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Posted: 17 years ago
it is ok
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys! 😛 i hope you remember me! shireen, wrote this FF and update like a year ago. well 7 months and 15 days to be exact. if i'm wrong please correct me! 😕😆 i'm here to apologise for the extremely long delay of my update. i actually wrote it about a month ago, but my comp crashed and lost all my stuff, so i had to re-write it, and that wasn't easy. plus i work/school and now i have co-op, so i'll barely be home. anyways, again really sorry for the long delay.

the last update is on Pg. 58 if you forgot what happened in the last part. 😊
so here's the update, and it's not great, but i'll try to update more often. sorry again for the delay. hope you all will understand.

Part 28:

The engagement was a grand affair. Practically everyone in the city knew about it. Pictures were posted in the paper, it was being talked about in the news, everywhere. Now all was left was the wedding.

Wedding perpetrations are in full swing now. Everyone is in a hurry with last minute things for the weddings. Guli, Taz, & Anu are having a ton of fun with all these wedding rituals. There was no sign of Ranveer and Rano yet. Jai and Bani tried calling Preet a few times, but they never came by yet.

The haldi ceremony went well. Everyone was tired, but they still had a lot of work to do for the sangeet the next day.

On the day of the sangeet, Jai got a call from Preet, and it sounded like she wanted to tell him something urgent. Jai was worried that if something happened to Rano and Ranveer. He raced over to Preet's place.

The sangeet preparations were going smoothly. The girls were deciding what to wear for the occasion. The guests started to arrive, and everyone was running around doing last minute things, and getting ready. Raashi and Natu were the ones who were ready first and taking care of guests until everyone else came down. As soon as everyone else came down, Raashi and Natu went to their respective spouses. Bani was also helping out a great deal. She wanted to keep herself pre-occupied so that she doesn't keep thinking about Rano and Ranveer.

Bani was looking for Jai at the sangeet. She wanted to talk to him to see if had any information about Rano and Ranveer. Not just Bani, but everyone was trying to look for Jai. He hasn't been home since that phone call from Preet (which nobody else knew about).

All of a sudden the lights went out. Everyone was wondering what had happened. A spot light came on yet there was no-one on stage. A song started to play.

Tarun

Jab Se Tere Naina Mere Naino Se Laage Re

Jab Se Tere Naina Mere Naino Se Laage Re

Tabse Deewaana Huwa

Sabse Begaan Huwa

Rab Bhi Deewaana Laage Re

Jab Se Tere Naina Mere Naino Se Laage Re

Anu

Thode Badmash Ho Tum
Thode Nadan Ho Tum

Thode Badmash Ho Tum
Thode Nadan Ho Tum

Haan Magar Yeh Sach Hai
Hamari Jaana Ho Tum

They started dancing with each other. Everyone was just looking at them in aww. Bani was thinking that it might be Jai, but it wasn't. Next Mohan and Meera joined in with Tarun and Anu.

Mohan

Chaaha Hai Tujhko Chaahoonga Har Dam
Marke Bhi Dil Se Ya Pyaar Na Hoga Kam
Teri Yaad Jo Aati Hai Mere Aansoo Behte Hain
Apna To Milan Hoga Pal Pal Ye Kehte Hain
Kya Ye Zindagaani Hai Bas Teri Kahaani Hai
Bas Teri Kahaani Hai Ye Jo Zindagaani Hai

Chaaha Hai Tujhko Chaahoonga Har Dam
Marke Bhi Dil Se Ya Pyaar Na Hoga Kam

Meera

Chaaha Hai Tujhko Chaahoongi Har Dam
Marke Bhi Dil Se Ya Pyaar Na Hoga Kam

Teri Hoon Teri Jo Chaahe Kasam Le Le
Mujhko Humrahi Tu Apne Gam De De
Saari Umar Hai Mujhko Dard Judaai Ka Sehna
Raaste Mein Khoyi Hai Manzil Meri
Mere Saath Jayengi Mushkilein Meri

Meera & Mohan

Chaaha Hai Tujhko Chaahoonga Har Dam
Marke Bhi Dil Se Ya Pyaar Na Hoga Kam

People started crying, or were on the verge of crying looking at Meera and Mohan. You could easily tell how much they loved each other.

Prem

Main Mangayasi Mannata Ve Mannata
Tu Jo Mile Jindadi Jannata Ve Jannata
Manu Hoya Pyar Baliye Pheli Pehli Bar Baliye
Dil Vich Aaja Aaja Ban Ke Kakaar Baliye

Taz

Tera Mere Pyaar Ranjhe Rab Nu Gavara Hain

Prem

Puchh Le Tu Puyu Kolo Munda Yeh Gavara Hain

Taz

Pyu Mera Haske Bola Munda Bada Pyaara Hain

Prem

Dil Tarsaye Muddata Ve Muddata

Taz

Tu Jo Mile Jindadi Jannata Ve Jannata
Mainu Hoya Pyar Baliye Pheli Pehli Bar Baliye
Dil Vich Aaja Aaja Ban Ke Kakaar Baliye

Tu Jo Mile Jindadi Jannata Ve Jannata

Taz & Prem

Manu Hoya Pyar Baliye Pheli Pehli Bar Baliye
Dil Vich Aaja Aaja Ban Ke Kakaar Baliye

Pia & Purva

(their' pregnant so they aren't dancing)

Jhoom Le Jhoomjhama…
Jhoom Jhamak Jhoom…
Pairon Mein Ta Ta Thayee…
Tum Tumaakk Tum…

Purva

Aye Bachchu Tu Sun Le
Mere Dil Ka Ye Order
Ab Khul Ke Jeele Tu
Koi Seema Na Border

Pia

Halka Sa Nasha Hai…
Masti Ki Wine Mein
Jeene Ka Hai Chaska
Toh Aaja Linemein
Suno Yaaron Suno Ek Raaz Gehraa
Kiston Mein Kya Jeena
Lambee Saans Lo Zaara

Purva

Muthiyon Ko Kassona Inhe Khol Do
Dil Mein Kya Rakhna Chhalak Bol Do

Pia & Purva

Gun Guna Lo Muskuralo
Zindagi Toh Sikhati Hai Yehi
Lehralo Balkhalo
Hum Qaidi Toh Nahin

Jhoom Le Jhoomjhama
Jhoom Jhamak Jhoom
Pairon Mein Ta Ta Thayee
Tum Tumaakk Tum

Naatu & Pushy

She Is A Small Town Girl
She Is A Small Town Girl

Natu

Dil Da Sitaara She Is Jogini Pitaara
He Rob-ii-najaara, She Is Dun Di Bahaara
Akh Naal Akh Daal Gal Kardi
Chhoti Ungali Pe Nachaayegi Tumhe

She Is A Small Town Girl

Pushy

Isaki Toh Shorsha Hai Tauba, Ho Gayi Mitraandi Tauba

Bhaadala Unch Sar Rakhadi Hai, Vilaayati Dance Kardi Hai
Udadi Gubbara Ye Faturi Ik Taara

Udadi Gubbara Ye Faturi Ik Taara

Da Kinaara Hai, Maalyi Di Hai Dhaara
Akh Naal Akh Daal Gal Kardi
Chhoti Ungali Pe Nachaayegi Tumhe, She Is A Small Town Girl

Sahil

Zara Si Sawwari Hai Woh
Zara Si Baawri Hai Woh
Woh Surme Ki Tarah Meri
Aankhon Mein Hi Rehti Hai..
Subah Ke Khawab Se Udai Hai
Palkon Ke Neeche Chupai Hai
Mano Na Mano Tum
Sote Sote Khawabon Mein Bhi Khawab Dikhati Hai
Mano Na Mano Tum
Pari Hai Woh Pari Ki Kahaniyan Sunati Hai

Khuda Ya Kaire, Khuda Ya Kaire

Khuda Ya Kaire, Khuda Ya Kaire

Raashi

Zara Sa Sawwara Hai Woh
Zara Sa Bawwara Hai Woh
Woh Surme Ki Tarah Meri
Aankhon Mein Hi Rehti Hai

Sahil

Subah Ke Khawab Se Udai Hai
Palkon Ke Neeche Chupai Hai
Mano Na Mano Tum
Sote Sote Khawabon Mein Bhi Khawab Dikhati Hai
Mano Na Mano Tum
Pari Hai Woh Pari Ki Kahaniyan Sunati Hai


Khuda Ya Kaire, Khuda Ya Kaire
Khuda Ya Kaire, Khuda Ya Kaire

Taz

O Jiji Kyaa Kehake Unako Bulaaoge Dulhaa Banake Jo Aayenge
O Jiji Bolo To Kyaa Kehake Unako Bulaaoge Dulhaa Banake Jo Aayenge

Guli

A-ji O-ji Hum Naa Kahenge Hum To Isharon Mein Baate Karenge

A-ji O-ji Hum Naa Kahenge Hum To Isharon Mein Baate Karenge
Sab Jaise Apane Unako Bulaate Hai Waise Hum Naa Bulaayenge
O Chhoti

Taz

Gaane Ko Tum Gaa Rahi Ho Ji Apaana Behalaa Rahi Ho
Najar To Hai Rahon Mein Lagi

Guli

Chhoti Tu Chhoti Khoti Badi Hai
Behanaa Ko Bas Chhedati Hai
Main To Yahaa Kamon Mein Lagi

Taz

Aane Do Jiji Tumhare Ji Ki Dashaa Jijaako Bataayenge O Jiji

Tony was turning a red tomato. He just chose to remain quiet and not to sing. It's extremely shy as we all know.

Everyone was having tons of fun at the sangeet. Everyone was singing and dancing and just having a blast. Eventually dadi and mausi also did a dance of their own. This whole time there was no sign of Jai. Everyone was wondering where he was. They were also starting to get worried. He wasn't picking up his phone when everyone was trying to call him. It was coming near the end of the sangeet, and there was still no sign of Jai anywhere. Not just family members, but even guests were starting to ask about him. I mean it's Jai Walia's sister's wedding. You'd think that he would be present during every function.

Bani was talking with Meera, Pia, and Purva when a waiter came up to them and gave a piece of paper to Bani.

Bani:

Umm, who is from?

Waiter:

I don't know madam. A lady told me to give this to you.

Bani:

Ok, thank you.

Purva:

Who is it from?

Bani:

I don't know.

Pia:

Well then, open it! Let's see who it's from!

Bani opened the folded piece of paper which read…

Bani:

Lakadi ki kaathi kaathi pe ghoda, ghode ki dum pe jo maara hathauda, dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda. This is…

Rano:

Lakadi Ki Kaathi Kaathi Pe Ghoda
Ghode Ki Dum Pe Jo Maara Hathauda

Dauda Dauda Dauda Ghoda Dum Utha Ke Dauda

Rano and Mohan

Lakadi Ki Kaathi Kaathi Pe Ghoda
Ghode Ki Dum Pe Jo Maara Hathauda
Dauda Dauda Dauda Ghoda Dum Utha Ke Dauda

Bani wasn't believing what was in front of her eyes right at this moment. Her lost sister and brother were singing their favourite childhood song right in front of her. This was their song which connected all three of them together. Tears were falling down her face. She was so happy today but it was so hard to believe that after all this time her sister was in front of her eyes.

Rano

Ghoda Pahuncha Chauk Mein Chauk Mein Tha Naai
Ghodeji Ki Naai Ne Hazaamat Jo Banaai

Mohan and Rano

Chag-bag Chag-bag Chag-bag Chag-bag

Mohan

Ghoda Pahuncha Chauk Mein Chauk Mein Tha Naai
Ghodeji Ki Naai Ne Hazaamat Jo Banaai

Rano and Mohan

Dauda Dauda Dauda Ghoda Dum Utha Ke Dauda

Mohan (he's referring Bani as the ghoda)

Ghoda Apana Tagada Hai Dekho Kitani Charabi Hai
Chalata Hai Maharauli Mein Par Ghoda Apana Arabi Hai

Rano and Ranveer

Chag-bag Chag-bag Chag-bag Chag-bag

Rano, Ranveer, and Mohan

Ghoda Apana Tagada Hai Dekho Kitani Charabi Hai
Chalata Hai Maharauli Mein Par Ghoda Apana Arabi Hai
Baanh Chhooda Ke Dauda Ghoda Dum Utha Ke Dauda

Rano Mohan and Ranveer were all dancing around Bani and all ani could do was cry, smile, and laugh all at the same time. She couldn't believe her eyes. After they finished singing, Bani straight away hugged Rano tightly. They were having their moment together. Later Mohan joined in and they had their moment with each other. Later Bani and Rano went outside and talked with each other. Mohan told the family who Rano was and introduced Ranveer to everyone as well. The sangeet continued and mohan was talking to Ranveer about how did they get here and all. Ranveer told them that Jai Walia was the person who brought them here and How Jai was the one who helped them.

Outside Rano was talking with Bani and they got caught up on a lot. Bani told Rano that Daksh wasn't alive and what AD had done. Rano was furious and so upset at the same time. She had a lot told Rano how this family (Jai's) had helped them and how Mohan was found and all that.

Rano:

Is Jai Walia also a part of this family?

Bani:

Yes he is. Why?

Rano:

No, cause he was the person who had brought me and Ranveer here.

Bani:

What? Where is he now?

Rano:

He went to get Preet aunty, but he might not be back till tomorrow since it's a little far.

Bani was so happy that Rano and Ranveer were back safe and sound. She was also thinking about Jai, and how much he has done for her and her family. She didn't know how to repay him. It seemed like he was some angle sent by God to bring back the lost happiness that had disappeared in her life. Or was it that he was God himself? She didn't know, but she was so grateful that she had someone like Jai in her life.

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Posted: 16 years ago
ME!!!!...............


FINALLY SHIREEN!!! god yaar, it took you seven months just to update that? not fair. you should have made it longer. but i forgive you by the sweet update. It was really cute, especially the one with rano and mohan---- too cute! and very emotional! glad that the siblings are finally together. and yes, JW is the god sent angel. 😳 mera munna. 😉😆 So my munda has come to me--- wonder what it is that i called him for. 😕 it's sad that i don't even know this. 😆 shireen, don't take another year to update again, please do soon. and i mean it. 😡 soon is soon! okay, i would normally give you songs but right now i am a little too preoccupied so i will make it up to you in the next update. teek hai?

great update rock! and thank you for finally updating!🤗

Love,
Marshmellow. 😉 -------- see, i have finally accepted it. 😆
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey shireen aka my mithai
finally u updated dear
thanx soo much
loved the update
the songs were good, and the last part of was soo touching
bani reuniting with her sis and mohan
the family is complete
and jai is not there, but will be back soon
plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon dear
and plzz dear this dont take months to update
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Posted: 16 years ago
um sireen.. ek saal.. wat is wrong with u.. well half a year.. anywayz great part yaar.. nice try u think i wouldnt noice but u put in 6 songs to make the update look bigger.. lol.. awwwnn finall rano and bani meet.. hope rano joins in to make JB together.. continue sooon yaar.. and i mean SOON.. nt half a year later.. lol..
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey atleast u updated
thanku for that
and its really a gr8 part
hey but 7 months time
u could have made it longer
andyways it really nice
so finally rano n ranveer are back
so next part i want jb
cont soon
and plz don't take ages for next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow.
i had some catching up to do myself..still slightly confudeled, but you can expect that from me😆
wonderful update yaar👏👏👏
loved how you did the songs thing and everything👏
and last sentence was rocking!😃
continue soon!!
Edited by ~devi~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

hi shireen

i know its my first comment. im not a silent reader, but i read this ff in one go :). i really feel for bani. she lost everything in life and had been raped! im glad she became a bit more open for jai... so when will the love part begin? :)
the last part wasnt long nah, just lots of songs.. u know thats cheating :P but it was really touching, cuz the family is complete!
cont soon (and no more cheating, no songs but a real part :P )

SA

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Posted: 16 years ago
Shireen sweety...seriously yaar bahutttttttt dino baad yeh ff update kiya...i completely forgot that i was getting married 😆 Meri behna Guli dear ki bhi shaadi hai tony ke saath!! 😳

Loved all the song sequence...main mangyasi mannata ve manaata...haiiiiii 😳 Really nice song. The lakdi ki kaathi song was sweet too. Bani finally met up with her brother and sis! 🤗
Shireen dear gonna agree with the rest...too many songs in the update...want a longer update from u next time round! No cheating ok!

Lovely update

Tazoo
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey hi....hey thanx 4 the update
it was really nice...good part
hope bani will accept jai soon
cont soon

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