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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi fans. this is my own made up kzk story. i am kinda new to this but here we go.. all you ocmments are needed. me and my sister have made this story up all by oursleves.

prerna and aurag are together and they are on a holiday in hongkong! bajaj doesn't know that they're there and him and gupta go to hong kong for a buisness thingy. they're at hong kong airport. meanwhile....

prerna - anurag darling, when r we going bck to mumbai

aurag - why do you want to go bck, this is a first time in a long time we have ever got some privacy!

prerna - sssshhhhhhh anu.

at the airport

bajaj - have you got the hotel papers gupta?

gupta - ha mr bajaj. hum ye property zaroor milenge.

............................................................ .........................

prerna - anurag can you get me a cuppa tea????

anurag - ok prerna.

anurag is just going out of the room when gupta decides to get a cuppa too

anuarg and gupta meet!

anurag - gupta gee. aap?

gupta - haa woh main aur....

anurag - you and who gupta gee?

gupta - no one. i have come to get a property.

anurag - acha. well, hope we meet agaain gupta rushes to bajajs room and tells him the shocking news. bajaj rushes downstairs to anurag.

bajaj - o. anurag basu. what a surprise!

anurag - oooo. gupta aur tum.

bajaj - yes. main aur gupta.

prerna- y r u taking so long aunrag???

just then prerna sees bajaj

prerna - my bajaj, aap???

bajaj - prerna. i was just talking to anurag

anurag - haa prerna. woh sirf baat karete.

prerna - oh ok. mr bajaj. would u like to come to dinner with me and anurag.

anurag - whispers - prerna!!!!

bajaj - haa bilcul!

bajaj and gupta are waiting for prerna and aunrag at the restraunt. only prerna comes!

bajaj - prerna? aunrag gee kaha hain.

prerna - haa woh anurag..... kaam

bajaj - kaam karete. magar tum holiday per aayeto. he cant do work on a honeymoon?

prerna - choro naa. what are we going to eat?

bajaj - waiter, waiter.

everyone choses their choice! prerna chose a really expensive choice and bajaj has to pay so he put a face on. hahahahaahahahaahahahaha!

prerna - dinner acha ta. thankyou mr bajaj!

bajaj - mr bajaj nay. rishabh!

prerna - magar.....

bajaj - magar kuch nay. rishabh ,mera naam hain.

prerna - ok my baj... rishabh. bye.

gupta - hmmmmm. tum..... what are you up to my bajaj?

bajaj - what i am always up to. prerna!

gupta - oo haa, prerna anurag basu will become prerna rishabh bajaj!

bajaj - thats absoloutley right!

prerna and anurag go back to mumbai. so does gupta and bajaj.

meeting at the airpoet!!!!!

prerna - anurag. wah deko. baj... rishabh aur gupta!

anurag - haa to kya

prerna - anurag dont be a wuss.

prerna drags anurag to bajaj

bajaj - prerna are you goin bck 2day. u've only stayed here for 3 days.

gupta - whispers - bajaj, prerna tumareh paas hoge...... only if she goes with you.

bajaj immediatly says - nevamind comeon lets go. now come on chop chop.

to be comtinued..........

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Kewl story!!! LOL!! Prerna to Anurag- Dont be a wuss!!!
Tooooooooo good!!! Keep it coming! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is kool,especially the first dialogue.Anurag darling.Its gud keep it up.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx guys for the compliments. here is the rest of the story where the storylina actually is!

so they land in mumbai. anuarags driver had come to pick hima prerna up

prerna - anuarg, tum driver ki paas jao. main mr ba... rishabh ki saat jarahiou.

anurag - magar tum... acha.

bajaj - i will drop prerna off to your house later in the evening

anurag - ok. bye.

anuarg goes in his car and gupta bajaj and prerna go in the other. on the way,......

prerna - (COUGH COUGH, COUGH SNEEZE SNEEZE.)

bajaj - prerna. you've got a cold. main medicine likar atta hou.

he gets the medicine and he comes back in the car and opens the medicine. He feeds it to prerna. meanwhile anuarg is jealous. he's going past the chemist and he sees them. the window of their car is open and prernas hair is blowing and bajaj is moving it out of the way!

anurag - prerna. come on driver. get me home.

driver - acha acha calm it. traffic hain is duniya mein.

bajaj and gupta and prerna go to a coffe shop. gupta is at the place where you order the coffee and prerna and bajaj are ALONe on the table!

bajaj - soooo. anurag kese hain?

prerna - teek hain.

bajaj - aur tum btn join karete. what stopped u?

prerna - anurag didn;t want me to.

bajaj leans over and gives prerna a kiss. prerna doesn't reject it. it turns out to be a ten second one. it stops because gupta comes back. it wud of beeen long.

gupta - mmmmmmmmmmmm. tum kya karete. hmm?

bajaj - gupta stop it. have you got the coffees/

gupta - haa. latte for prerna. caffe latte for bajaj. aur latte for me!

they're all leaving the cafe. bajaj drops gupta of and takes prerna home. he said to anurag he wud drop her off in the evening and it was already 6.00!
they're inside the house.

they hug.

prerna - rishabh.(cuddling up to him!)

bajaj - prerna. main tumse pyaar karta hoon.

prerna - mein bhi tumse pyaar karti hoom.

anurag heard form the door because he had come to get prerna. ohhhhhh nooooooooo. prerna and baja dont know hes there.

anurag - PRERNA(CRYING). tum aur mr bajaj. disgusting.

bajaj is shocked.

to be continued...............
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys. I really need more compliments or im going to go on writing stories for this other program called kahiin to hoga. sorry but plzzzzz post more. thanx heres the story.

bajaj is shocked

anurag goes back into his car and drives away whilst prerna is running after the car but anurag drives fast. Prerna runs back to bajaj and hugs him.

prerna - bajaj, aaanannnuraaaag. sorry. main tumse pyaaaa. (sob, cry, sob, cry).

bajaj - prerna. dont cry. main anurag ko samjounga. ill make him understand. bas tum khush rao.

prerna - rishabh, can i stay here for the night. I dont think anurag will let me in his house.

bajaj - bilcul, ye tumara ghar hain.

prerna - ok. ill go and frshen up.

whilst she goes to wash up, anurag goes to prems grave.

anurag - prem beta. you aint got a mummy anymore. papa aur sirf tumara papa hain.

he drives away leaving wind chimes on his grave, at rishabhs house......



prerna - rishabh, main............ main aur tum ........ main tumse kuch khena hain.

bajaj - go ahead say.....

prerna - bout wht happened....... when anurag.....

bajaj - yes

prerna - main aur......tum.........pyaar.....nay......anurag...........mag ar......

bajaj - prerna. main tumse pyaar karta hoon, and i will alaways and always love you. no matter what.

prerna - main bhi tumse pyaar karti hoon. agar main anurag se bhi pyaar karti hoon. bajaj, main kya karoon.

bajaj - advice, tum anurag ke paas jao.

prerna - but what about u.

bajaj - ill manage without........

prerna - without me. bajaj, you wouldnt manage without someone to love and someone to love you back.

bajaj - wouldn't

prerna - i am staying here with you. besides, i wont miss anurag coz i love u too.

bajaj gives her a kiss and they..... you know what and prernas beocmes pregnant.

at the basu house...... anurag has just arrived.

anus dad - where prerna????

anus mum - anurag beta. why r u crying???

to be continued................
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Cool ..its a nice story....continue..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!! Kewl fun story! Do continue it!! I really enjoyed all parts of this:))
Plzzzzzz continue:))
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey nice story .. its kooll
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continued.....


anurag - mama, prerna (crying) prerna aur mr bajaj.

anus mum - kya anurag. kya. bolo na.

anurag - prerna mujshe nay magar mr bajaj se pyaar karti hain.

anus mum - kya. are u sure.

anurag - haa mama. i saw them with my own eyes.

anus mum - prerna kaha hain.

anurag - mr bajaj ke ghar

anus mum - does she know you know about her and mr bajaj

anurag - yes. she tried to fool me into her lies. i drove away.

anus mum - i cant believe it.

anurag - haa. hard to belive. innit.

aurag runs up to his room crying on his way.

in da morning.

bajaj - prerna. nashta.....?

prerna - haa. i'm going to be late.

bajaj - acha. tum joa aur main tiffin lekarata hoon.

prerna - thankyou.

when hes brining the tiffin. anurag and bajaj meet. anurag going to meet prerna. and bajaj is going to too.

anurag - mr bajaj. tum kay channel mein kyun,

bajaj - woh pre..... main utmse milne chata ta.

anurag - prerna se nay.

bajaj - haa prerna too.

anurag - mr rishabh bajaj. tum mere prerna ke saat hoon. but that doesnt mean that she loves you. she loves me. shes just doing it to show me.

bajaj just walks away into prerna cabin.

bajaj - prerna, tumari tif..... tum...

prerna - mr bajaj. main pregnant hoon.

anurag hears.

bajaj - kya!

bajaj runs to prerna and picks her up swirling her round.

prerna - (laughing) main kitne khush hoon

bajaj sees anurag and puts prerna down. prern then sees him too.

anurag - congratulations. divorce papers will be at your door tomorow prerna.

he walks away. prerna is sad but isnt regretting it coz she luvs em both and shes still got bajaj.

bajaj - you've stil got me!

prerna - luckily yes i have.

anurag cries and cries and goes to a plain place where a cliff is. a sad song comes on. wmeanwhile ....

prerna and bajaj are at the hospitlal for a checkup.!!

9 months later they're at the hospital with the baby. anutrag arrives theree he walks in the ward and see her with bajaj, the baby and lips 2gether. 15 seconds they were togewther. a snog!

anurag - congrats.

prerna - thanx

bajaj - shukria.

anurag - its amazing how.... how prerna tumse pyaar karti hain. tum itne rich hain. tum prerna se pyaar karta hoon ya nay.

bajaj - my anrag basu! tum mere personal life mein hoon. you have no right. get out of here and never come nar my baby.

prerna - ye tumara bacha nahin hain. humara divorce horcha kahain. abh to mere piecha karna choro.

bajaj - get out you pig.

anurag stomps out the hospital very angry.

at the basu house.

anus mum - anurag kaha hain?

anus dad - woh prerna aur mr bajaj ko congratulate....
anus mum - ohhh. woh prerna ke piecha kyun nahin chor ta?


to b continued......

thanx for the relpies!!!!!!!!!!!1111
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Posted: 19 years ago
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LOLzzzz
Quite confusing story !!! Prerna loves both eh??

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