FF: Pehli Nazar Mein Part 100 (Epi) 21/08

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#891

whoaaa guli.. great part hun.. ur ending it.. no way... but that was a sweet last part.. blush blush.. lol.. anywyaz continue soooon..

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KS_addict

@KS_addict

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Posted: 17 years ago

#892

Wow! What a part that was!! Aww they finally became one!

You're ending it already? THis was a good FF!!

Hope you feel better!!

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Zaara91

@Zaara91

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Posted: 17 years ago

#893

grt part and as usual grt FF Guli....do continue Kismat..

sonam

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Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#894

Awww...my chameli is poorly. 🤗 Hope u get well soon.
The last few updtaes were good. Bani's lil surprise was nice. 😳 Flat tyre was a good way to get Jai out of the house. She got very romantic there with the song and saree and all.

Both finally became one...7 days must have felt like 7 years ..haina Jai?😆

Lovely updates👏

Tazoo

Edited by Taz234 - 17 years ago

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

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Posted: 17 years ago

#895

Guys,

Guli-o just informed me to tell you guys that her internet for her lappy isn't working, so she doesn't know when she will update!

Regards,
Guli's messanger

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#896

Part 100

Epilogue

1 year later….

Jai: Bani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani was in the kitchen and he had heard Jai calling her!!!….. She had told Purva to watch the food on the stove!!!

Bani: I will be back!

Purva: He's not in a good mood!!!!!!!

Bani: Whats new about that???

Purva: Good point!!

She was going up the stairs! She knew what it would be about!! It was only that she had woken up in the morning and he probably didn't see her!! So wen that happens… he gets all grumpy!!!!

Jai: Bani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani: Arre I am here!! What are you yelling about??? Ur always yelling!!!!

Jai: Ur not here! And why is that??

Bani: well unless u plan to starve….. I was in the kitchen!!!! I was making breakfast!!!! Any problem??

Jai: Yes! I have a big problem!!!

Bani: And what problem is that??…

He was looking at her…. And he had pulled her closer….

Jai: U weren't here this morning!!!……

Bani: Oh man!! Here we go again! 1st u throw this big tantrum…. And then all of a sudden u get all softy!! Mr. Softy!!

Jai: Oy! Don't call me Mr. Softy!!!….

Bani: U are!!!….

Jai: I want to see u 1st thing in the morning we n I wake up!…

Bani: Oh well!!! Too bad for that!!! I have breakfast to make! I don't want to starve my family!!

Jai: What about ur husband??

Bani: Family comes 1st!!!….. then my husband!!

Jai: What? No!!! Hubby comes 1st!! I always come 1st!

bani: well too bad!!!! Cuz before family… someone took the very 1st place spot!!

Jai: who??

Bani: Someone who we all love!!!

Jai: Hmm….

She was looking at him!!!…. and he was looking at her!!!… He had come closer to her and placed a kiss on her lips……

Bani: No more of this!! Lets go down!!!

Jai: In a little while!!

Bani: Jai…

Jai: Nope! Not going to listen!!

Bani: Ur soo…….

He had held her closer and just captured her lips before she could say anything further!!!!……. She wanted to get away…. But she couldn't!! he was hugging her to tight….

She had managed to get away from him and he called her name… but she wasn't going go by him…. She had come running out from there and she was coming down the stairs fast…. And then she had barged into Jigs!!!

Jigs was looking at her… and she had an angry face on her!!!… Jai had come down and he had seen her!!!…

Jigs: Whats going on here???? And Bani why are you running???

Bani: Umm… Di….

Jigs: what umm… DI!! Don't you umm.. DI me!!… Jai why is she running around like that??? Do u have an answer!!!! Cuz I want to hear something than umm…..

Jai: Uhh….

Jigs: nope! That doesn't cut it either!!!

Bani: Di its all him!!!.. 1st he yells…. And becomes all grumpy…. And then…. He becomes this mr. Softy out of no where!!

Jai: BANI???

bani: U see!!!… he's all mad!!…

Jigs: What am I going to do with u 2???…. u guys are crazy!!

Bani: I am not! He is!

jigs: That doesn't justify of why u were running?? And Jai u should know better!! She is 2 months pregnant and u she shouldn't be running like that!!!!!….

Bani was looking down!!

Bani: Its all him!! I am going into the kitchen!!! Yell at him! He deserves it!!!!

She had walked away from there smiling… and wen she looked back… she had stuck her tongue out at him!!!…. And Jigs was looking at Jai!!

Jigs: Be responsible!! And think twice!!! Don't forget.. she needs to take care of her!!

Jai: Yes I know!!…. and how come… ur yelling at me?? She was running!

Jigs: who was making her run?

Jai: Not m!

Jigs grabbed his ear…

Jigs: Don't give me that!

Jai: Ouch!!!! Okay okay okay I am sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!

Purva: Bani bhabhi… wat did u do?? U left him there with her!!

Bani: Of course!!! I don't get yelled at!! Works out perfectly!!!!!… I love it!!!!!..

Purva: Ur so bad!!!

Bani: Yup!!!…

Breakfast was set on the table!! Jigs, Adi and the kids joined them!!!…. Jigs had learned from her mistake….. and she realized…. What kind of person Bani really was…. Even though it was Jigs that kidnapped Bani…. She was kicked out by Jai….. but the day that Bani had found out…. Bani had called up Adi and told him what had happened!

He couldn't believe it!!!! But Bani had told him… to pick her up and making sure that she stays with him!! So that way she had a place to stay! Adi was getting mad at Bani for even thinking that! After everything that she had done….how could Bani even think like that!!! But Bani told him plz!! And for her sake to do it!! Adi had no choice and that's where he had picked her up wen she was walking!! He had known everything but she didn't say anything!!!

Jigs was getting mad at Bani everytime…. She had always seen Bani and Adi talking and adi would even bring the kids over to WM!!…. Jigs got a little upset… and she was thinking that Bani wanted to take her kids away from her and everything!!…. just to get back at her!!…. but that wasn't the case!!

When Jigs had gotten mad she had blasted off.. but of course she had told Adi… and Adi gave it back to her!!… And had told her the whole truth…… about what Bani had done!!….. He had told her that should thank Bani….. that she lives here… or else… he would have never accepted her in the 1st place after everything she had done!! Jigs was shocked to know that Adi knew but he never said anything!! And Bani had literally called him so she would have a place to stay!!!….

Bani just wanted one thing from her… and was an apology!!!.. She had no reason to hate her….. but she just wanted an apology…. Jai was still pissed at her!!…. He didn't even talk to her…. but Jigs had come to WM!! Everyone was looking at her like what was she doing here?… but she had apologized to Bani!!… that's all Bani had wanted!! For a good chunk of time the family was upset… but Bani had told them not to hold a grudge… so everyone started fresh…. And today….. everyone was really happy!

Pushkar and Pia are happy!!… They are taking things a day at a time!! They come to WM often… but not too much!! Bani even sometimes goes and stays with them for a day or two… those days… Jai hates the most!! That's where he becomes even more grumpier becuz Bani isnt there!!!….. and without her… he's one lost soul!!.. But now since he's going to become a daddy… he's not going to let her go anywhere……

She was eating her breakfast at the table… and Jai had just slipped his hand under the table and he had held her hand….. She had looked at him….. And he was just eating his food.. She had smiled at this…… He had looked at her… and he winked at her!!!…. She had held it a little more tightly….. and put it right on her stomach!!!!!……. And they just looked at each other with love in their eyes………..

THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks you guys for the comments!! They meant a lot to me!!!..... Wow!! completed 100 parts for this FF!!!! Dang!.. thats a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........

In case you dont know.... but for the most part everyone knows.... I did start a new FF few days ago.... KISMAT!!!!!.... I update that one Mon-Fri!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once again thank u!😳😳

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#897

i loved it ben! Awesome FF!

JB--such a cute couple..hayeee😳

Fantastico!!👏

Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago

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Rupal

@culgal86

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#898

hey guli ...............

lovely part.............

update soon

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Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#899

That was a lovely ending. Jiggy sudhar gayi. thank god. I was wondering for a mintue why she was yelling at Bani again..and what she was doing in the house too. Chalo maaf kiya usse.😆

Jai gets grumpy if he doesn't see his patni's pyaari si soorat...yeh nahin sudhrega😆

JB are expecting their first child so sweet. Lovely way to end the story. 👏

Tazoo