love and mukti love..part 1

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guys its just a imagination story of prem and mukti..at last..
when everything happens fine and bajaj family accept prem and when even prem started loving everyone.Mukti is going to marry someone else coz prem never dare to express his love to her.it is the day of mukti's marriage and mukti is in her room dressing herself..suddenly prem enters the room...
MUKTI:prem..tum yeha..?? agar kisi nay dekliya tyo?? please yeha say chaley jayho..
PREM:deko mukti...may tumsey kuch keha chata hu...aur agar maney ajh tumse nahie kaha tyo..sayad kabhi nahie kayhepayounga...
MUKTI:dekho prem..may kuch sunna nahi chati..please leave me alone..
PREM:mukti..i know ki mayney tumhay bahoat..taklif diya hai..bahoat rulaye bhi hai..aur yesab kya baat..bhi agar may kahoe ki may tumse bahoat pyaar karata hu..to sayad tum yakeen nahi karogi..laykin mukti..today the only truth of my life is i love u more than myself .
MUKTI:ye sab tum mujha kyon batareheho prem..?? kuchi dher baat meri sadhi ho ney wali hai..prem..please meri taklif aur maat badhayo..please go away from here..
PREM:tik hai mukti..i will go..i will go soo far from everyone but yak baar tell me that u donot love me.
MUKTI:i donot love u prem..i donot(then she hugs him)
PREM:Meri jindagi timse suru hoti hai aur tumhi par katam..tum meri ho ya nahi may tumhe jindagi bhar pyaar karunga..
MUKTI:Prem.. tumney bahoat dher kardi hai..ma apani khusi kay liye sabai ko taklif nahi dena chati huh..
PREM:i know mukti...i donot want u to run away with me but i want u to know that u r only girl i had loved in my life from deep inside my heart and no matter where ever i will be tomorrow i will always be loving u forever and ya.miss basanti...than-x for teaching me wht is love and how it feels to love someone..
(both of them have tears in theirs eyes and their tune is played..kabhi na sakhu aya kabhi na .......)
PREM:okay mukti..i am going now and i will never come back in your life..be happy and donot forget that prem loves u more than his life..and he will be loving u till the end of his life..
MUKTI:meri sadhi tak ruk jayo na prem??
PREM:i am not that stronge enough to see my life being destroyed infront of me..so donot stop me mukti i have to go..
(then they both hug each other and cry..and prena is seeing everything happening between them but she cannot do anything expect crying.then prem leaves the room and the song from kuch kuch hota hai is played ..janey bafa hokay bekarar..barso kiya meney yitajar par kab ye tuney nahi ye tab kaha jo ab kaha..dil baybasiley chupke say rota hai..kya karu haye kuch kuch hota hai)

dear frens.. i am not indian and cannot write hindi properly so if there any errors then forgive me..but i love the show kzk...and if u people liked my story i will complete it as soon as possible.

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Bookworm87 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi this is gud!!keep it up!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome yaar. keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wel done its really good! 👏 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww rly gd
do count
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very good job! 👏 continue soon! i hope prem gets mukti though, so continue soon wanna no what happens next! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww...its really good simran bibek...its like kyun ho gaya na
u know in tht movie last part...vivek says to aishwarya tht he loves her and aishwarya says its too late..whtever..ok anyway gud job...i wish this scene happens in kzk soon..anyway i m outie
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Posted: 19 years ago
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That is really good.
Continue soon.
And good job.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awsome but i dont realli understand hindi so it took me a while to read it 😆 but it was awsome keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THAT WAS REALLY COOL, I LOVE 2 SEE DAT 😉 😉 ONE MORE THING, EKTA SHOULD HIRE U B/C UR STORY'S AWESOM 👏 👏 👏

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