ff Rightfully Mine part16pg 47, end pg 48

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Nirmala Shanmugam

@Nimmie1`2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#301

Hi Kamy,

I loved this part! Jai is trying to get B to come home. Poor B is totally confused at the moment ;(

I hope these grown up babies will sort out the mess they are in!

Do update soon ;)

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#302

aww jai is sooo funny!! 😆

me soo loving this!! 😳

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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#303

why does jai always get thirsty at midnight, it's one of the symptoms for diabetes 😆....

First he let her go and now he forces her to stay....Jai behaving like typical villain in movies who captures the heroins in a room and blackmail them 😆...but this villain is a passionate one 😉
great part kamy......loved it!!!!!!

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Hima

@j&b84

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Posted: 17 years ago

#304

hi kamya wht a lovely part, wow bani in saree 😉 😉 bani is so sweet to go compliment tony and basanti for their work 😛 😛

Jai wht to say about him 😆 😆 😆. He better say sorry to bani before he does anything else 😡

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#305

Hmm...so Jai is hell bent on not letting Bani leave and has behaved like a bully towards her..albeit a cute one that is 😆 😆 inspite of all the little moments, like when he tosses her on the bed and then throws the pillow away and hugs her and teases her in the morning, he should not forget how he has hurt her and he needs to apologize to her for his past behaviur 😡

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Rupal

@culgal86

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Posted: 17 years ago

#306

hey..................

awesome part................

jai and bani were great especially their bantering...........

hope they clear the misunderstanding soon.............

update soon

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Swathi

@swathi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#307

Kamy, it was a wonderful and lengthy (and thanks for that again) part to read.

I really liked that Bani kind of checked up on things with Tony and appreciated him as well. It was actually quite interesting to note that Jai jumped at the opportunity of entertaining the delegated and detaining Bani at Walia house. The other good thing was the way Jai continues to indulge Bani in her fight with him.

Looking forward to read the rest !
Swathi

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL
omgoomgomgomgomgmomgommogmg!!!!! i am sooooo excited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a part yaarrr!!!!! thanks honey😳

i could just kiss jai!!! he was just brilliant!!!!!! the whole part i was just cheering him.......yess!!! he's fighting for his woman!!!!! yesSs!!!!! 👏 ohhh he is a stubborn man...

loved the bedroom scene where he just throws the pillow and just hugs her and falls asleep!!!! 😆 i am glad the scene is being liked by all

i am going to read this part again and again and again until u post the next part!!! it was just brilliant! thanks.... ooooooo.. i m flattered 😳

loved every single line and single scene!!!! wowow!!!!!! gotta go read it again!!! i am too excited right now!!!! hahahahaha

pls pls pls pls pls pls pls post sooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!11 👏

i'll try yaar. but havent written anything.. i'll have to rake my brain once i sit down... thanks again

love

kamy

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#309

piku--- so the night dress scene does reminds you of good times 😊
ragamthalam, sheena, divan--very apt song.. i love that song yaar,
khushboo_2006, nema, momtaj, ofcourse, btkr, Indian_godess, nir_janu, miss-diey, tropa, nimmie, Guli, niruba, j&b84, pooks, yousha, culgal, jaanu, and swathi......
thanks yaar for the sonderful feed backs..
guys i know u are angry at Jai for not apologizing give him time yaar he might do it 😉
all the silent readers out there daaaaaanx.
loveu all. take care.
kamy 😊

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Pooja_fren

@Pooja_fren

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Posted: 17 years ago

#310

Hey Kamy,
read ur whole part
its simply lovely
Jai and Bani are too cute
Poor they both of them miss eachother like hell
when the 14th part finished i was really sad i didnt want to finish it.
Bani and her way of sleeping, its adorable and Jai gains most from it.
I didnt like 13th part there high egos but on 14th u made my day oops i should say my night
Eagerly waiting for the next one. I am being so impatient
Thankssssssssssssss

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