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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww thanks guys your soo sweeet 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!!!! bravo! 👏 👏 👏 that was so great and i felt like crying. mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki tum mukti ka dard samajh sakti hoon varna itni achi fanfic kaisi lik pati. not saying that u couldn't but it just felt like u know how she felt. god u r making me cry now, i wanna go to my fiancee. btw he is so damn hot and i love him. once again bravo 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsomeeeee Reehaa... juz loved this ff.. well im not saying tht i dun luv the othr one but this onee is simplyy gr888, making me regret for not telling him how much i luved him & i still do.. u must continuee it... and btw did i ever tell u tht u r a gr88 writer? if i didnt here u go.. u r an awsomee writer.. i can juz picture evrything while readin' it! cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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reeha, the FF is absolutly fab!
plz cont. soon!
can't waitt! 😃

x Rachna 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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reeha, luv ur fan-fic, as well as the last one, but yes do continue soon, update soon or else with lexi and robin i won;t leave you 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelaisha

reeha, luv ur fan-fic, as well as the last one, but yes do continue soon, update soon or else with lexi and robin i won;t leave you 😆

hey angelaisha! you a fan too? i shouldn't ask, since it's obvious.... reeha is awesome, so what's not to love??? well, welcome to the trio.... you can join our party in the loony bin!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW i have no clue wat to say that was sooooooo goood i love it soooo much!!!! that is a amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love you
wow 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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when are u starting????? my exams are done so i can read ur FF now. plz continue soon!!!!!! waiting!!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww thanks soo much for your thoughts and glade you liked it 😃
RECAP: Love in the rain…

PART TWO

As the rain fell upon them, they opened there eyes...she took her lips away from his…in that one moment she had expressed, her love, passion, devotion, commitment, and most of all – forgiveness. They didn't speak both were silent…Mukti's heart began to race…
Mukti to herself: he won't leave me again will he?
Her question was answered in one moment when he scooped her, one hand resting around is back, and one holding her leather diary, she thought, "is this real, can it be real?" He looked into her eyes, big, innocent, and brown, he smiled. He walked up to the car he had raced in to get here, and opened the door. He put in Mukti to the passenger seat and smiled. Walked to the other side, sat in and drove off…
Mukti thinking: "he's so quite, this is wrong- something isn't right…"
Prem: mukti, stop bad mouthing me in your head.
Mukti: huh…what?
Prem: I know you're thinking why I haven't said anything…
Mukti: yeah…why?
Prem: because our kiss said it all.
She blushed a shad of red that was non existent...and smiled.

Finally after a long nights drive they made it home. Mukti stepped one foot out of the car…
Prem: stop!
Mukti was surprised and did what he said.
The door was open and the rain was still pouring out like there was no tomorrow…
Mukti: prem, the car's going to get wet…
He smiled…and pulled out a silver box and opened it, showing a small diamond ring meant to go on her finger…
Prem: promise not to break my heart again this time?
She cried- but this time not because of sadness but because she was happy, she hugged him like he was the only one in the world…before she knew it, he had picked her, up. Jeevan, Mr. Bajaj and Prerna were worried sick in the living room, trying to figure out where mukti had gone to. Jeevan held the note his daughter wrote- thinking the worst.
When suddenly prem opened the door, and had mukti in his arms…
Prem: MOTHER INDIA!!!!!!!! DADDY COOL! AND FATHER IN LAW!!!!!!!!!!!
Hearing there titles, they turned around- although Jeevan didn't quit understand his till he saw his little girl in the arms of the man she so dearly loved. Prerna had tears in her eyes; and Mr. Bajaj was glad to see them both alright.
Prem: mother India! Stop standing there and crying! Bring your pooja thali thingy!
Prerna quickly brought it and did there arti.
Prem: so when's our wedding?
Prerna smiled: I knew you'd do the right thing…
Mr. Bajaj: Screw the engagement- we've waited so long form prem to stop acting like an idiot and purpose- now its time for the wedding.
Jeevan: but sirji, we're from such a small family we can't do this…
Prerna: Jeevan, don't you consider us part of your family- never say that again…
Mukti went and hugged her father, although she was soaking wet he didn't complain…
Mr. Bajaj: prem what were you doing out in the rain- your soaking!
Prem: Kissing…

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Next morning:

The sun brightly came through the window…showing that it was a new day, new begging and new life. Mukti stretched out in her pink pajamas, and smiled, even though she couldn't see a thing with out her glasses or contacts on. She sat there in bedding smiling for no reason, and looked out her window. A light breeze came through, sending her hair flying.
Mukti took out a skirt and a pink blouse, and smiled.
Mukti: I feel too happy, I hope nothing goes wrong.
Mukti's father walked in…
Jeevan: beta, the date is set.
Mukti: for what? {She knew what}
Jeevan smiled: your and Prem's wedding
Mukti blushed: when is it?
Jeevan: 3 days from now.
Mukti: smiled she looked as if she were walking on cloud 9.

Meanwhile In perm's room.

He stretched out of bed, his drapes where shut…his black Gucci shirt, just shined. Then his phone rang…
Prem: hello? Yeah…
Knock…Knock
Prem shut the phone and opened the door, and a huge bucket of water was splashed on him
Prem: WHAT THE HELL!!!!!
He managed to get the water out of his eyes and look at sneha who was laughing breathlessly
Sneha: Sorry prem, but that's what you get for not telling me about mukti- aww so cute!
Prem gave his older sister the "get lost before I kill you look"
Sneha: eyy, I'm older so no dirty looks for me
Prem: oh yeah- what are you going to do about it sis?
Sneha calmly pinched perms clean shaven check and said in a cute voice as if she were talking to a little kid
Sneha: aww, your soo cute- Well since you asked I'm going to tell mukti
Prem: what will she do about it?
Sneha: well, since your getting married in 3 days she will
Prem turned a wild red color
Sneha took out her cell phone and grabbed a shot…
Prem: EY!
Sneha: aww so cute! Look your blushing!
Prem: 😡

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The two days passed by in shopping, talking, loud music, and joy…today was the day Miss. Mukti Dheshmuhk would become Mrs. Prem Prerna Sharma. As night fell upon the grand bajaj house, all decorated for a lavish event…mukti was getting ready in her room.
Sitting on her bed she looked through the diary prem gave to her that rainy night. She missed him. Prerna hadn't allowed them to see each other before the wedding. Her heart raced as her door opened- it was Sneha, tanisha, Kasak, and Cookie.
Mukti smiled and shut her leather cover diary.
Kasak held a large silver thali and smiled. All four girls wearing a pale pink sarree, smiling.
Sneha came up and sat beside her. Mukti just smiled.
Mukti: its all happening to fast don't you think?
Sneha: mukti, you've waited too long- this is the right time
Kasak: Okeay, Okeay! Enough talking! Its time to dress the bride!
Cookie took off the silver cloth on the thali, reveling a cream langa, with the heavest border of red, gold and silver. Tanisha brought out the heavy jewelry, bangles, tike, a set, and earrings. Finally after an hour of dressing the bride they finished the final touch. The dupatta over her head. Tanisha's phone rang.
Tanisha: hello?
Prem: how dose she look?
Tanisha: Wow, Mr. To-be Husband is curious already…wait a couple more minutes…she'll be here.
Prem: no tell me.
Tanisha: why getting so anxious.
Prem: TANISHA 😡
Tanisha: that I can't tell but, I can tell her a message from you?
Prem: umm…okeay…give her the phone
Kasak: say no cause mom said they can't talk to each other before the wedding
Prem: 😡 kasak I heard that!
Cookie: yes or no, should we give her the message?
Prem: fine..Ummm…ummm
Sneha: tell him to hurry up….
Prem: ummm tell umm her I ummm love her.
With that he quickly disconnected the phone.
Tanisha walked up to mukti who was looking confused, and whispered in her ear.
Tanisha: your To-be-husband told me to tell you, He loves you.
Mukti turned pink hearing that at tanisha giggled.
Cookies :phone range.
Prerna: Where coming get ready!
In two minutes the Barat made it to the Basu house where the wedding was being held. Grandly decorated and lavish. A white horse rode up in full speed not waiting for the Barat. And two minutes later the rest caught up.
Lifting his sahra, prem's smile shown. His cream outfit, with matching shoes, he wore his pendent even on this auspicious occasion
Prerna nagging: Prem beta, did you have to wear that thing?
Prem: mother India its my wedding, Aj tho mujhe bhashan thena tho chord thy jiyaa! (Okeay REALLYY bad Hindi- but I liked the way it flowed with the sentence! Sorry if you didn't get it- then again neither did I)
Mr. Bajaj: Prerna leave prem, let him have his fun!
At the door Sampatha completed the arti, and the entered. Prem met mukti at the door. His eyes feel upon her…she was like a painting. So unrealistically beautiful, priceless….but she was his. He wished he could have her in his arms now…but wedding first. They put the mala's on each other…let the wedding begin!
The phere when smoothly, and they all sat to put on the sin door and mangalsutra…he took the coin and went…a gust of wind suddenly came, making the powder fly.
Old ladies whispered.
Pundit: don't worry choti sahib, continue.
Then the mangalsutra Mukti smiled. She got it, she got what every married Indian women got when married, the representation oh her husband, love and there unbreakable bond.

After the wedding…
Bajaj house. ..
They all sat and talked for hours and hours…finally it was 2:00am
Prerna: I think its time we all go to bed….
Prem: FINALLY!
Everyone looked at him, while mukti turned red!
As soon as everyone left the hall, prem moved to the sofa where mukti sat with the prerna and his sisters, and held her hand
Prem: Well basanti, no, umm Mrs. Prem Sharma
Mukti for once was at a loss of words…after the kiss that night she had barely spoken a word to him- and now they were married.
Prem: eyy, why so quite? I'm not going to eat you alive!
He went closer to her face…it was warm…he wasn't touching it, but the heat from her body met his…her breath grew deeper…her heart grew faster, her eyes shut…
But he didn't kiss her…he whispered…
Prem: you look beautiful, basanti I love you…
Mukti: are you expecting me to kiss you again like I did the other night?
Prem laughed at her sweetness
Prem: no, but I wouldn't mind.
With that he lifted her into his arms, and carried her up the stairs…
There room was beautifully decorated, with flowers and candles…he placed her on the bed and kissed her forehead…and smiled.
Prem: Let me be back I brought you something
Mukti: prem, your milk.
Prem: you drink it, I don't like milk
Mukti: PREM! It's yours!
Prem: fine be mean
As soon as he left in the washroom, she drank the mil, plus she was thirsty…
5 minutes later…
Prem came back and saw she was asleep and sighed…not in regret of missing his suhagerate- but in relief.
He made sure she was asleep for a while…then took out his phone…
Prem: hello?
?: you didn't do anything right UD?
Prem: How many times do I have to tell you no!
?: You got married to her! What am I supposed to think!
Prem: don't worry, I know my boundaries
?: Is she asleep?
Prem: she drank the milk, she's sleeping like a baby…
?: UD take care of yourself, goodnight- love you
Prem: love you too.

TO BE CONINUED…
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!!! nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! 😡 u r just ASKING to get for us to chase you w/ dandas!!!!!! evil evil EVIL little girl!!!

but i like the twist in the story..... though i feel bad for mukti. keep up the good work! awesome update!

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