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Posted: 19 years ago

13 days guys, start posting me please, the sogns.

Part two: Work out

Seen one:

Mukti ran into the house, she was yelling, "Vishu, Sakshi, Dav mai wapas agai where are you guys."

"Bachi baas don't yell the house down." Sammer said smiling and opening his arms to her, she ran and hugged him. "So all ready to brake you're image to pices?"

"Yes bai more than…I can't wait till the concert." Mukti said, and the smile on her face showed it. "Serioulsy…I am sick of that whole thing you know that sweet girl perspective. Man the audience is going to grow wild right bai?"

"Sure darling…" suddenly her smile faded, "Bai do you think they will accept it? I don't want to loose out on my carear."

"Sweet heart…the tickets are sold out! That was only because it said you are going to play with some item numbers." Shravan assured her as she sat on his lap, Mukti smiled. "Where is mama?" she asked, looking around unable to find her.

"Aunty has gone to London, there was a problem there she said she will come only after a month." Shravan tells her, Mukti lay down on his lap after getting of, and soon she was fast asleep tiered after doing all that walking around.

Seen two:

Angath comes and lies down in Josh's bed, and streaches as Josh hands him a drink. "What a trip, great idea Josh I have never seen Aashika and Mukti this happy in ages, not to mention Karan, that old smile was back in his eyes."

"What about Kripa, you never say a word about her." Angath's smile faded, "Uska baara mai kya kehena? I with mom never separated us…" he teared up and Josh pressed his arm on his, "Pratheek would be missing me I'll go pick him up from school." Just as Angath got up Josh smiled at him, "You know no one would ever guss Pratheek is not your son seeing the amount of love you give him."

"I don't care, he is my son even if I don't have any blood relations with him." Angath said, he turned around only to get shocked. "Mr. Sharma aap?"

"Umm ya I came to talk to you about some things but I don't think this is the right time…you need to go get your son." Prem began moving away, but Angath called him back. "No you come with me. We can talk on the way and please don't tell him he is not my son he does not know it as yet." Prem nodded and they left. In the car Angath added, "Not to Mukti as well she does not know."

Seen three:

Mukti was talking on the phone, "Mama mai aap sa bahuth naaraz hoon. Why are you not hear with me? Aisa kya kaam tha, I always tell you before I go then why did you not tell me before leavening. May be I could I help you or something."

"Beta mama is sorry but this was very urgent, I am going to meet this person regarding our food chain, you can't help." Sakshi told her, Mukti made a sad face, "Teek hai mama but come back soon." Suddenly she started coughing Sakshi got really worried, "Beta kya hua? Did you have anything cold?"

"No mama I did not…I am having a cough since morning, I need to take medicin." Mukti complains, "But I hate it's taste."

"Beta do take it its good for you…only then you will get well soon. Apna kyar rakna bachi." Sakshi says and Mukti shakes her head, "Nahi rakugi." She says just then Karan comes in and asks, "Kya nahi rako gi duffer?"

"Apna kyar budu, mama line par hai." She says, Karan takes the phone from her, "Hi mom, don't wory mai uski kyar rakluga, how is you're work going? Great um you want to talk to her, O.K I'll tell her? Mukti mom had a meeting so she will call you latter baby."

"All right. I don't want medicin Karan." She yelled as he moved to get it, he poured some on a spoon and fed it to her, "You don't have a choise aab sojao."

"No put me to sleep…" she healed his hand and made him lye down next to her, soon Mukti was fast asleep holding Karan around his waist and her head on his chest. (she had a habit of holding the pillow) Karan who was wide awake felt his heart beat go up, his hands badly wanted to wrap around her and hold her tightly. His breath was going out cold, slowly he took his hand away pushed her away gently moved away from the place. Going down stairs he sat on the sofa and ran a hand though his hair, "Yea muja kya horaha hai Mukti tho Yudi ki hai sirf Yudi ki. Muja uspar koi haak nahi hai…" Karan sat like that for some time and then left, he needed a drink just to clear his head.

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
uh oh karan is develping feelings for her well mukti is just to great!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

12 days to go people please P.M some songs

Seen five:

Pratheek was on Prem's lap in the car, Angath had gone to get some chocolates for him. "Yudi, do you know Mukti and Josh chachu as well?"

"Yes Pratheek, not as well as you do though." Prem ruffied the kids hair, "Hay Angath." Angath came back and strated driving again, "Umm this is not the way home."

"I know, we are going for a rehearsal and I want you to see this, besides it's Pratheek's favorite song." He said coolly and Pratheek smiled, again Angath pulled over, "We are hear, lets go in, come on Prem." Angath lead Prem inside when Pratheek went away to play, inside a girl was talking to some of the dancers she had her back turned to him. Her black track and top clearly showed that a reharsal was going on, Angath crept up behind her and hugged her, "Angath let me go." Mukti pushed him away, "You are late."

"Sorry sweet heart, I had to go pick Pratheek up…" she smiled a bit, then tured to one of the men there, "Winston are you prepared for the song?"

"Yes Mukti, you can start the rehearsals now." Winston assured, soon the reharsal went on perfectly. They danced for some fast beat songs and Prem watched the chemistry between Angath and Mukti, it was too good…he felt really bad that he could never do anything for her. Soon the rehearsal was over and Prem knew he did the right thing by getting the tickets for it, Snaha would love the show too bad Kasak could not make it. His meditation was cut across by Josh who came in and applauded for the work, "Good work guys." Mukti hugged him, "You made it."

"You needed a ride girl I had to come, besides we were planning to go for a drive." Mukti nodded and then smiled at Pratheek, "How was school buddy?"

"Great! Mukti we have a field trip this Monday." Angath looked at his son strangely, "I all ready paied for that. Did I not?"

"Yes papa but I have not told Mukti about it. We are going to this park…" he began and Mukti sat and heared the whole thing over a coffee. "After we come back you remember my birth day is going to come up right?" Pratheek asked and Mukti gave a nervous smile, "How could I forget?" Josh saw right through it, "You forgot? Mukti you should not depend on you're computer, I'll remaind you of these things." He placed a firm hand on her head Pratheek smiled, this was too common with Mukti. "All right guys brake is over, Mukti get back, Josh you too." Called Winston another few hours went by as Mukti and Josh rehearsed. Finally after every thing was over Mukti left she was passing a cutting when an arm grabbed her, Mukti was about to scream but a hand covered her mouth. She recogonized the thouch immidiatly, "Josh kya hua?"

"Mama…she is going to try hit Kripa soon, we need to do something, can you look though it?" Mukti looked into his eyes, then finally said.

"Sure…by." Mukti hugged him and they left in separate ways, Prem who had seen this from far away felt his blood boil.

Seen seven:

Mahash is in his room working on a case when Kasak walks in, "Hay chachu. Aap busy hai kya?"

"Nahi Kasak what happened?" he looked up, Kasak put a photograph in front of him, "Ara ya tho Hemanth Lakeer, great industrialist."

"You sure its him chachu?" Kasak demanded, Mahash laughed, "I have known him for years why?"

"He takes a lot of concern with Mukti that is why…" Kasak told him, Mahash laughed, "He is a nice person don't worry."

"If you say so…" she replied and walked away, "Thank god there is nothing beyond this thing."

Krishi

Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 prem's blood is boiling 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wonderful. I think the song papa kete hai will sound good to introduce any new young guy in a party type atmosphere and the guy will be the one singing. Just a suggestion though.
Edited by chat_222 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
11 days guys

Seen eight:

Mukti was romming aroud in her night dress when Karan (after getting rid of his alcoholic mind) entered. On seeing him she ran and hugged him, "Thank god you are hear there is such a big problem." He hugged her back pastionately but with pain…he thought, "I know Mukit how will I get you back with you're love?"

"Kripa is in danger." She said and he pulled her in front, "Kya come again?" the horror in his eyes said he heared and Mukti repeated the statement, "I need to save her some how Karan please help me." She had tears in her eyes, and Karan made her sit down and tell him all about it, "Sit down you need some dinner as well, I will fix you some."

"Karan how do you expert me to eat when Kripa is in danger?" Mukti demanded irritated. He stroked her hair a bit, "Nothing will happen to her we need to some how get her to safety." Takeing out a pack of tomato soup with cream he poured it out, Mukti watched as he placed it in the microwave, Karan was thinking and she knew not to interrupt him now. Finally he turned to her, "Mukti there is one way…" he said something in mute each word that escaped his lips made Mukti slowly smile, how much he loved that smile, that would become ten times better as soon as he gave her hand into 'Prem's' in marriage, she was his only family left and he could not afford to loose her smile. Mukti came back and hugged him tightly this time with tears in her eyes, Karan knew, she missed her baba. "Come on I'll tuck you in." Takeing her hand in his he slowly pulled her Mukti let her self get dragged along. After tucking her he stayed there for some time strocking her hair, till she slept and for some time after that when she was on his lap. Vishnavi stood framed to the door watching them leaning her head agaist the wood. Her stomach looked large because of her stomach…Karan looked up finally as Mukti got of his lap. "Vishu you should not be up at this time of the night, I don't think Dev will like it…its not good for you're child."

"Same goes to you Karan…go sleep by the way thanks for takeing care of my bachi." She says Karan looks down trying to hide a smile, "She really needs you at times…"

"I know…I know she needs me that is why I take care of her." Karan replied and left Vishnavi was about to switch of the light but Karan came back, "No leave the small one on…she can't sleep in the dark."

Seen nine:

Mukti and Karan went for an early morning jog, Mukti loved those moments in the solitude of the beach and the quietness Karan was quiet when he jogged near her. The sun raise was beautyfull and Mukti liked it, both were early raisers though they sleep late. She slowed down and ran a hand through her hair and back, then finally looked at Karan… "I want to go to the cottage, its been ages can we?"
"Sure I don't have office today, tell you what we can go on a nature trail…bring you're camera along I know its been ages since you have been on one." Mukit smiled and sat next to him watching the waves something that was inspirational for her and beautyfull for him. Slowly she got up and reached out, he caught her hand and let himself be pulled up. "Chala?"

"No…Karan there is something I need to talk to you about. Its about Nakshay – um – I want Kripa and Angath to sing it but for that they need to get together." She explained.

"I knew something was up," he smile turned nauty and frank, "So that is why you are so desperately setting them up. Bad girl…jokes apart great choice."

"Great! Still up for the nature trail?" she asked.
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Posted: 19 years ago
😃 😃 😃 once again i have to say i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hay people, you would be happy to know I am dumping Dark Shadows (not that many read it) I just can't get anything more. Hay its just a fanfic not a boy friend so I can dump it. (Kidding don't send me hate mail) Any ways, in the new fanfic it's going to be after the leap and when Mukti pulls Prerna out. Well trust me this is very different and the way it's presented is also a bit too different more like Akelapan but different…I know you guys will love it.

Link?

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=416327&T PN=1 ?
Edited by shakthi258 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Seen ten:

Mukti and Karan were walking around the woods near Karan's cottage. "Wow its beautiful, do you come hear often?"

"No hardly get time…but this is gorgeous…" Karan sat on a elevation and took a few snaps when Mukti did in another direction. "Wow…I just want to paste all the photo's in my journal what a view…" Mukti focused on some thing with her camera then looked away from in and back again. "Karan come hear and take a look at this." She called Karan too came and focused his own camera on what she said, "Wow! Mukti it is a ruins of an ancient village too bad there is no path this way, on the other side there is though. We will go there some time with the gang."

"Yes lets…chalo I want to get some down valley shots." Mukti asked and soon lead Karan down hill carefully. "It has been a wile since people have come hear, good we can get some unique shots."

"Mukti I don't get it first you are too busy with work to even think of photography but when you come you only think if it nothing else. You are really strange." Karan teased her she smiled but on level ground she slipped and he healed her in his arms, slowly getting her back on the ground looked deep into her eyes, "Are you all right?"

"Yes…um…thanks for not letting me fall." Mukti looked down embarrassed, Karan too looked away, "Sure any time." Finally they reached a clearing Mukti looked on open mouthed, a large valley of wild flowers stood in front of her, she let out a low whistle, "Wow! Its beautiful."

Karan was looking at her and thought, "Yes you are." Mukti saw something and immediately started snapping…they got back to the cottage only in time for a late lunch, four o clock. Slowly munching the salad sandwich she looked at Karan, "Whats bugging you?"

"W-what? N-nothing I was just thinking of some thing…" he told her as she took a swig of her diet coke. "The first time we came hear and how you…cried and how I had to lift you…Mukti that night you were so week I thought you were gone for. Good development." Tears came into Mukti's eyes and she hugged Karan and started crying again, he knew she was sad and lovingly healed her for some time, slowly kissing her hair.

Seen eleven:

Prem was driving around dull, nothing could take his mind of her, they way she smiled, they way she looked at him when she was sad even the need to hold her in his arms. Mukti was now in his head all the time, how he wished she would leave and never come back…just like before. He always wanted her close by, when she worked for him he would drive her to presentations. Once when he asked her for a dance and she rejected, he did not know why he asked her. Was it for keeping her company or for being with her? The way she worked with him for the vidio, the way he worked with her on the media…the way she sang and performed. The dance in Panchmashwar and the smile he had on his face. Mutki in Angath's arms, Mukti in Josh's arms his anger everything…

The intervew of Mukti and Angath, those photographs, Mother India's album…what not.

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey shakthi258, you said you wanted our suggestions for the songs of Nakshya right? i thought i would throw some ideas out there:

(1) Entry of a girl - Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain from Veer Zaar

(2) Entry of a guy - Chale Jaise Hawaien from Main Hoon Na (guys part)

(3) Love development - Shayad Yahi from Lucky or My Dil does hmm form Saalam Namaste or Jiya Dhadak Dhadak from Kalyug

(4) Confestion of love - Tujhe Dekha To from Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge or Kaho Na Pyar Hai from Kaho Na Pyar Hai or Kasam se Kasam form Main Prem Ki Diwani Hoon

(6) Brake up of love - O Priya Priya form Dil or Tadap Tadap from Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam or Hum

(7) Love's death pain (guy side) - Sau Dard from Jaan-E-Mann

(8) Getting a new love (guy again) - Thi Meri Daastaan from Kalyug or Dil Ke Badle Sanam from Kyun Ki

Thats what i could think of off the top of my head. What do you all think? Hope that helps a little and i look forward to see what your planning!

Robin

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