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JennyPenny

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Posted: 18 years ago

Okay, am a bit rough when writing Fan Fictions, I used to write 3 - 4 years back but am starting once again.. so if u don't like, let me know and I wouldn't continue😊

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Prelude: She walked down the rain, and in total tears. The wind was blowing hard and hitting hard in her face. She couldn't believe he would do something like that. She had been hurt twice and that too by the same person. How could he not understand her? Even meeting after so many years, he was the same person, and he didn't care. As she walked, a car walked up.. the driver faced her with the window open...."Mukti".. She turned and stared at him.. She hated him and only she knew that She also loved him as well. He opened the door for her and she shut it off and kept walking.. before she looked, she saw the truck in front of her.. "He screamed" "Mukti" She lay in blood....

Let me know if I should continue or not..
PS: Mukti will live in this story, so don't worry😛

Part I: pg 3
Part II: pg 4
Part III: pg 5
Part 4: pg 6

Edited by jenny1000 - 18 years ago

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Robin

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Posted: 18 years ago

really good hun! so far it sounds interesting, cant wait to see how it unfolds! please continue!

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Zohrna

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Posted: 18 years ago

😃 gr8 plzzzzzzz cntinu at least mukti survives in this ff which is more than i can say 4 ekta's story 😡

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maryam

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Posted: 18 years ago

ya pls cntinue it we r intrested

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karen

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Posted: 18 years ago

that is reallly good u have to continue soon 👏

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mandy

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Posted: 18 years ago

continue soon it seems really interstin 😉 plus would luv 2 no wat happens next 😳

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ajeebhotum

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Posted: 18 years ago

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awsome job Jenny sis!...plz cont. soon! 😊
will b waiting! 😉

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Jyoti

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Posted: 18 years ago

Continue soon and were you a published author or something?

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prem-mukti#1

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Posted: 18 years ago

its really good! please please cont soon! 😃

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JennyPenny

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part I: Unbearable Truth

Hosp

Prem pranced around in the hosp.. so confused with himself and also wondering as to why the doctor was taking so long. He stared at the watch. It had been 5 hours since he had brought Mukti here, why and why was it taking long. As Prem stared, a hand was placed on his back. He turned out and stared at the doctor..
Prem: is she okay?
Doc: Come into my office Mr. Prem.
Prem in his attitude style thought"grr, these doctors, why can't they tell me here?"

In the doc's office..

Doc: Prem, Mukti is very critical right now. This is not a big accident Prem, but Mutki is pregnant.
Prem was shocked.. "Pregnant?"
All flashes of the love incident in Parmeshwar flashed back at Prem..
Doc: Yes, she is 4 months pregnant and this accident has proved fatal to the child. We are going to operate on her but keep faith in God..

Operation Theatre:
Mukti lay there with her eyes closed.. As the doctor stirred and finish the operation, Prem waitied outside... He was somewhre happy yet angered. He couldn't believe that Mukti had not told him this.. 3 months...He was so happy that he was going to be father. Moments later, Mukti was taken out of OT and shifted into a normal room.. Prem approached the doctor "How is she?" "Fine Prem. Much better.. "and the baby?" "Your babies are fine as well. "Babies? "Yes, You're having twins" Prem smiled.. "Can I meet her?" "Of course, room 201".

Prem walked down the the corridor, he saw Mukti laying there peacefully..

Next morn...

Prem walked in with roses in his hand.. Mukti stirred and looked at him with anger. He smiled and gave her the roses. Mukti was confused at his behavior.. "Kaise ho Mukti?" "Fine" "Good, I hope your anger has cooled down" "Listen Prem, what are you doing?" "Nothing.. I am looking at you lovingly.." Mukti was confused and shocked as well "I hope Prem doesn't know about the kids" "Mukti, I can read your thoughts, I know we are having twins" Mukti was shocked.. She didnt want him to know anything at all. "I am sooo happy Mukti, can't wait to tell all and you know, we'll get married and do all rituals as well, are u happy Mukti?"
"Prem wohh.." "yeah, tell me Mukti, tell me" After much hestitation, "Prem, I cannot marry you" Prem was shocked. He turned around and faced her.. "I am already engaged to...." "Who?" " Sameer" "Whose Sameer" " Mein"

In this story -- Sameer will be played by Rohit Bakshi a.k.a Piyush/Abhishek of KTH😃

Preview: A broken heart

Edited by jenny1000 - 18 years ago

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