FF: A Bounded Relation 2...Last Chapter PG 80

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Nazneen

@chickster

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#541

That was a beautiful end to a beautiful story. I am goign to miss reading A Bounded Relationship. I have always wished that KS had turned out thi way. But it didn't and I got to enjoy the beauty of Jai and Bani's love in you FF.

I am going to miss it terribly.

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MrsKhan-Sobti

@MrsKhan-Sobti

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#542

i jus wana say that its jus awesome!!

a wonderful ff n loved the way u ended it

do write more

will be waiting for ur nex ff

Edited by teenzs - 16 years ago

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#543

Iggy!! what is this 😲😲😲...i am a little abscent for the past like 2 updates and haila...i come back to this 😲😲😲...😭😭😭...the end...😭😭😭...haila...i loved...no no...LOVE this story...it was so good...from beginning to end...totally awesome...👏...you totally deserve a standing ovation for the work, effort and creativity you dished out for us...👍🏼...it was truly a treat to read...

i got your PM and i was like let me check but ill read the update later...since i have two presentations tomorrow...but then when i opened it...i was totally floored...the ive-fallen-and-cant-get-up kind 😆...haila jaani...i love all the relation ships of your ff...JB of course but then jai and rano, jigs and bani...it was all awesome...this ff will be greatly missed...but i do really hope that you come back with another ff...we cannot afford to lose such a wonderful writer...

now so so so sorry jaani for this choti si comment...but i have to get back to my school work before i fail this quarter 😭😭😭...love you tons and tons and tons 🤗

JAZ

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Kashish

@..kashish..

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#544

hey dil...

loved the whole story..

wow cant believe you ended it..

but still waiting for another one now!

aww he named the hotel after BAni and Rano passed with ful marks!..

aww a boy and girll krishna and arthrva..and then ganga..

so cute..

loved it..loved it...

cant stop saying that...lolz!!

this was an heavenly end to a heavenly story...........

simply wow!!!

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#545

stories need to end in some or other point... i was expecting you to end before 3 parts.. when u dint, i realised you wanted to bring the pregnancy too... no complaints... the more we get the more we are happy...

happy family... All's well that ends well.....

P.S: Thanks for acknowledging 😊

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suwas

@suwas

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#546

Perfect end of great story.👏

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#547

Jaani that was awesome!!!!!!!!!

It was very nicely put!!!!!!!!!! it rocked like anything!!!!!!!!!!!!

u did justice to it very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was fun!!... and i loved it

i know in the future... i will go back and re read it again!!!!!

becuz hey.... u cant get tired of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome job jaani!!!!!..... loved it to the core!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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pooks

@pooks

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#548

What a beautiful culmination to this story. 😊You captured the happiness of Bani and Jai beautifully. Jai being a wonderful, doting husband who acknowledged his wife's contirbution in his success and Bani standing like a rock behind her husband always. The part where Bani delievered twins and the look on both Jai and Bani's face on seeing their babies was heartwarming. And the Epligoue pretty much summed up everything and gave a fitting end to the story.

Enjoyed following this story right from the beginning. Now am waiting in anticipation for your next story😃

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#549

hey jaanu..

I am soo emotional after readin that..it was just beautifull..everything was penned down soo well..their feelings..their thoughts..their love for another..too good..Dil you are truly an amazin writer..simply loved how you told the story of KS in your style...too good..hope you write loads more...will be eagerly waitin for it..