prem and mukti love -part 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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First of all thank u all for loving my story..and this part is just the continution of part 1 and 2.After some months of prem and mukti's marriage)
PREM:Basanti...basanti..(shouting at the top of his voice)
(mukti comes from another room)
MUKTI:kya hai..kyon itna shor macharehe ho..???
PREM:may shor macharaha hoe..??kya may apni patni ko pyaar say bhola bhi nahi sakta..??
MUKTI:tik hai..batayo kya problem hai..??
PREM:mujha office kya liye der horaha hai...meri kapdha kaha hai..??
MUKTI:Prem..tum bhi na..bilkul bacha ho..wait..i will bring ur clothes..
(mukti brings a nice suit which normally tusshar and anurag wear in kzk)
PREM:Basanti...kya tum pagal ho gaye ho..?? ye sab kya hai..??
MUKTI:prem..ab tumhari sadhi ho chuki hai...ab tumhai bhi tussar baiya ki tarha..office may smart bankya janachahi ye...and i know ki tumhai ye kapdha bahoat suit karega..
PREM:yere yaar..pyaar may insan ko kya kya karna padh tha hai...tik hai tum kahai ti ho ta..i will wear it.....pyaar ki hai nibanay to pahaigi..
(prem take the suit and comes out wearning it..he looks even more sexy and handsome in suit...)
PREM:exuse me..mrs.prem perna sharma...kya prem ghar mai hai...??
MUKTI:ummmm...ap kyon...??? prem to abhi abhi office gaye huye hai..ap bhi deknay may to handsome hai...kya may ap kay sath aja rat koffie piney jasakti huh..???
(she smiles)
PREM:now shut up..i am getting late..now give me a kiss ..then i will go..
MUKTI:Kohi kiss viss nahi..i am getting late..
PREM:Office mujha jana hai aur der tumhai kyon horahehai..???
MUKTI:Prem..tum bhi na..sab batey bhol jatey ho..?? ajh dorris babhi ka delivery hai aur mujha hospital jana hai..
PREM:oh..anyway i want to say u some thing..
MUKTI:Ab kya hai..?
(prem holds her in his arm and says..)
PREM:ye basanti..u r looking dam sexy in sari..
MUKTI:thank u prem.. can i leave now ..??
PREM:Aur yak baat bhi hai....??
MUKTI:AB KYA???
PREM: Basanti..kya tumhai nahi lagta ki hamari jindagi may kohi kami hai..???
MUKTI:nahi prem...marey pas tum ho..aur tumhari pas
may..aur hum dono kya pas hammari pyaar hai..aur kya chahi ye..??
PREM:but i want something from u basanti..??
MUKTI:Kya...??
PREM:yak nanni si..mukti..jo mujha papa bulaye...
MUKTI:tum bhi na pagal ho...okay i am going bie honey..
(mukti leaves the room)
MUKTI:Sach kaha mukti..may pagal huh..aur pagal mujha tumney banaya..tumhari pyaar nay banaya...
(then prem goes to office and everyone is soo shocked seeing prem's new look.He enters his cabin and sees that debonita was there waiting for him....)

okay guys..if u people still loving my story i will write futher..i will be waiting for ur response...)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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dat was rely gud please cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow lovely carry on soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yes plz continue i want to know what miss nautanki(debo) says to prem!!!!!!!!
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good work!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey cool yaar thanks for posting this
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow such a gr8 fanfic
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