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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#71

Hai Divan,

I am reading your FF for the first time and have to admit what a beautiful writer you are 👏 .

Everything was beautifully descriped...Bani, her two kids, their little world and then her difficulty in coping with the changes in her life 😳

Jai looks to be a nice person but I think he is moving a bit too fast for Bani (not that I mind 😆 ) 😳 😛

Pls cont soon 😃 😃 😃

P.S. I would give you 10 stars😳

Edited by melonie - 17 years ago

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#72

😆
Wondeful update Divan.. 👏 👏

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pptm469

@pptm469

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#73

Hmmm... Nice update..
I know someone mentioned that Jai is moving too fast.
I think the pace is perfect. Please continue soon.. Don't make us wait for a long time for an update

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#74

wonderful part pls cont soon........

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pomegranate

@pomegranate

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#75

are you sure You were never published??? cause your an awsome writer..

I love the last part veryyy funny.

nwayz continue soon can't wait for the next one.

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divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Heartbreak
jai in a towel 😉

just for you...you know we never get to see that in KS.😳

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divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: 100%-princess
are you sure You were never published??? cause your an awsome writer..

I love the last part veryyy funny.

nwayz continue soon can't wait for the next one.

I have no intention of publishing anything...this is just for fun. Glad you like the SS.

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#78

Mamaji is trying very hard, but kudi phasti nahin hai..but hamara Greek God will conquer all, dheere-dheere...
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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#79

Kanta it looks like our Bani rani has started checking our hero out and thinking of his six-packs 😉 😆 😆 .....not bad at all.....a very nice way too begin with a new relationship 😳 .....hope Rano puts some more senses in her Di's bheja....can't wait for karuna's arrival..she will definitely speed up the whole JB thing.....update karo jaldi 😃

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