fanfic on Prem n Mukti part 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 2

Prena is doing pooja and hearing this Prem wakes up and runs down the stairs with all his clothes on and is folding his hands and praying (shocker), everyone just turns around and looks at him with a blank face Prena was the first to say something

Prena: aray Prem tum yahaan

Prem: offcourse, aur kaha hota hai

Prena: lekin tum itne jaldi kasie ut gaye aur tum aaj pooja mai kaise ai tum to pooja karna pasand be nehi karte

Prem: kyu kya mai pooja mai nehi aak sakta

Prena: aisa nahi prem, bas tum aachnak yaha

Mukti and the others are listening to them

Prem: woh kya ha na ke, ha, maine socha ku na aaj pooja mai mevi aaj ju, aur waise bhi tum mujhe itne sawal ku pooshre ho

Prena: waise he, chalo koi baat nahi, tum aase hamasa pooja mai ku nehi aaj jate, mujhe khushi hote hai ke tum badhilne koshash har rehe ho

Prem: tum bhi na, Mother India

Prena: kya

Prem: kuch nahi, aur waise bhi I'm getting late for work, I think I should leave now

Prem leaves and mukti just stares at him thinking what's gotten into me, why am i feeling an attraction towards him again after all that he's put me through why do i still have feelings for him, one minute I can't stand him because he's too obnoxious and the next minute he becomes this sweet and kind person that I can't help but be around, why is this happening to me? Why?

Mukti too leaves for work and sees Prem working but doesn't see anyone else there, so she decides to ask him where everybody is

Mukti: Prem

Prem: ha

Mukti: kya kare ho

Prem: kaam aur kya, ku kuch chahe

Mukti: nahi

Prem: basanti

Mukti: tum mujhe basanti ku balata ho

Prem: ku mai tumhe jo balana chata ho woh mai tumhe baloga

Mukti: uff, tumara saat to baas karna be mushkal hai

Prem: Basanti

Mukti: Kya

Prem: aaj sirf mai aur tum company mai hai

Mukti: woh kyu

Prem: ku ke maine sab ko ghar begedia

Mukti: woh tumne kyu kiya

Prem: kyu ke woh kuch nahi kar sakte

Mukti: agar yaha koi nahi hei toh kya mai be ghar jayu

Prem: kya

Mukti: ha agar sb ghar chal gaye toh mai be phir ghar chalae jate hu

Prem: ah, tum ghar nahi ja sakte

Mukti: kyu

Prem: ah, kyu ke mujhe tumari help chaie

Mukti thinking to herself that he's probably up to no good but why does he want me to stay with him and what does he need my help with?

Mukti: teek hai

Mukti: Prem

Prem: ha

Mukti: kya iska matlab hai ke Debo ve nehi aage

Prem: oh ho miss basanti, tumhe Debo ke fikar kasae padge

Prem thinking to himself why is she always bringing that Debo's name into our conversation

Mukti: kya, mai to sirf pooche rehi ti, aur kuch nahi, lekin tum hamasha ulti bate ku kahta ho

prem turns red after hearing mukti's reaction he was expecting her to become defensive and start blushing but mukti knew why he was asking her that and she didn't want to give him the satisfaction so she just left it at that

Prem: kya um never mind tum aapna kaam karo

Prem was thinking that it'd would have been a good idea if only the two of them were working alone so they could set their differences aside and try to move on, he didn't know why he wanted a truce, and he also didn't know why he would feel angry whenever mukti was really mean to him, all he knew was that he didn't want to fight with her

to be contined

sorry if there are any spelling mistakes because I didn't have time to double check

I didn't introduce the new charcter yet but I will in my next update

c ya

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Shilpa_1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Plz continue soon can't wait more plz update fast
Shilpa_1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Plz continue soon it's been a week tht u hav not continued 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was rly gd
count soon plz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool fanfic yaar but then again im kinda biased on this neways yaar 😳 😳 do continue it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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where is the first part?, very good update please cont. sooN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cud u give the first part 4 this ff??
its great by the way!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow mandy
sweetie u do such a good job. i loved it. continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ncie story. plz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tahts really gud plz continue soon
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