PreRish OS | A Life Full Of Surprises | Part 2 Pg13 19May2020 - Page 2

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Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Reserved

Edit: This was so sweet.

I loved how it began with Veena rocking in her late husband's rocking chair, and ended with PreRish telling her that they are going to be parents. The story is narrated from Veena's point of view which is actually nice considering we are getting to read a keen observer's observation of the various stages of her daughter's life.

Rishabh's description was bang on!

You expressed the progress in their relationship really well. Kudos! 👏

Also, I loved hubby-wifey's bickering outside the Sharma residence. His height is a touchy topic. 🤣

Do write more! 😎

I wanted to write it from a Mother's point of view how her daughter from a little girl turns into a wife and how she becomes a mother herself. A mother and child's bond can't be put into words and nothing can ever describe it. It was challenging. I hope I did enough justice to it. ☺️

I really want PreRish to be a bickering fun loving romantic couple but wait this isn't Gullo it's Ekta. Hence I will try to keep them so in my stories. 😳 hope it was worth your time 😳 thank you so much for your lovely comment.

Originally posted by: opsora2090

😡 kyu bey , saga bana,..

n you are not looking like first time writer... looking like professional script writer .keep writing more

Ofc I am not writing for the first time but 🤣🤣

OMG ANKIE this was such an amazingggghgh OS prerish cute nok jok at the door was adorable 😳 i loved how bajaj went to SN to ask for veena's approval for the marriage even though pre already yes bol chuki thi 👍🏼 i loved how u narrated the whole story through veena's eyes 👍🏼 that was refreshing to read

Also sneha's hisTory that she is not bajaj's blood 💔most unexpected surprise😲

I loved how bajaj announced to veena 'WE ARE EXPECTING'❤️

ps. Ankie bache u have turned my boring sunday into happy sunday🤗

& GET WELL SOON ❤️

Its amazing really nice

Originally posted by: afnashahid

Its amazing really nice

I've edited my post on page 1

Thank you for the story.and thanks again for bringing a different Baja.do write more on prerish.

Originally posted by: Moushumi

Thank you for the story.and thanks again for bringing a different Baja.do write more on prerish.

Originally posted by: Monali5

This was so DREAMY😇 ! What caught me was it was from Veena's point of view .Rishab's rapport with his mom-in -law was adorable . Rishab and Prerna's relationship progressed so naturally,their bickering was damn cute.Sneha is such a cutie pie. Loved the fact that you added the OCD element into the story , reminded me of someone 😉and lastly Ek chaata kyu maara Mr. Bajaj neh doh chaar aur maarte with a few Mukkas and kicks. All in all LOVED IT!💕 .I sound greedy but I want more!

Write more of these soon!

I wanted to write it from a Mother's pov on how her daughter from a little girl turns into a wife and how she becomes a mother herself. A mother and child's bond can't be put into words and nothing can ever describe it. It was challenging. I hope I did enough justice to it. ☺️ I really liked writing RB and his Mom in Law dynamics Especially when he has no family considers his Mom in law as his own. And ofc Sneha's such a cutiepie so are her parents'. 😁☺️😊

Haha he was about to kill it was because of Prerna he didnt. 🤣aaur main kya karoon Pehla pyaar tha woh mera bhulaye nahi bhulta 🤣 Ocd aur coffee agaya uska 🤣 thank you so much 🤗❤️ I hope really really hope it was worth your time 😊🥰