An Indecent Proposal-Epilogue-pg10 - Page 6

Originally posted by: *Guli*

haila

that was awesome!


but i am still jealous!!!!

Guli same here....I am getting soooooo jealous as days pass by😛

it was gr8......loved every second of it........
both parts were written fantastically......i love your writtin style....this one just bowled me over....lol
moon=)

👏

wow... truly fabulous....I just loved the way you end the story......amazing..... loved every part of it.... happy that you are posting the epilogue 😃.

fab part.u are witing an epilogue I am waiting for it.

Dunno how I missed this but all I can say is "Haiiiiiiii, I am jealous of Bani...kya style hai Jai ka - cool dude...very nice Shoba!!!!
👏

it was a great end..

👏
it was rocking..
jai and meera -brother and siater perfect relationsip...

great end ... i just loved ur ff. why dotn u give a epilogue i knwo it was a ss but still if u wnat.. as the ff was realyl good.

saath saath what about pai joke..? 😉
u r a great writer

davia

Akka,
Me want another ff just for myself
Regards
Anju

You guys all crack me up!! Everyone wants a SS or FF for themselves... 😆

If I write one for every one's birthday or anniversary (even if I know all of you are very special) I would be writing 24/7 -

But I truly appreciate all your comments.

Lot's of love,
-- S

Lovely FF Sho 👏 👏 👏 and such a wonderful Birthday present 😳 . AM sure Jaz must be over the moon.

Coming to the FF, another electrifying and rocking one from you, dealing more with the chemistry of the pair and the understanding.

Loved reading it and am sure others have also enjoyed it.

😊

sheenu!!!...wah wah...i loved it just loved it...haila...im all 😍...picturing all the parts with JB and the intensity...wow...it rocked...

...lol...jai is cheesy, i mean come on, drunk in your eyes...the biggest desi cliche...😆..i thought jai was better then that...but apparently...all guys head over heels for a gal is just a big a duffer as teh next 😉😉😉...haila...why did bani have to say that it was all for the money...uff...😡...this girl can do lots of chapar chapar...😡😡😡...that kiss...oh man...it was hot...and i mean hott!!!...but then when he pushe her away and told her to literally get lost...oh man...i was all 😭...for get bani...i was bawling...😭...haila...she sent everything back, with a plan to pay back the money she took for rano...haye...kitni thoughtful hai bani...aww 😳...haila...he came back...usse toh aana hi tha...😳...and this time....a real proposal...as steamy as it may be, it rocked...👏...

sheenu...thank u thank u thank u...omg omg just loved it...😃...but i agree with the other readers...there is an epilogue right 😳...pretty please...pretty pretty please...i knwo...its selfish to ask for more since u gave so much...but i cant help it...i wanna see JB in the future with kids and all that good stuff...if u have time...pretty please...pretty pretty please 😳...

love you loads 🤗...

JAZ