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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
aww so cute 😳 😳
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
omg i totally.. loved this SS..
seriously.. i hope that meera arghh..
continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: davia389



just lvoed the part..
it was rockign...

nwo psl continue soooon

dav

Thanks for reading

thank u

Originally posted by: kitkat_2002

grt update...
continue soon

thnks

Originally posted by: tam2

Hey
Ur FF is awesome.... ... Meera is getting right treatment over there ... she deserves that...

Good going... ...

GJB look so cute and such a sweet family... and Meera is definately not needed there... wonder what Meera will do once she sees JB sleeping together... ... Do cont soon... ...

thnkx

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome update
loved it.
plz cont. soon

thnx

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part
cont.sooon

thnx

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

aww so cute
plz cont soon

thnx

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

omg i totally.. loved this SS..
seriously.. i hope that meera arghh..
continue soon please

thnx for reading

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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

Aww cute part! 😳
👏
Let's see what Meera does now!
Continue soon.

V...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very lovely part..now wonder what will Meera do when she sees them sleeping in each others' arm?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vedo


Aww cute part!

Let's see what Meera does now!
Continue soon.

V...


thnx for reading

Originally posted by: ofcourse

very lovely part..now wonder what will Meera do when she sees them sleeping in each others' arm?


thnx for reading
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

i am overwhelmed with response as this is my first ff.plz continue to read the parts 😛
part 3:

ganga's room
jai and bani were laying in eternal bliss when suddenly meera entered the room.she was shocked to hell to see jai and bani lying in each others arms.jai woke up hearing some noise and sees meera standing at the door.suddenly he starts yelling"how dare u bani,how dare u sleep beside me!mein janta hoon ganga ne hume force kiya uske paas sone ke liye lekin tum mere kareeb kyun so rahi ho?"bani was confused but seeing meera at the door she pretends"mujhe koi sokh nehi hain aapke paas sone ka wo main anjaane mein so gayee"meera was relieved but not 100% she was jealous she thought"kaas bani ki jaga main hoti" jai"meera chalo aapne kamre mein" meera goes and jai gives a flying kiss to bani and bani catches it and returns it back

jai's room
jai enters and goes straight to his bed"meera main bohot thak gaya hoon,mujhe neend arahi hai" meera
was dissapointed.as jai felt asleep he heard meera speaking to someone on the phone"yeh bani ka kuch karna hoga har waqt jai ke paas rehti,jai ab bhi usse pyar karte hain mujhe dar hain unhe bani ki sacchai pata na chal jaye"voice"tum fikar mat karo mein kuch karta hoon"meera "theek hai kal hum nilenge gr8 cafe at 7:00pm shrap bye".jai thought who is she talking to?

sorry for making it short


plz reply
😊
LABANI

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Posted: 17 years ago
#28

not fiar itni shii chota sa part😭

par it was rockign flying kiss?😳 haial.. he shd have run back after meera elft and ksised bani on her 😳😆

it was nice.. jb kiia citng toooo sabse age hain.. soo who sit he secret person?shil/? mohan??

pls cotinue soon mean soon samjii

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
hmm..so who is this 3rd person? Kahiin Daksh tho nahi? But i loved the way JB managed the situation..This witch has to go sooner.. 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
its not short but its very short
very nice part
n cont soon

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