FF The chain of destiny..epilogue on pg 43 - Page 9

Kamy, caught up with both the parts. I really feel for Bani, being trapped in such an unwanted situation but I really applaud her for making the most out of the situation around her 👏 Jai Walia is a jerk of the highest order and I am mighty glad that Bani did not even bother to look at him..the guy needs a tight slap to get down his high horse 😡

Hey Buddy 😃 🤗

Can u believe after typing a big comment my net line went off & lost the document.... ARGH!!!! Will try to write it again... 😡

Jus love ur ff.... its really Tooooooooooooooooo GooooooooooooooooooooooD!!!!! 😉

Bani Rocks 👍🏼!!!!Love the way she's treating Jai.... He shud realize the grave mistake he committed... 😉

Awww!!! Shraddha's chooooooooooo chweeeeet.... She's scared of Jai & avoids him too.... Lolzzz 1 more punishment for him.... 😉

He's now looking for Bani & even ogling at her.... Men.... 😡

Soo Uday Walia will only look from upstairs wont he tell his son how Bani took care of their house, Shraddha & offcourse him......

I think Bani shud 4give the old man a bit now... wht u think?? 😊

Bani shud torment Jai more & then I think they shud have a confrontation.... But hey buddy mind you only after tormenting him for some more tym... & Jai shud take the 1st step... That's his punishment for the mistake he committed.... 😆

Awww!!! Tony's really sweet & nice... telling Jai abt Bani & Bani abt Jai... Really sweet of him... 🤣

Cont soon.... 😃 😉

Hey Kamy..

Rocking update... 👏

Jai and bani..both are avoiding each other

Jai is being a jerk ..on top of it...UDay walia is doing nothing... 😕

JAi should be the one to fall in love with bani and woo her...for being a bad boy...

Continue soon...

wonderfulpart cant wait for jai and bani's interaction pls cont soon....

I wish sharda soon likes the jai better than bani ,, this will be fun to watch ,,
Weird story why marry her and how come she agreed to marry ?
He left cuz he didn't like the marriage ,
So sharda is 3 now?

Kamy the update was totally amazing.. I love the fact that Bani maintains her self respect and doesnt go running behind Jai .. on the contrary she avoids him. It was a good answer to Jai he needed it .. he was expecting her to be waiting for him like a typical wife. I love shraddhu she is such a cutie and her and Banis relationship is adorable.
Im glad Jai is melting towards shraddha .. why blame a child for anything she is a cutie... and Ofcourse im soo excited that hes attracted to Bani.
You have ended at such an interesting point.. I cant wait to see how Jai and Bani will start communicating with each other.. and slowly fall in love and accept their destiny 😳
👏

Hey Kamy......

What a wonderful update.... Totally loved the tension between JB and the silent treatment she is giving to Jai..... 👏 👏 👏
too goood Dear... How much I missed your writting.... 👏 👏 👏

awesome part 👏 ....
i just loved the lil shradhu 😛 ......she is sooo cute 😳 ......hope jai will soon fall for bani 😉 😆 .....
plzz cont.sooonnnnnnn 😛

Loved the update, you potrayed Bani's character so well. It's great that she is going against all teh preconceived notions that Jai had. It does seem, that he not only finds this intriguing, but her beautiful as well 😳 .

On, the whole, a great storyline. Can't wait to see how it shapes up. Hope Uday Walia acts like Cupid 😉

Please continue soon.

BD

Melonie

Thanks yaar.. they will talk.. he he he 😆

The rain
Thanks yaar.. was little busy. I'll find time to write. 😕

Dhani

Uday Walia kuch tho kareinge… sochna padega 😊

Divya
Am glad u enjoyed the update.. 😃

Divan
He is little jerk concerning Shradha.. he will come around.. 😊

Sxcdevil
The silent treatments always works.. 😉

Chandani

Thanks yaar. U made my day… take ur time in reading the other ff's thanks for the kind words.. 😊

Janu
thanks dear 😊

Perveen
Sorry yaar . I know it was short. Lekin time nahin mila.. thisstory is making my mind work extra. Can't even go to sleep without thinking about it 😕


Moony
Thanks 😊

K1234
Jai ko help chahiyein Bani se bath karne keliyien.. 😕

Iqbal neha
Thanks yaar I am gld u liked the little girl 😃

Jaibani fan
Uday was unfair to both of them. But Jai's actions can not be justified.. may be alittle whn u think of it. 😕

Anshu
Yaar thanks.. its unfair to Jai and Bani.. the child.. if u guys think .. the child is the root cause he is in this unwanted marriage.. 😕

Bt
Thanks yaar.. Bani is ignoring himbut how long? 😕

Guli
HAila!!! Thanks yaar.. they will meet 😃

Niruba

I was apprehensive with idea of a girl between them. I had a feeling some of the scenes from dobara would repeat..i'll have to be careful with coming parts. Thanks yaar for teling me u read Dobara many times. U r boasting my ego.. he he he 😆

As for the book..thanks for considering my writing to get into a book…the comments in its self is like I have already published one. Thanks all chandani u too… 😳( It isn't at all easy to write a book what I am doing here just time pass.. I am not at all qualified for that status.. thanks yarrr I am really touched.) 😃

Nishi
I'll try to update soon.. 😃

Nadia
Thanks yaar. Uday will do something I gues…. 😕

Sasila
Thanks yaar. I too cant get proper sleep thinking about this two charcters I have made mess off. I should think something and that too fast… hope I meet up with ur expectations… 😛

Pooks
Kahan thein yaar? Thanks for the feed back.. Jai is indeed a jerk 😕

Auditi
This things happen to mee too. But I am glad u took effort to write again. I should learn this from you really. I get dejected and don't try again at times…
Bani has feelings for the old man .. coming chapter will have that. Thanks yaar. I really appreciate ur comments. 😃

Msrk

We will make Jai suffer.. he he he😆. Lets see.. thanks yaar for the feed back. 😃

Amie
Thanks yaar 😊

Ragamthalam0
Weird story na? even I thought so…. He is confused so am i.. I'll do something…. Keep the comments coming. 😕

Popeye
Yaar.. he will want to befriend Shradha. Lets'c how the child reacts to all the ignorance…. Thanks for the wonderful fedd back 😃

Koolgal.
Thanks yaar. And for loving Shradhu.. 😃

Nema
Thanks yaar.. I am flattered… lets c how the tension goes between them.😊

Bdev
Thanks yaar. He is intrigued.. she is just the opposite of what his friend had said… 😉

And all the silent readrs thanks a bunch.. love u guys take care. If I do not stop this kat kat on the key board my husband will throw me out of the room.😕 So good night guys….c u soon..

love

kamy