a long poem form prem to mukti

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Posted: 18 years ago
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here is the long poem. it almost took me 3 days to write this poem. i also edited 4 poems that i posted last tuesday. if u want me to post it let me know i will do it.

hope you like this one.

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ALL I CAN GIVE:

I don't know if i'm going to be okay,
Because I love you more than words can say.
Whenever you're gone it's you I miss,
I never had felt like this way before


My love for you is more than it seems,
Every night you end up in my dreams.
Every morning you're my first thought,
You're in my every breath that I take

I gave you lots of pain

But you still loved me

Now I want to love you

But now you are gone

my heart easily rip in two.

You're everything I live for,
I will be with you even behind Heavens Door.
I'm your angel; You can be my guardian,
I promise I will love you, and give you all that I can.

I will always love you with all of my heart,
I always did right from the start to love you
My love for you will never end,
Even tough you are gone,

My love will still stay the same

Written by:

Janki, Pooja, and Yesha

Edited by yespoo - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww...its so sweet! it makes me cry! i rly miss PM jodi!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!! good job!!! i really like this poem!!! it good!!! it makes me cry 😭 i miss PM JODI!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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and plz do post some more poems of prem and mukti!!! it too good!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!!! u rite good poem!!! it really sad i cried!!! 😭 its emotional!!! i miss PM's jodi!!!

(hey my name is janki too!!!)

PLZ do post some more poems!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow it is rerally good keep posting some more 👏
Edited by anmol8989 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx so moch for the wonderful coments!!! i will be posting some more
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg its so sweet....n sad too.....awwwww i miss PM alot!!!
neways great job n thnx!!!!
its really good i want more!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well done janki!!! u rite great!!! awww cute!!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its me,

i will post some more poems later cuz i have loads of homework and i still have to think about some more poems.

SORRY!!! 😭

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