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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz !!!!!!!!!!! continue .. its really gud<<
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guys she is going to come in september.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's good 👏 👏 👏 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wht she is cumin in september???? 😭 😭 plz cum fast and continue..i cant wait
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bisma please please please continue soon
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HI GUYS...SORRY I WENT ON A VACATION WITHOUT INFORMING YOU ALL AND THANKS GAGANDEEP FOR LETTING EVERYONE KNOW THAT I WAS AWAY. NOW THAT I'M BACK, I'LL CONTINUE WITH MY FANFIC. ALSO, I HAD A ROCKING VACATION! IT WAS MY UNCLE'S WEDDING! OMG!!! I WAS WEARING THOSE COLOR FUL DRESS...UMMMMM ANYWAYS LET ME CONTINUE WITH MY STORY:

Episode #5

The person who grabs rocky's hand is mukti's best friend karan…. (Karan likes sharadha)

karan is not that rich. He is just okey…. He treats mukti like a sister but everyone takes their relationship the other way. Karan like sharadha and mukti knows that… he never told shrdha that he like her…

both karan and rockey start to fight and the dean comes to separate them both. Mukti goes home alone and founds a note on the door…

the note says that aparna has gone to her mother's house for a month because she was ill.

Mukti tells this to shradha but shradha doesn't seems to care… mukti calls sneha

The next day:

Mukti wakes up and realizes that it's the party tonight! She decides to call sneha

Mukti: helow? Sneha… mey mukti bolri houn..

Sneha: oh hi mukti… kesi ho… sab kuch thik to hai na???

Mukti: han sab thik hai… wo sneha tum mujey party ke liye leney ari ho na???

Sneha: kiya??!! To tum ari ho??

Mukti: han han baba

Sneha: thik to phir ready rehna and I'll be there…

Mukti: okey bye… or han wo… kuch nahi

Sneha: okey bye

Mukti is waring a red chridaar suit and is all ready… shardha is wearing a skirt that is very short.

Mukti: shrahda tum ye pehenkey jari ho??!!

Sharadha: tumey isey kiya?? Ye mere kapre hain or wesey bhi tum koun hoti ho mujey kuch kheney wali…. Oh god…. My prem ata hoga mujey pick up kerney….

Mukti: kiya? Prem yahan ara hai?

Sharrdha: duh!!

Suddenly the phone rings and mukti picks it up. It's sneha

Sneha: hey mukti… sorry me tumhey leney nahi a sakti …. Wo asal mey me koi important kam keri thi so meney socha ke bahi bhi wahi arey hai sharadha ko leney to wo tumhey bhi pick up kerlengey..

Mukti: kiya??? Abb mey prem ke saat jaongi? Or wesey bhi hum dono ik dosrey ko pata nahi kiya kiya bol chukey hain … I don't think he will take me… oh I think he's here bye…

Sneha: bye!

Prem is there at the door looking at mukti…

Prem: wow sharahda! You look so hot and beautiful in that dress!!

Prem comes close to mukti

Prem: and you look like a basanti!!! Shrdha starts to laugh and mukti leaves from there… she goes outside and starts to leave when prem comes and stops her..

Prem: excuse me… shayed me app ko leney aya houn….

Mukti: and excuse me ! I don't want to go with you!

Prem: huh? Okey then fine! Koi tumharey saat bhi nahi jana chata… ye to meri majburi hai ke mujey tum hey leey ana para….. ager sneha muje nahi bolti to..

Mukti: to to??? Jao apni stupid shradha ke saat! Os hi ko leney ayie they to os hi ke saat jao! Mukti leaves in a texi… prem doesn't seems to care and goes with shardha…. Meanwhile at the party… guest began to arrive and mukti is late… prem and shardha reach there early….

Sneha: arey mukti… tumitni der me ayi?or bahi ke saat kiun nahi ayin?

Mukti: wo actually…(but anurag interrupts)

Anurag: ladies and gentlemen… ajj humney ye shandar party is liye rakhi hai kiun hamara beta prem America se aya hai (everyone claps)… hum chatey hain ke app sab party enjoy Karen and lets give a big round of applause to my son prem! (everyone cheers for Prem… he feels bored)

Everyone starts to dance on the dance floor… prerna and anurag are dancing together and mr.bajaj and sam are dancing… mukti is left alone…sneha and shard are enjoying themselves and prem is dancing with shardha…suddenly two guys come to mukti and start to misbehave with her..

Guy: hey…. (Coming close to her….mukti feels disturbed) will you dance with me?

Mukti: go away from me…

Guy 2: no? …why are you so alone here…

Guy: I think she need someone…(coming really close to her..)

Mukti: please leave me alone…

Guy2: what if we do not…

Mukti is scared and is about to leave when the guy grabs her… (No one is seeing this)

Mukti runs and bumps in to prem who was coming to get a drink…

Prem: what the …tum phir merey rastey me ayi huh? Now it's your fault…

Mukti: (pointing to the guys) wo… wo log mujsey…

Prem: what??? What are you saying …

Mukti: please can you drop me home please….

Prem: why you want to leave so early basanti? Don't you like this party? anyone said anything to you?...

the guys come to her and mukti grabs prems arm…prem understands everything…

Guy: hey wats up prem… or ye lady app ke saat hain?

Prem: koi shak…. Anyways what are you guys doing here? Go enjoy the party….

Guy2: yeah we were just…. Going… take care man… (they leave)

Mukti still does not let go of prem's hand…

Prerna comes and ask them both to dance…

Prem and mukti resists but prerna pushes both of them to the dance floor…. They both dance on thmhi dheko na.. from kabhi alvida na khena…they both somewhat strange…the party ends and everyone is leaving..

Mukti: mr. basu app ki party bohout achi thi… thanks for such a lovely party…

Prerna: arey mukti beta… tumgher kis key saat jari ho?

Mukti: wo mey… bus sey chali jaongi gher…
Prerna: arey nahi nahi tumey or shradha ko prem drop kerdey ga… okey…

Mukti: lekin aunty..

P: lekin wekin kuch nahi…prem please mukti or shradha ko gher drop kerdo…(prem makes a face but listens to prerna)..bye beta and take care…

In the car: mukti is sitting in the back seat and shardha is sitting in the front with prem…

Mukti is bored and fells a sleeps…

Prem: so… shrdha.. Did you like the party...?

Shradha: it was great!

Prem: that's good! And you miss basa—(prem turns around to see mukti but she is sleeping like a baby...prem laughs but can't move his eyes off from her… suddenly shradha screams and prem stops the car…mukti wakes up..)

Prem: what the hell! Why did you screamed?! You just scrred the hell out of me!

S: can't yyou keep a good control on your car prem! We were going to crash! wake up!

P: Okey im sorry

Mukti: what's going on?

Shardha: you don't need to know!

M: huh?!

Prem drops mukti and shrdha home and leaves…


Next DAY IN THE COLLAGE:

Everyone is sitting in the collage's caf… mukti is reading a lesson to karan from a book, sneha just can't stop starring at shrad and same goes with shrard… prem is sitting in front of mukti and is noticing karan very deeply…shardha just can't stop talking about how good she was looking at the party….

Prem: hey everyone… I'm bored… lets just go some where and lets take a brake... (everyone agrees except for mukti who is completely ignoring prem and continues to tell karan about the lesson)

Prem gets up and grabs the book from her…mukti gets up…

Mukti: Prem…please give me my book back… now!

Prem: catch me if you can…. (Prem runs in the ground… Mukti runs after him)

Mukti: you spoiled!!

Sneha: I think we should go … they will come …

Sharad: yeah… lets go to a beach…

Karan: sounds good right shradha?

Shrahdha: huh?! Oh… amm.. and what about prem..

Sharad: he will come! Now lets get a move on!...

Mukti chases prem but can't keep a track of where he went…suddenly mukti sees her book on the ground and no one is there….mukti goes to pick up her book but suddenly rocky come close to mukti…mukti realize that she is alone and should go back…

Mukti is leaving but rocky comes in front of her…

Mukti: what do you want?

rocky: I want you miss mukti!

Mukti: get lost…don't you remember the slap I gave you…mukti is leaving but rocky grabs her arm tightly)

Rocky: me tum sey osdin ka badla leker hi rahonga… and no one can come to help you now….

Mukti: let go of me you… help! (Big fat tears roll down mukti's face)

Rocky: no one will come mukti… no one (suddenly some one punches rocky on the face)

Rocky: what the…(rocky runs for his life)

Mukti: prem…(mukti cries)

Prem: and why are you crying now huh! I hate tears…! Now please just stop it..that's what you wanted right… me coming to help you in this kind of condition…that's how you are mukti… that's you character..you show your innocence to people and then you want them
to help you…(mukti is shocked and hurt)

Prem notices that mukti's arm is red and she is hurt…
He tries to touch her arm but mukti moves back from him…

Mukti: no! don't! stay away from me! don't ever bothor to touch me!

Mukti: kiya… tum kiya samajtey ho apney apko huh? (She cries) wo rocky merey saat batamisy kerarha tha or tum is mey mujey doshi therarehey ho…tumhari himat kesey hui merey ya merey character ke barey mey baat kerney ki huh? (she pushes prem) arey ager tum atey bhi nahi to phir bhi mey appney appko safe kerley thi.. mujey tumhari koi zarurat nahi hai prem so please leave me alone…tum please yahan sey chaley jao… I just hate you prem! I hate you! Mujey nahi pata tha key tumhara esa mind hoga… never… me to os prem ko dhond rahi thi jis ke saat meney apna bachpan bitaya hai…. Lekin wo tum nhai ho… wo tum nhai prem…ager rocky neymujey apney haton sey chot puchai hai to tum ney mujey apney bolo sey or apni harkaton sey chot puchai hai!..I just don't want to see your face again in my life! Just get lost… I hate you! I hate you!

Mukti leaves from there….leaving prem ashamed of himself…

Kabhi na sukon aya back ground music starts…and leter prem leaves too…

Prem is in the car and is having flash backs of what mukti said to him…prem feels bad

*flash* mujey tumhari koi zarurat nahi hai prem!

*flash* I just hate you prem! I hate you!

*flash* do not ever bother to touch me! Never!

Suddenly prem's cell rings..he picks it up:

Prem: han bolo sharad…

Shrad: kahan ho tum dono? Hum log tum logo ka wait kerrahin yahan beach per..

Prem: hey man… me to nahi asakonga… mukti ki thori tabiyat thik nahi hai... so she won't come either..

Sharad: hey is everything alreight?

Prem: yeah it's all fine.. I'll talk to you later…

prem goes to mukti's house…

He knocks on the door but it's open… prem wonders around the house… suddenly he hears someone crying…he follows the crying and sees mukti crying with a picture of her dad's in her hand…her arm is still red….prem feels bad

Prem just stands there and watches mukti…(mukti can't see prem)

Mukti: papa app kiun chale gaye…. Mey bohut akeli hogayi houn… (she cries)

Prem just stands there…

Mukti: papa wo prem hena… wo bohut bura hai… ajj osney mujey bohut hurt kiya hai… lakin oski bhi galti nahi hai..(prem stares because he knew it was his fault)wo hai to acha lekin dosro ke liye bura ban jata hai… but papa I really need you!(she cries more and prem just can't take it anymore…he leaves…feeling bad..) mukti sleeps with the picture in her hand…
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
update soon i loves it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yayyyyyyyyyy i am soo happy u continuedd
omgg i must say it was awesomee
plz cont soon
i loved itt
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks guys... i'm gald you guys liked it... theres one thing i'll like to tell you all...since my school has started, i will only be able to update this fanfic on weekends...i hope that's fine with you all and i hope you all understand ....and once again thanks for you encouragements...
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love it 😊

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