Pyaar ka ehsaas( true story), updated pg8

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Janki

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: indianhomey1992

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wowww!!...Jennz u sud write a book on thiss!😛...it truly was FABULOUSS!!👏

continue soon!!😃

u r absolutely right. jenny should write a book on this.😉

WOW!!! jenny u r awesome. continue soon. i will be waiting.😃

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bittersweet93

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

hehe we are addicted already!! 😉

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karen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

wow thats is grewat i love it plz continue soon
good job 👏

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xoxsubhaxox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

i luved it!! plz cont. soon! 👏

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Robin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

that was toooo good jenny! 👏 great job! pooor mukti, i feel so bad for her! and yes, prem should feel guilty! thats really cool that its a true story! well pleeeese continue soon hun, i want more! 😃

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jennifer lobo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Thnkx guyz for those lovely comments 😳

Recap-prem see's mukti lying on the ground, he cries those guiltiness tears,he carries mukti..

In the Hospital
Prem carries mukti and hurries her to a nearby hospital, the doctor tells prem,this is a police case,jakham bohot gehra hai,call the police first,prem says ill call the police but meanwhile plz tke her to teh treatment room , the doctor agree's to it, prem calls the police, the police arrives , he asks vat realation do u share with the patient,prem says..i actually..i dnt noe her but she studies in d sme college in which i do,the police aska the doctor has the patient regained consiouness,the doctor said yes ,police goes and questions mukti inside whereas mukti says she doesnt noe whom they were, the police says we shall look into the matter and they leave

Hospital Part 2
prem is watching all this , he goes to meet mukti inside,mukti remembers the time when prem gve an i dnt cre look to her and went away leaving her all alone with those goons,she turns her face while prem still looks at her, he finally speaks..mukti..im..im..mukti says sorry kehne ki koi zarurat nahin hai, there is no need to say sorry, aakhir mein tumhari lagti kahun hoon jo tum mujhe bachate, prem walks towards mukti, he goes closer to her, he touches her forhead when mukti started feeling different,she pushed his hand away and tol him to leave, prem leaves

Hospital Part 3
prem calls up pooja and tells her all what has happened, pooja says what prem, but u hvent done anything, mukti is none of ur business,and bangs the phone down, prem gets more and more upset,he goes to a local bar and starts drinking,while going home, he thinks about mukti and what has happened to her all because of him, then he thinks of pooja,he gets more upset, he tries calling up pooja, but each time he calls her she hangs up on him

In college
the next day in college,pooja comes to the college, prem tries talking to her but she avoid him,prem then goes and buy's some roses for her,but pooja throws them on his face, he says pooja what did u expect me to do that time, insaaniyat ke naate meine mukti ki madad ki to usmein kaunsa badha gunah kiya, pooja says but vahan aur bhi log hoge,to phir tum hi kyun and she walks off..prem rethinks about everything again and then tells to himself why not shall i use mukti to mke pooja jealous so that she cms bck to me....mukti walks into the college, she looks at prem..she says prem im sorry jo hua so hua, but tumne mere madad to ki,prem smiles at her n says friends..prem puts his hand forward, mukti hesistates but then puts her hand forward 2, mukti leaves and prem has an evil smile on his face ,he plans about what to do nxt to mke pooja jealous..to be continued... 😳

Edited by jennymanoj - 18 years ago