that is a rant for another time.

Back to the update. I know I have said this before but l love how you are drawing parallels between Bajaj and Anurag. I just hope the Prerna stops making excuses for him and take RB’s advice to put herself first.

Also I think its great she thinks of RB everytime there is a problem and not Anurag. I think now RB plans for her.

Anyways in love your ff. Update soon. Don’t keep me waiting too long.

Hugs🤗

Blues

Wow very beautiful update dear. Its like addiction. Refreshing and waiting for the update.

Beautiful conversation. Its nice to see bajaj help her with ice tea and hot water bag.

I feel She is slowly getting attracted towards bajaj with out realising

Ty for this beautiful story

Suma 💕

Hmmm so hes slowly trapping her in his web. It is like he is getting her attracted to his aura little by little

Whats anu thinking

Nivi i guess is at fault this time atleast partly

Chess is my personal favourite. And the figurative chess here is on another level!😎

I love how Prerna here managed to make The Bajaj her personal fire fighter assistant lol.

Making Anurag indirectly weaker and weaker. I like this!

I totally loved the random talks and his gripping one liners.

I wanna see what's next real soon!

Cheers.

Read it in a go.I want more! I want more! The best story I have come across in a long time. I like how you address a few social taboos and spread awareness through this piece of art, it's just way toooo good(it isn't out of character or something that goes above your head its just the right amount of information) and I love that! Rishab -Prerna rapport is getting better with each meeting . I wish this happened in the show and lastly that slight humour and sass you throw into Rishab is just really good it makes him more dreamy and then there a few times its just the words you use that radiate his power, he doesn't even need to say anything .Overall you nailed it girl! Keep the good work coming!

This is so so amazing and you know what I love you for adding that cramps and period part...it might seem a small thing but it matters a lot to most girls. Also please update.... please please update soon😭

This story is getting interesting part after part i do wake up everyday ..first thing in my mind comes to check whether you posted or not ...love this part alot loving slow building chemistry of PreRish !

Omg omg this is the best prerish fiction i ever read.. Such an amazing build up to story loving each part read all 12 parts on one go so engrossing loving the way u have chiselled out the characters so amazing bajaj every dialogue every just like a king...

Now am curious how this game of chess continues.. What Rb is upto.. Eagerly waiting for next part really liking this slow build up of relationship step by step.. Between prerish