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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prerna4rishav

๐Ÿ‘ Great ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Let the next part come soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thanks for reading i'm glad u like it :D

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow the part u added is grt ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ specially the duppatta thing ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yulZ

wow the part u added is grt ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ specially the duppatta thing ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜

heheh thanks for reading it TWICE!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

riya

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaboon_mein

heheh thanks for reading it TWICE!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

riya

๐Ÿ˜†ur welcome i didnt saw the half part so had to read it twice๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ahhhhhhhh you actually typed it up and put it!!! yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

okie that was great! loved the description of the library, u want to meet someone in that way?

and wat is with p2 saying arranged marriage is the way to go... i mean we all know she will fall in love with saksham! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

o and did u watch today's episode, so sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ and now poor prerna will be blamed for everything...

okay totally going off topic, great update! update again soon! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š

-pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnon_ki_pari

ahhhhhhhh you actually typed it up and put it!!! yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
hehehehee, i know i suprised myself
okie that was great! loved the description of the library, u want to meet someone in that way?
uh, unless my name if P2, oh wait, it's not, awww too bad. hahahahha short answer um, iono. leave me alone๐Ÿ˜ณ
and wat is with p2 saying arranged marriage is the way to go... i mean we all know she will fall in love with saksham! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
uh, we'll seee ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
o and did u watch today's episode, so sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ and now poor prerna will be blamed for everything...
iiiiiiiiiiiii knowwwwww stupid SAm, hate her. aigh.
okay totally going off topic, great update! update again soon! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š
hahhaha, u had a great update too :D
riya ๐Ÿ˜ณ
-pari

Edited by khwaboon_mein - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful.. waiting for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I cant wait..its gettin interestin..continue soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap:
The water from the fountain grazed her face, and she giggled. P2 got up, gathered the books and started to walk, she giggled again and the wind blew her dupatta across the face of a stranger standing there.

pART 3:

P2 continued walking and didn't even notice that the stranger was mezmorized by her so much that he tripped. ๐Ÿ˜ณ As he kneeled on the floor and watched her walk away, an orchestra came out to play " Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga............."

P2 dissappeared into the fog while the stranger still stood there day dreaming of her laughter. He suddenly got a phone call, the screen flashed Nihaal on it.

Nihaal: Hey Shaksham, let's go clubbing or something tonight

Shaksham: oh my god, i just saw the most beautiful girl in the world

Nihaal: ah, wat else is new, you meet a new girl everyday

Shaksham: no yaar, she's different, the way the water came on her face, Oh my god!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

NIhaal: yea ok whatever, so you wanna go clubbing or not?

Shaksham: no tonight okay cya

Nihaal: cya

Back at the Bajaj HOuse:

Everyone gathered around the table for lunch when Prerna noticed that P2 was missing.

Prerna: where is P2? How come she's not there for lunch?

Dhara: oh, she went to the library this morning she'll probably be back oh in a year or two ๐Ÿ˜‰

*everyone giggled*

Just then the doorbell rang.

Prerna: it must be P2

She opened the door and there was standing Pratham. "oh here he comes to ruin another good family moment", Prerna thought to herself.

Prerna: yes, mr. mital, what have you come here for?

PM: Mrs. Bajaj, I've come here to ruin your life what else?

Prerna: We will see.

Prem notices Pratham at the door: hello Mr. Mithal, How are you?

PM: I'm fine, i have some contract papers for you to sign since we're in business together.

Prem: yes, sure won't you please come in and join us for lunch?

Prerna: I'm sure Mr. Mithal has already eaten, right Mr. Mithal?

PM: actually i'm quite famished.

Pratham sits at the dinning table and Prerna closes the door in a hoof. Pratham starts to put food onto his plate while Prerna sits down. Everyone continues eating. Pratham takes a bit of the food and feels that it is familiar. He takes another bite and is instantly transported to a heavenly place.

Pratham: Wah! Wah! wat a meal? Who has cooked this food? I must compliment the chef.

Prem: oh actually Mr. Mithal, our chef was out today so my mom has cooked this meal.

Pratham is shocked but still reminisces back to when Prerna use to cook for him.

The light fades, and the scene dulls as Prerna and Pratham exchange stares.

riya ๐Ÿ˜ณ

P.S. you are always welcome to leave suggestions and comments. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by khwaboon_mein - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dats sooo gd!!! ๐Ÿ‘ cannot wait til next part....!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

loved dis part:

She opened the door and there was standing Pratham. "oh here he comes to ruin another good family moment", Prerna thought to herself.

Prerna: yes, mr. mital, what have you come here for?

PM: Mrs. Bajaj, I've come here to ruin your life what else?

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