I have read and currently still am reading many FF's which inspired me to write one of my own. I came up with a story and decided to write it. Please excuse my hindi words I am bad at writing them. Also excuse the font changes I dont know what went wrong. Other than that please tell me how I did with my first part!!
Part 1
Today it seemed that all the lights in the world were part of a decoration in the one and only Walia house. And why wouldn't there be? After all the great Jai Walia was getting married.
Even though Jai is only 26 he insisted that his dad, Uday Walia, would take rest and let him handle the business. Jai took his work really seriously. Even though he is a little short tempered Jai is a great person at heart. He respects his parents a lot. His mom, Krishna Walia, is very dear to him.
Jai sat in the mandap waiting for his dulhann to arrive. Adi (his bro-in-law) teased him about getting married and gave him some tips about wives in which jai took no interest in.
Jai looked very hot and handsome in a black sherwani with silver designs on the sleeves and collar. The rest of the sherwani was filled with sparkling designs. Wrapped around his neck was a silver stole.
( Jai's sherwani)
All of a sudden there was a commotion and everyone looked toward the stairway. The dulhann had arrived. Bani slowly descended down the stairs wearing a beautiful red lengha choli with exquisite designs on it. Around her neck was a beautiful shining diamond necklace as well as churia on both her hands. She looked stunning. She felt very shy and nervous thus kept her gaze on the marble floor. Her sister, Rano, was behind her, helping her get down.
Bani's lengha (just imagine a dupatta)
Bani is a very simple and beautiful girl. She is very responsible at the age of 25 and takes care of everyone at her house. Bani always put her family first. She loves her parents, Kiran and Nishikant, and would do anything for them. Bani felt very happy to be marrying jai because she knows that he is a great person and will always keep her happy, as he was her dad's choice.
Rano is 22, a very creative and curious girl. She loves college and is very interested in books. Rano loves bani very much. She always mentions to Bani that she is the best Di in the world. Rano is very sad that bani will be leaving her but at the same time happy for her.
Bani finally sat down next to Jai and slowly met her gaze with Jais face. He looked lost. When jai finally looked bani in the eye bani quickly looked down feeling shy.
The customs began from the pheres to the mangulsutra and sindoor. Bani was beaming with happiness when Jai filled her parting.
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Later bani became very emotional during the kunyadan. She really didnt want to leave her maayka. She loved her parents and sister a lot. Bani enveloped her mom into a tight embrace.
Bani (softly): Mama mein aap ko bohot yaad karongi
Tears started to flow in Kirans eyes as well, thinking about how her older daughter would be leaving.
Kiran: Bus beta...ab tumhe apne maayka se jana hoga. Sab ka, jai ka, aur apna teek se khyal rakna.
Bani slowly got out of her mothers embrace and walked over to her dad. She slowly looked up to him and remembered how much she was attached to him but now would be leaving.
Nishikant wiped his daughters tears and hugged her. He didn't want to give away his angel but had to.
Nishikant: roh mat beta. Mein tumhe khushi kuhshi apne susural jate dekna chata hoon.
Bani: Papa...apna khyal rakna.
Nishikant: Tum bhi beta, aur agar yaad aye to khabi kabar phone karlena.
Bani nodded slowly and headed over to a crying Rano.
Rano (sobbing): di...(hugging her tight) I will miss you.
Bani: Me too. Mama Papa ka khyal rakna. Aur apna bhi.
Rano: Apni iss behan ko bhool mat jana.
Bani (hitting her lightly): Pagal mein tuhme kaise bhoolongi?
Bani moved away from Rano as Krishna made her way by her new bahu.
Krishna (to Kiran): Dont worry hum bani ko ab apni beti man teh hain. Bani ab apne ghar mein khush rehgi.
Kiran: Hume aap par poora visshwas hain.
Krishna then indicated for Jai and Bani to sit in the car.
They both walk to the car after taken blessing from their elders and sit down.
Throughout the whole wedding Jai had his eyes on only one woman and that woman was not Bani.
Please comment good or bad and let me know if I should continue or not.
Index
Part 1......Pg1
Part2.......Pg2
Part 3......Pg5
Part 4.......Pg7
Part5.........Pg8
Part6.........Pg 10
Part7.........Pg 13
Part8.........Pg 15
Anupamaa
