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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna4rishav

😭 Awesome awesome 😭 Now what Prerna will do now?? 😭 I loved that part where Rish was clarifying everything to Niharika 😭 Actually I could visualise that part with RR 😭 My Rish 😭 😭 poor Rish 😭 😭 And even more poor Prerna 😭

Nexttttt parrrrrrrrrrtttttt plsssssssssssssssss Nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😭



aawww thanks so much guddi. i am so happy u cud visualize RR in the scene. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nuts4kzk

dead, dead, dead... I m.... longing for the confrontation.... b/w my most fav pair...
love u neha... thanku so so much for updating it so soon....

and guddi and sukhi 😡 😡 😆 u were suppose2 give me a miss call



thanks namzy dear :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 16

Prerna didn't speak anything to Mahesh in the car.
At night, Rishabh came home. He went to their bedroom. Prerna had opened a big suitcase on the bed and she was keeping her stuff in it. Rishabh looked at Prerna.
"Yeh sab kya hain? Kahan ja rahi ho tum?"
"Kahin bhi. Lekin aap ke saath ab nahi rahungi."
"Ab kya hua tumhe? Dekho prerna main pahle se bohot pareshan hu, tum mujhe aur irritate mat karo. Please."
"Chali gayi na woh?" Prerna said sarcastically.
Rishabh looked at her. "Kaun?"
"Aap ki Niharika."
Rishabh was shocked. He kept staring at her.
"Woh Niharika jiske liye aap hamara 30 saal purana rishta qurban karnewale the."
"Prerna? tumhe yeh sab-"
"Jab aap office mein aap dono baat kar rahe the, to main wahin thi. Maine aap ki saari baatein sun li."
Rishabh held his head in his hands and sat down. All this was too much too handle in a single day.
"Mr. Bajaj, meri zindagi ek khuli kitab ki tarah aap ke saamne thi. Lekin aapne itna bada sach mujh se chupaya? Chalo maan liya ke aap usko bhool gaye the, lekin aapne mere charitra par bhi shaq kiya? Aap ko aaj bhi lagta hain ke mere aur anrag ke beech mein kuch hain? Aur yeh baat aapne Niharika ko bhi batayi?"
"Prerna dekho-"
"Mr Bajaj, aapne theek kaha.jab kisi shaadi mein vishwas hi nahi hota, to us shaadi ka matlab hi nahi hota.Aap mujh pe shaq karte hain na, to phir theek hain, hum divorce le lenge. Mujhe bhi aap ke saath ab nahi rehna hain. Ab bacche bhi bade ho gaye hain, samazdar ho gaye hain. To phir kyun rahe hum saath mein?"
"Theek hain." Rishabh said.
"Even I want to get out of this relationship. Lekin tumhe is ghar se jaane ki jarurat nahi hain. Main khud hi chala jaata hu. I'll stay in our old house. Tum yahan raho. Waise bhi, jab bacchon ko hum dono mein se kisi ek ko chun na hoga, to woh tumhe hi chunenge."
Prerna was still fuming.
Rishabh got up, went to his study and closed the door. Later, Prerna fell asleep. When she got up in the morning, Rishabh had packed his stuff and left. Prerna came down. The kids and Mahesh were sitting at the dining table having breakfast. Prerna wondered how to tell them about the latest developments.
"Woh..Cookie..mujhe aap logon se kuch-"
"It's ok mom.Papa told us already. He will be staying in the old house because you guys don't get along anymore. " Sneha said.
Prerna looked at her kids. All of them were peacefully eating their breakfasts- no sign of any disturbance.
She got up and went back to her room.
"Are you guys really OK?" Mahesh asked.
"Totally. Mom and Dad keep fighting. Then they patch up. This has happened so many times, we don't take this stuff seriously anymore." Tushar said.
"It's time they grow up!" Kasak said.
In the evening, Prerna went to the lawyer with Anurag and filed divorce papers.
Rishabh received the papers, and sent them back- duly signed. He was enjoying his new life. There was no need to pretend everything is hunky-dory, there were no need to watch prerna's moves and wonder what exactly was her relationship with anurag, etc. He missed having his kids around, but he was working with tushar ,vishakha and sneha in office, kasak and cookie would come and visit him often. He was feeling a new surge of energy and vitality- he was now realising how a wrong relationship can trap one's energy.
Anurag and Prerna's relationship was growing closer. Sam was very much against it, but they were in no mood to care for that. Finally, Sam too sent him divorce papers and went to London for good. Anurag felt elated rather than sad. Now, things were finally looking up for him.
Niharika and Darshan went back to London. Rishabh had ignored Darshan's efforts to contact him.

Rishabh was surprised to see Prerna's number on his cell.
"Yes Prerna?"
"Mr. Bajaj, I just called to remind you. Kal humein court jana hain. Our divorce will become final tomorrow."
"Thanks. Mujhe yaad hain. I'll be there at 3 PM." He said.
"Main aur Anurag bhi pahunch jayenge."
"Ok!" Rishabh said cheerfully.
Prerna disconnected the phone. She was getting another call.
"Bolo kasak?"
"Mom, I have forgotten my maths notebook at home. Can you send it with driver? I am in college."
"Ok, is it in ur room?"
"No, I was studying in Dad's study. It must be there."
"Theek hain."
Prerna went to Rishabh's study. He had taken most of his books with him, it wasn't difficult to find kasak's notebook. She sent it with driver. No one had bothered to clean the room after Rishabh left.
"Yeh room clean kar do." Prerna ordered the servant. Later, he came to her with an old diary.
"Memsaab, yeh diary mili. Cupboard ke neeche is tarah giri thi ke kisi ko dikhayi nahi di hogi. Maine cupboard ko waha se hataya tab yeh mili."
Prerna looked at the diary. It was 20 yrs old..written by Mr Bajaj..she hesitated before opening it..but then her curiousity got the better of her..she opened it and began to read it..
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Posted: 18 years ago
neha that was gr8...
i loved how rish was like soooooo indifferent towards prerna now...
please continue na...right now...the diary got me curious too please please please

loved it!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Neha hun !!


Alteast edit the topic when you update -had not Sammie replied - I'd have NEVER come across this awesome update !


Great update anyways !
Loved the kids' reaction to Rish and Prerna's fight - omggggg 😆

Diary ka raaz - hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
SO INTERESTING !!!!!!!!!


update soon !!!
Lots of love
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Posted: 18 years ago
Neha pls write the next partt sooooooooooooooooonnnnn...can't wait for it 😭

It's jz AWESOME 😭 PRB fighting and even divorce 😭

Pls cont soon 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
even i cant wait for the diary part... frankly I dint want prerna2 react this way.... 😭 😭 i was hoping that it will hit her that her relation is going2 end... but ur diary part is now making me real crazy... and hooked 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great update Neha 👏 👏 Really loved Rish's attitude towards Prerna.I'm really curious about Diary plz cont. soon(Don't keep us waiting 4 ages like Ekta maai 😆 😆 😆 )
btw topic is not edited to show this update ,I just opened the last page coincidently & find this wonderful piece.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 17

Rishabh got up in the morning- as usual early to go for his run. After he returned, he wanted to have a cup of coffee. While servants were there to give him coffee, he wanted someone to make it for him with love- like Prerna used to make. But now, Prerna won't make coffee for him ever- especially after today when they sign the divorce papers.
He sat down on the sofa and looked around his empty house. It was a typical bachelor's apartment..everything was in oder..but the touch of a caring woman was missing. He sighed. The realisation that his marriage was finally ending made him feel really alone for the first time. But then- he is THE Rishabh Bajaj. He can't and shouldn't get emotional. He brushed his thoughts aside and started to remember some project he was doing- something to focus his mind on.
And then the bell rang. He reluctantly got up and opened the door.
"Tum? Is waqt yahan?" He was shocked.
She came inside and sat down in the chair, even when he had not asked her to come inside or to sit down.
"Is everything alright???"
Her sudden visit had worried him. What could possibly bring her to his house at 8 am in the morning?
She stood up and put her arms around him. "I can't live without you..I need you..I love u..I love u so much.." She kissed him on the cheeks..on his forehead..
He felt as if it were all a dream..is this real..or is he day-dreaming..
"yeh..yeh kya kar rahi tum..meri kuch samaz mein nahi aa raha hain?"
"Main aap ke bina nahi reh sakti. Main aap ke paas laut aayi hu."
"Lekin..?What about your marriage?"
Niharika sat down on the sofa and said- "I couldn't do it..I just couldn't patch up with him..because I have fallen in love with you all over again. I asked for some more time. He gave it to me- he had to. Meanwhile, our divorce came through. So now I am not legally his wife anymore."
"Niharika-look- I think this is wrong. What would he think?"
"I don't care what he thinks. Or what my parents think. Even my son is now leading an independent life busy with his career and his girlfriend. Aakhir kab tak main logon ki khushi ke liye apni khushiyan qurban karu? I need to think about my happiness- your happiness- our love. Rishabh, main sab kuch chhod kar aap ke paas aayi hu."
Rishabh hugged her.
"Thanks..I am really very happy today." He said.
She smiled.
His phone rang. It was some overseas call. He sat down talking business. When he finished his call, Niharika quietly gave him a hot cup of coffee. He smiled. Life was suddenly looking all dreamy and romantic.
"Let's go to some nice place for lunch." She suggested. He nodded.
During the lunch, they discussed about the food. Niharika was very much into cooking and trying out different cuisines.
"This was a great meal." Niharika said, as they were finally eating deserts.
"Waise, aap ko office jaana hoga to jayiye. Main bhi ghar jaati hu. I too have to do some routine works now that I am back in the city."
Rishabh nodded.
"What are you doing in the evening?" He asked her.
"No plans as of now!"
"Good. To phir shaadi karte hain."
She stared at him.
"WHAT? Rishabh- this is not funny."
"It's not. I am asking you Niharika- Will you marry me today?"
"TODAY? How is it possible? You are married to Prerna- and-"
"My divorce with Prerna is being finalised as we speak. We'll go and sign the papers at 3 PM." He said looking at the watch.
Niharika just stared at him. This was unbelievable. It was like a dream come true!!!
"Jaise hi court ka kaam khatam ho jayega, I'll be a free bird. Phir hum shaadi karenge. I'll ask my people to do all the preparations." He said.
She blushed. It was a dream she had cherished since so many years..to be Mrs Niharika Rishabh Bajaj..and now her Rishabh was all set to make her dream into a reality.

"Prerna?" Anurag came to Prerna's room.
"Abhi tak tum taiyyar nahi hui? court jana hain na?"
Prerna got up. She was wearing a simple cotton saree and no make-up. Anurag felt that she was looking beautiful but depressed..he felt she should dress up..celebrate..he was planning to take her out for dinner tonight..and propose to her.
"Haan..Anurag chalo..let's go to court." She got up and started walking..clutching her mangalsootra with one hand and Rishabh's diary with the other hand.

Niharika was looking very pretty in the red saree. The wedding was going to take place in her house- in the presence of some close friends, and Rishabh's kids , along with their better halves- had agreed to attend as well. The pandits had already arrived. Caterers and decorators were buzzing around. She wondered about the timing- she met him today- on the same day when his marriage to prerna was ending. Even Tushar- Prerna's most loyal child- had expressed support for his father's decision saying that he just wanted his father to be happy.
Now everyone was waiting for Rishabh. It was already past 6.
"When is the dulha coming? Muhurat ki ghadi aa rahi hain.." The pandit enquired.
Tushar tried Rishabh's cell but it was going to voicemail.
And then Rishabh arrived. Tired. Defeated. Loosened tie.
He looked around. He folded his hands and said- "I apologise to all of you. There is no wedding happening here. Please leave us alone."
One by one, everyone left quietly.
Niharika looked at him.
"Kya hua?" She asked.
"Prerna refused to give me divorce." He said.
She tried to be calm and rational. "Oh these court procedures in India na..so when is the next date..when is the divorce happening..?" She asked.
He shook his head.
"Prerna refuses to give divorce by mutual consent. So, now if I want divorce, I have to fight with her in court. That may take many years.."
"Like how many years..?"
"Given the fact that we have been married for so many years and have kids together, it will take at least 3-4 years."
Niharika just stared at him.
"But..why does she refuse to divorce you?" Niharika was beginning to hate Prerna.
"I don't know Niharika..she is acting very strange."
"Get signatures from her anyhow. Pressurise her, blackmail her."
"She is saying that she won't signed the papers at any cost. And I know that woman- once she makes up her mind, no one can make her do anything else."

Anurag kept looking at Prerna with disbelief. She was looking determined and stubborn.
"Why did you refuse to sign the papers?"
"Because I love my husband, and I will not let go of him at any cost."
"WHAT?"
"Tushar had already informed me that Mr Bajaj was planning to marry Niharika. Lekin main unko kisi aur ka nahi hone doongi. Woh mere hain, aur main unki hu. Humein koi nahi alag kar sakta. Samze tum?"
"But..he doesn't even look at you-"
"I know. Kyunki maine aaj tak unhe bohot hurt kiya hain. Lekin ab- ab main bhi dekhti hu- woh kab tak mujh se naaraz rehte hain. Ek na ek din, woh mere paas jarur laut aaenge."
"Kya tumhe ab bhi yeh asha hain?"
"Asha nahi, vishwas hain. Mere aur mr bajaj ke rishte ka doosra naam hi vishwas hain. Lekin afsos ki baat to yeh hain, ke hum dono ek doosre ke liye marne ko taiyyar the, lekin ek doosre ke saath jeene mein kam pad gaye hain. But I'll change all that now."
Prerna got up and started to go out.
"Ab kaha ja rahi ho tum?" anurag asked in a defeated voice.
"Apne pati ko wapas laane."
Anurag stared at her.
Prerna stormed out.
Kasak and Prem were looking at the whole drama with a horror expression on their faces.
"Aisa lag raha hain, ke 1980s ki film ka koi repeat telecast ho raha hain. Our fiery mother india has suddenly turned into a main tulsi tere aangan ki." Prem said.
"Look at ur dad basu. He is heartbroken." Kasak said.
"Niharika aunty ke baare mein bhi to socho. Mother India se saamna hua hain. Dost dost na raha, pyar pyar na raha."

Rishabh was sitting alone in his apartment when he heard someone's footsteps.
He looked up. Prerna was standing in front of him- teary eyed.
Edited by nehavarun - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow its aesome thanks for updating and the 1980's film telecast was really funny 😆 i hope rish goes back to prerna 😭 😭 😭

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